That was so superb SmileyStar! Really enjoyed reading it! And everything was so...pointed and hilarious! I could really see the child and his baby expressions at all the Wonders of the Worlds around him! * chuckle* and I loved everything and especially the ironical quips too!
Singh Raizada? How will I show my face in public?!! Rabba ve and the staring and the poor kiddo in the middle, forgotten! Dad's no 'chotey' but he might give the kid a 'stubble burn' (Wonder if Mum has some... *wink*)...and Big Bad Evil Shyamo...oooh!! And Dad's still on his lappy, eh?
Loved it, dear! Cool imagination...and though you had a backing source, the credit for creating Ashar Singh Raizada is clearly yours!
Loved this kid. You should write more on his Adventures in my Family...*sigh* if I had been there, i would have cuddled and cooed him all day long. Wonder what the very intelligent and observant Ashar would have thought of me then... *wink*
Edited by Aquiline - 12 years ago
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