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OS: Don't Leave Me Alone! (Page 9)

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 7:49am | IP Logged
awww so sweet Arnav missing Khushi!
LOVELY OS SMITA! Heart
ONE OF MY FAVORITES RIGHT NOW! Clap Clap Clap

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 7:51am | IP Logged
though I dont want khushi to forgive him so easily, I just loved the OS. U r fab smitar.

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 7:53am | IP Logged
awesome update smitha
loved itEmbarrassed
beautifully written
hope  something like this happen in future
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 7:54am | IP Logged
Awww this was sooo sweet... Love your OSs, they just make me happy! Thanks for the PM! 

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 8:04am | IP Logged
awesomeee os!!!! i need to find new adjectives i think to appreciate ur os Smile!!!! oh my all ur os rock ya!!Smile

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 8:07am | IP Logged
"He tried sitting in front of the laptop, to let work, his ever demanding mistress charm his mind away from his wife" - Hahah this was my favorite line! Laptop se kardo inki sagaai! Love how you mixed in the laptop! I adore the way you described both of their pent up emotions coming out, and khushi cried for a good hour! It was a good decision on her part to leave for a couple of days! Good for her to get her thoughts together and good for arnav for obvious reasons, run after her, realization! He climbed in through the window, sho cute! And her book, I am wondering ( the show!) what she keeps putting in there and whether or not it's gonna play a big role, but it certainly did here and I'm happy - again khushi made him laugh! Uh-oh, too long comment! I loved this os! :D

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 8:13am | IP Logged
aww..

that was brilliantly written..

amazing job...

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