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NoSuchThingAsForever: Diary Entry Pg11 26thApril (Page 10)

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 3:02am | IP Logged
hei love the part
it was to awesum

..Ashi.. Goldie
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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Wish_Al

Originally posted by RheaKSG4eva

Originally posted by Wish_Al

Originally posted by RheaKSG4eva

Ashi: "u started it on Armaan and my request and ur gonna write the complete story for us if no one else"

EXCUSE ME! Phir main kaun hoon?
Fine.. Jaa Afia.. I won't comment.. I won't ask u to write.. Hmph.. Angry


<font size="1" color="#333333">Rhe you were gone for Houseful 2 thats why i didn't message you</font>
<font size="1" color="#333333">i wanted you to come back & read it here on IFOuch</font>
Theek hai naa... I'm not angry for that.. I'm angry coz of Ashi's comment up there! :\


<font size="1" color="#333333">Rhe thats between you & her sort it out</font>


Okay Im sorry for that but I didnt mean it in a wrong way and u know that :)
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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..Ashi_KaJen..

Resss :D

Tu toh badi tez nikli partner :P


Okay since I lack time Im editing the res. from the cell itself.

So yea I loved the part. needless to say.
U writing is simple short and sweet. just like u (excluding short) ;)

I really enjoy how cyincal Riddhima is about love and now her destiny has made her cross paths with someone who is gonna knock some sense into her.

And this Romeo Juliet reminds me of our Obssession KKHH ;)

and Armaan's speech..thatt was WOAH...kaha se churai? ;) LOL
Kidding.

In and out a very good episode

keep writing
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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..Ashi_KaJen..

res


I cant believe u actually targetted me for not edittng my reserves :O

Im pathetically busy Afiaaa! Hmmphhh I iz Gussa with Juuu
Badda Waalaa..Jaa Katti!

and im not edittng but qouting the res. since my phone is acting gay with edittng the comments. dont mind..tere hi comments zyada ho rahe hai :P

Okay So like always I loved the part...
from them meeting in the Cafe to the walk..the confession ..the dropping off to home..
especially the window scene was really cute :)

just a lil suggestion...
Just slow down the pace of the story a bit or make the scenes more descriptive so the pace of the story will be balanced.
like in the first part itself Riddhima first dislked Armaan and they bickered. then the show down in class and then he asks her for a walk and she surprisingly agrees and whatever happened after that..u getting the point?

just make the scenes more descriptive of their feelings and whats going on in their minds..give more reasoning for the acttons and reactions.
the plot will look much more relatable.
sorry if that was a lil harsh. bt since ur putting so much into this ff so i thought of suggesting u this to make it even more better


take care :)

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
Awesome FF.
Pls continue soon & add me in your PM list.

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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 6:32am | IP Logged
   


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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 10:19am | IP Logged
amazing ff
and nice part
cont soon

harneet <3
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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
very nice part!
so Armaan nd Riddhima r friends now! gr8!!!
i think Armaan has fallen 4 her!
cont soon
thnx 4 pm

~Sunita~

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