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SS Bcoz There's Nothing Arnav Can't Do Ch7p27 28/7 (Page 2)

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 6:36am | IP Logged
ROFL, Man Utd deewani. Ttyl!

The first part is so soulful. I LOVE the bit about comparing ASR and Arnav and how ASR would emerge stronger to stop Arnav from coming to the forefront. I think you bought out his guilt perfectly. It's so intense and deep, yet not melodramatic. This is what the CVs need to show once ASR comes to know of the truth, this is how he needs to repent.
The bits about him hating and getting disgusted with the ASR side of his are fabulously written as well, and the way you described the void in his life without her is so sad.
Loved it! Update sooonnn!!! <3

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 6:37am | IP Logged
hey drish how r u doing dear Hugits been so long catching up with u   Hug u and SS its totally surprise for me ShockedBig smile i loved both chap just read it u seriously wrote wonderfully Clap now u r my one of fav ss writer cant' wait for next upd want regular upd miss lazy bee TongueLOL Hug keep rocking u r seriously very talented  Hug

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 7:15am | IP Logged
DRISHH! Hug

Do you know how amazingly written this is? <3

Because there is nothing Arnav can't do.
I read the title and actually thought that this was gonna be a fun SS.
But the first part man...totally caught me off guard! :l

So agonizing it is! :'( 
The way you've put it made my heart ache for both of them! :'(

All the regret, all the guilt, all the blandness, all the disgust, all the torture, all the pain portrayed so damn beautifully! <3
The realisation that he had failed her, wronged her in a way that he could never be forgiven, that he had broken her (maybe beyond repair this time), the misery when he thought of his life as hell without her, the IF ONLYS...all made my heart freeze.

But that last line, despite myself, made me smile meekly. :)
Because there was hope.
Because there was nothing that Arnav could not do. :)

Brilliantly written! <3

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 8:35am | IP Logged
So you found a title :D :D w00t w00t
I like it very much.

Are these 2 chapters your 2 OS's? Or different ones? 

Either way, I shall re-read and reply <3

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 8:41am | IP Logged
wowww
thank god u changed it into ss
love u writing

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 8:46am | IP Logged
Nice one.. Loved it..

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 8:52am | IP Logged
Its very nice.. read both parts together.. pls continue..

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 9:02am | IP Logged
you've opened the SS already Party m so happy u r continuing this! Embarrassed thanksss soo much Drish Hug  

the title - ofcourse i like it Clap its exactly wot i want to see in the show...cant wait for the next update...but exams are more important, so take ur time...good luck and take care Hug

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