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Banginbengali Senior Member
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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 7:42pm | IP Logged
OMG Eviffie back with a bang AGAIN!! Wink Lol lmao...so cute!!
 
Okay I am gonna say what I keep on sayin...you just blow me away...the emotions you portray is so raw...love it!! Clap
 
Poor Arnav baby can't find his Khushi (literally) lol...the way he was searchin for her ...callin her...questionin himself why he was so rude to her was so nicely written!! Kind of glad Khushi left...he finally gets the pain! Wink
 
The medow scene...God it was so beautiful Clap...Arnav tellin Khushi to come back n her sayin no...was just oh so sweet..her bein at peace n Arnav seein how happy she was...uff...n the line let me go, I wanna be free...n Arnav sayin no...seriously BRILLIANT!!
 
Arnav fallin to the ground was another favorite part for me!! Him finally realizin he can't live without Khushi was a sweet realization...n the search like how he thought of the mandir first n then her house...Khushi sayin that no  i wann astay here n Arnavs line "I dont care" Clap Big smile..I just absolutely loved this line n not wannin to play the 20 question game lol...uff Arnav pickin Khushi up n makin up his mind to h*** with everythin hes not gonna let Khushi leave... I died!!Tongue
 
Eviffie amazin OS as usual...nice heart wrenchin take...n I miss you...haven't talked to you forever...hope all is well n you gave your mom great company lol!! LOL thanks for the PM!! <3 yea!!


Edited by Banginbengali - 08 April 2012 at 7:47pm

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 7:48pm | IP Logged
beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 7:55pm | IP Logged
that was really wonderful!!!!
Arnav has his priorities just apt here.

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
wow! loved it!!! sorry, I've been trying to stay away from IF on weekends at least! lol trying, the key word here. ahh so the stone-hearted finally realized his love fro khushi eh??!!! awe... it's sweet how he says to hell with 6 months contract, he will keep her forever. love. veryyy beautifully written! :) 

ps. thanks for the comments on mine. i'm nowhere close to your writings though! :)

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 8:29pm | IP Logged

Beautiful!

Very well written!Clap

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 9:38pm | IP Logged
nice update, the dream seq was great, continueSmile

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 9:46pm | IP Logged
Great OS!!
I thought that thats what Khushi did. Take Nani's permission and go stay at Laxmi Nagar for a few days, but Arnav found her again in Shantivan. I wanted him to go to LN to look for her.
This fic fulfilled that desire

Yuks

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 10:01pm | IP Logged
it was beautiful dear...pliz continue n cud u add me to ur pm list for further updates..pliiiz

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