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SS: ASR Junior's SECRET DIARY! Part 10 Pg 134 UPDATED!! (Page 11)

Jasleen Goldie
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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
Omg this is so cute! Awesome job!!!

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Aquiline IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
That was so superb SmileyStar! Really enjoyed reading it! And everything was so...pointed and hilarious! I could really see the child and his baby expressions at all the Wonders of the Worlds around him! * chuckle* and I loved everything and especially the ironical quips too!
Singh Raizada? How will I show my face in public?!! Rabba ve and the staring and the poor kiddo in the middle, forgotten! Dad's no 'chotey' but he might give the kid a 'stubble burn' (Wonder if Mum has some... *wink*)...and Big Bad Evil Shyamo...oooh!! And Dad's still on his lappy, eh?
Loved it, dear! Cool imagination...and though you had a backing source, the credit for creating Ashar Singh Raizada is clearly yours! 
Loved this kid. You should write more on his Adventures in my Family...*sigh* if I had been there, i would have cuddled and cooed him all day long. Wonder what the very intelligent and observant Ashar would have thought of me then... *wink*


Edited by Aquiline - 08 April 2012 at 1:00pm

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
Awsome I laughed through the whole thing!!!!

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ayshuri14 Groupbie
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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
that was too funny ... got a smile plastered on my face now 

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aanu23 Goldie
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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
This was damn hilarious gal... Wish you had continued more... Like meeting HP nani Laxmi buaji LOL

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
Oh Gosh - This was a brilliant piece of writting.. i can clearly imagine - this is what it must be like for the poor baby.

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Ravuri Senior Member
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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
OMG!! you cracked me so much. I am just laughing like an idiot

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
hilarious, they provide a lot of cudley toys which Khushi plays with ROFL ROFL, and the rabba ve in the car LOL LOL

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