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MG ff "BE INTEHAH" teaser on 27,update nxt mnth (Page 3)

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 9:40pm | IP Logged






EmbarrassedPart 3Embarrassed


Geet quickly changd into her newly found kurti nd
jeans...she stood in front of the huge dressing
table...she quickly took 1 pair of silvr earings...put
thm on her ears..,,quickly brushd off her hair...teid
thm in a cute ponny tale...got sum kohl on her
eyes...tht enchantd her green hazal eyes...She once again lookd herself in the mirror...satisfeid wid
her luk...she took her lappy,phone,purse...othr sum
important stuff in her bag...nd stormd off outside
her room...


Geet startd climbing down the stairs
screaming...'dai ma...dhanno...jaldi mera khana
doo...'


Geet reachd the dinning table...nd lukd
evrywhr...no1 ws there...


 Geet...'ajeb hai...sab gaye kaha...'


She lukd at her watch...


Geet...'shoot...it's 8:15...daima toh babaji se meri
shikayat kar rahi hongi...bt yeh danno madam
kaha hai...??'



Suddenly there ws sum sounds cuming 4m
kitchn...she wnt 2 the kitchen nd opnd the
door...nd the scn she saw caused her 2 pop her
eyes out of the sockets...n thus shaping her mouth
in an 'o' form...


 There dhanno...nd the mali of their house aka
dhanno's hubby aka lucky were both holding 1
genda flowr lost in each othr's eye...


Geet wnt 2wards thm...wavd her hand betwn
thm...bt they won't evn buldge...geet surpressd
her giggle...


Geet...'dhannnoo...'


 No response...


Geet...'luckyyy...'


No response...


 Geet...' dhanno...mera paratha...'


No response...


Geet..'dhaano...tu yaha apne pati k saath romnce kr
nd mera khana italy se aa jayega...'


 
Dhanno..' ji didi...'


Geet lost her cool nd screamd...'kya ...ji didi...'


The luvbirds trance broke nd thy lukd down
embarassd...


Dm (dai ma) came running in the kitchen hearing
geet's scream...


 Dm..'kya hua...beta...r u okk...???'


 Geet...'main toh thik hu...bt in dono ka kuch keh
nahi sakte...

she chuckld a bit...


 Dm frownd a bit nd said...'matlab...???'


 
Geet...'arey...pure romeo-juliet ban chuke hai...yeh
dono...yaha main bhuk se mar rahi hu...nd in dono
ko apne rmnc se fursat hi nahi...'



Dm smild...nd said...'tere hi match-making ka natija
hai...ab sambhal...'



Geet poutd nd said...'agr inki shadi nahi karwati
toh kya karti...jab bhi dono ko mauka milta yeh
kitch nd yeh gardn se...ek duje ko romntic luk
dete...agr main inki shadi nahi karwati...toh mere
pote-poti bhi yahi scn dekh k bade hote...'



 Luky nd dhanno were dying out of embarassmnt
there...


 Luky...'didi mujhe kam hai main chalta hu...'
He literally ran out of kitchn...


 Dm nd geet laughd alaud...


Dhanno...'didi ...woh yeh raha apka paratha...ap
bahar bethiye main lati hu...'



Geet ws going 2 answr whn her cell beeped...she
saw a text 4m yash...her best frind...tht read...'IT'S
8.30...KAHA HAI TU...HUMARA PRESENTATION
SUHAH K 9 BAJE HAI ...RAAT K 9 BAJE NAHI...JALDI
AA...'


Geet almost chockd the juice which she ws
drinking while reading the text...she quickly
stuffed a parata ...nd startd running 2wards the
door...


Dm...'areeh...geet pura khana toh kha jaa...'


 Geet...'nahi dm...agr ek minute aur late hua toh
yash mujhe kaccha...nahi...isbar masaala laga k
chaba jayega...'


 Dm...'bt geet...'


By thn geet ws out of dm's sight...dm sighd nd
turnd around...suddenly felt geet hugging her 4m
behind...geet kissed her chick...nd quickly had a
spoon of the mixture of yogurt nd suger...tht ws
on dm's boul...


Geet..'luv u...'


Dm..smild nd said...'bst of luk...'


 
Geet ran outside nd got herself seatd in her car...nd
drove off 2 her cllg 2 c sum angry frnds...


Precap



Geet..'kaun tha wo...???'



Maan..'kaun thi wo...???'


Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 21 December 2012 at 1:06pm

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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 10:27am | IP Logged
awesome ... Clap
 next soon plzz... Smile

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EmbarrassedPart 4Embarrassed



Meanwhile in maan's house...


 Maan ws standing in the middle of a room...The
room ws furnished wid a punching bag...sum
brokn bricks...were lying here nd there...2 large ice
bergs were waiting 4 their future 2 b unleashd... Maan ws breathing heavily...1 drop of sweat
traveld 4m his neck...2 his large shouldrs...then 2
his broad chest...nd vanishd on the border of his
blck trausers... Maan punchd in the air...nd a memory flashd in
front of his...eyes... 'hum jaldi ghar pohoch jayenge...' He again kickd in the air...again 1 memory came... 'sab thik ho jayega...' Maan performd a sumar-sault...again he
rememberd sumthg... 'hume kuch bhi ho jaye...humare bacche ko bacha
lena...'
Suddenly maan broke 2 ice bergs at once...nd closd
his eyes 2 block the memories tht has been
haunting 4m sooo long... He took his towel nd cleand his face ...he lukd
back once..nd went 2wards his room 2 take a bath
nd 2 calm his mind...


At 9:55am...


Xcel cllg...



A guy wearing a blue geans nd a red t-shirt ws
walking 4m 1 place 2 anothr...restlessly...


 Yash...'aj yeh geet mujhe marvayegi...aise hi xm
me mark nahi ate...ek hi mauka hai yeh
presentation...agr isme maine garbar ki toh mujhe
passmarks bhi nahi milne wale...mummmyyy...'



A cubby-luking grl eating chips said...'yash chinta
nah le...apni geet hai...aa jayegi...'


Yash...'pinky tu toh kuch bol hi maat...teri
sugession pe hi maine geet ko iss project ki sari
jimmedari di..'



Pinky...'toh...agr tujhe koi passmarks dila sakta
hai...woh geet hai...samja...'


Yash...'woh toh hai...'


Xactly tht time a car zoomd in cllg parking area...


Pinky...'yash...woh dekh...geet aagayi...xactly on
time...'


Geet hurridly came out of car...came running 2 the
corridors of the cllg...


Geet..'yash...tujhe mujhe jitna pitna...marna
hai...presentetion k bad maarna...ab jaldi chal...'


3 of thm...almoat ran 2 the room whr the
presentations ws held...thy seatd thmselves among
the othr members of their grp...which
consistd...annie... meera...


Annie..'geet kaha thi tu...???'


 
Meera...'tune toh jan hi nikal di...'


Geet giggld a bit saying...'bad me batati hu...r8 nw
shw tim...'
nd winkd...


 The presentation program started...all the guests
were givn introductions...who were all cuming 4m
biggest business firms... As the programe...continud...all grps presentd their
projects on how a product cn b reachd 2 the
remotest area of India...1 member of evry grp
presentd their research on behalf of the whole
grp...


Geet representd her grp giving an asome
presentation wid utmost confidence nd ability...there ws a spark in her eyes...her
walking...talking ...evrythg...ws admird by evry1... At last of all presentations...the results were
announced...nd as pinky said earlier...their grp ws
among the top 3...as a result evry membr of the
grp'l b recieving sum xtra marks at their final
result... All five of thm came out of the room...laughing nd
congratulating each othr...



Yash's happiness knew no bounds...he ws literally
crying in ovr happiness...in xceitmnt he hugged
meera nd said...'oohhh...god...m soo happyy...'


Meera ws 1st shockd thn angry...she at once
puched him...nd slappd him t8 on his face... All of thm fell silent...yash put his on 1 hand on his
cheek...which ws nw red...


Yash poutd lik a kid nd said...'dhakka de diya kafi
nahi tha...slap krne ki kya zarurat thi...woh bhi itne
zor se...'



All of thm burst out laughing...while yash
continued 2 cress his cheek...


Pinky...'yr...ab toh party bnti hai...'


Annie..'ha ha...woh toh hain...'


Yash...'yr chal...mere ghar chalte hai...mom kisi k
shadi me gayi hai...nd bro nd dad r as usual ...in
desh ki raksha krne k task me...sooo...m alone...'



Meera raisd her eye-brow nd said...'kyun...akele
ghr me hume kyun le jana chahta hai...????'


Yash...'oh ...hello...tum 4 ho...nd main ekela...izzat
toh mere khatre me hain...'



Meera laughd nd said..'woh toh hain...'


