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FF- I am alone-chapter 6 (Page 11)

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Posted: 22 April 2012 at 1:07am | IP Logged
i luvd dz part,,so clean and undstndble,,farah i tink u can stop it in style,,bcz dz z a poetic version t wud b nyc to end it but with a last and beautifl poem,,,,,,,,,, EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedClapClapClapClapStarStarStarStarStarStarStar

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Posted: 22 April 2012 at 1:09am | IP Logged
A short & nice FF. I think that mayb Khushi can give him a second chance bcoz now Arnav is a changed person now.
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yaar i must say you wrote so well
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Posted: 22 April 2012 at 5:31am | IP Logged
Wow yar.its too gud.post d nxt chap soon.wish kushi's rply s +ve
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Guys.. Thnaks for the so sweet comments..
N to kno khiushis answer plz keep reading..
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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 6:02am | IP Logged
 

Chapter 14: why?

 

Recap: arnav ask Khushi to go back with him

 

Khushi was softened by arnav's words but she was apprehensive that he may do the same mistake again in the future. She bristled at him with fury.

 

Khushi:

 

Why do you think I will still go back with you after everything you have done?

How do you feel after giving me so much pain, for u, it must be fun?

 

Why do you miss me every night and day?

When you know I won't return, when you know there is no way

 

Why is there a need to draw a chart or write?

When you know in the war of love, you will not win the fight

 

Why do you always try something to gain back my trust?

When you know our love has already gone rust

 

I'm sorry to disappoint you but what I said was not what I feel

I do not care if my words heal your wound or it kill

 

I'm not returning with you and that's it

Because for you, throwing someone out is just like a computer's mouse to click

 

And ya, Mr.Raizada it isn't your nightmare anymore

I'm leaving you no matter you kneel down and touch the floor

 

I know it is already too late at night

But I would like if you leave now, the door is on the right

 

Arnav was very heart broken by Khushi's words and he now realized how she must have felt when he ordered her to buzz off but he did not gave up, he counter that he won't leave until she forgives him and will be willing to revert back with him.

 

Precap: under the freezy and rainy night' wheeze

 
Farah <3


Edited by arshi314 - 23 April 2012 at 6:04am

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so nice part, beautifully written... loved itClap

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 10:45am | IP Logged
It was a short but a nice update , juz waiting when will Khushi 4give Arnav I mean he was wrong but still a second chance can b given rite

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