Geet...'accha tum sab jao...yash k ghr... main aur
pinky taj se khana kharid k aate hain...okkk...'



All of thm agreed... yash,annie nd meera went 2
yash's house in yash's car...nd geet...nd pinky sat
in geet's car nd stard going 2 taj...


 Maan ws reading the portfolio of xcel cllg...suddnly
his stomuch growld in want of food...


Maan...'damn...i m hungry...'


He quickly switchd on his lappy...nd stard finding
4 the bst italian restaurent...he found out taj hotel's
3rd floor italian restaurent ws bst...he changd in a
blck shirt nd blue jeans...took his wallet nd bike
keys...nd wnt outside...


Maan came downstairs nd saw evrythg ws nw in
plce...


Maan..'nakul...'


 Nakul..'yess sir...'


 Maan..'i m hungry sooo i m going oitside 2 get
sumthg 2 eat...'



Nakul..'bt sir...give me 2 minuties...i'l make
sumthg...'



Maan...'no...i bored...i jst wanna get sum fresh air...'


Nakul..'bt sir...ur secuirity...'


 Maan...'nakul...don't worry..i'l jst bring the food
here nd i'l b fine...'


 
Saying this he wnt outside...sat on his bike...feed
the location in his navigator...nd stared his
journey...2 taj... Maan ws stopped on a traffic...he has heard abt
delhi's traffic...he ws kinda pissd off...


At the same traffic signel...geet's car came on a
hold beside maan's car...suddenly geet saw sum
red roses...nd smild


Geet...'pinky ek minute ruk...main kuch flowrs
kharid k aati hu...'


Pinky...'bt geet...abhi singal green hoga...' Geet...'nahi..abhi time hai...main aati hu...' Saying tht geet got out ofthe car nd stard
dissgussing wid a kid who ws selling the
flowers...


 Maan ws pissd off wid this waiting...he luking here
nd there...suddenly sumthg's sound..or sum1's
sound caught his ear...


He saw 1 grl buying sumthg 4m a small grl...she ws
laughing full-heartdly...her melodious voice ws a
heavn among these horns nd screaming ppl...she
ws buying sum flowrs...may be she checking evry
small thg abt the flowrs...maan tried a lot 2 c her
face bt her back ws 2wards him...he could c her jhumkas plying here nd there...finally she bought
sum flowrs..pulld the kid's cheek...nd sat inside the
car which ws beside him...the car had blck-
glasses...so he couldn't c her face...the car startd
nd vanishd in front of his eyes...


The signal ws turned green nd ppl were snouting
on maan 2 move his bike...maan's trance brook
4m ppl's shouting...nd he startd his bike..nd zoomd
ahead...


Maan...'woh thi kaun...????...jiske khayal me main
aisa ghum gaya...'


He left his weird taught...nd took his bike on a full
speed...2 reach taj...passing geet's car... Maan reached taj hotel first...geet reachd there aftr
a few moments... Maan wnt into the lift of the hotel nd pressd 2
numbr...he stard 2 c his new blckberry
phone...geet nd pinky wnt into the lift talking abt
the masti ...thy'l b doing in yash's house...geet
pressd the numbr 5 ...the lift reachd on 2nd
floor...maan..saw the numbr on the lift's screen...nd startd 2 go out luking in his phone...he pushd geet
a bit...nd said...'srry...'...widout luking bck...


Geet heard the srry...it ws may b the most
muculine voice she evr heard...thn she smelt the
most delicious colongue...she lukd upto 2 c who
this guy ws...mny ppl were entering the
lift...pushing geet more behind in the lift...she saw
a guy wearing blck shirt nd blue jeans,...she could only c the bck of the guy...she wntd 2 c the guy bt
the door of the lift closd...


 She ws still luking at the lift's door...still being lost
in the strong voice nd strangr's smell which ws still
in the lift...


Pinky shook her a little nd said...'kya hua
geet...???...kaha kho gayi...??



Geet came out of her trance nd said...'kuch nahi...bs
aise hi...tu bol...kya bol rahi thi...'


Pinky again startd her blabbering...


 Geet thought...'woh tha kaun...???...jisme main itna
kho gayi...??'


She left the weird feeling nd concentratd on wht
pinky ws sayinggg...


Precap...


Geet..'kamina kahika...'

Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 21 December 2012 at 1:07pm

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LOVED IT
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Nice ff...
Could u pls pm me da updates :)

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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
srry sweety...m nt giving any pms...bt i'l tell the date whn i'l update...okkiiee...

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