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EmbarrassedPart 4Embarrassed



Meanwhile in maan's house...


 Maan ws standing in the middle of a room...The
room ws furnished wid a punching bag...sum
brokn bricks...were lying here nd there...2 large ice
bergs were waiting 4 their future 2 b unleashd... Maan ws breathing heavily...1 drop of sweat
traveld 4m his neck...2 his large shouldrs...then 2
his broad chest...nd vanishd on the border of his
blck trausers... Maan punchd in the air...nd a memory flashd in
front of his...eyes... 'hum jaldi ghar pohoch jayenge...' He again kickd in the air...again 1 memory came... 'sab thik ho jayega...' Maan performd a sumar-sault...again he
rememberd sumthg... 'hume kuch bhi ho jaye...humare bacche ko bacha
lena...'
Suddenly maan broke 2 ice bergs at once...nd closd
his eyes 2 block the memories tht has been
haunting 4m sooo long... He took his towel nd cleand his face ...he lukd
back once..nd went 2wards his room 2 take a bath
nd 2 calm his mind...


At 9:55am...


Xcel cllg...



A guy wearing a blue geans nd a red t-shirt ws
walking 4m 1 place 2 anothr...restlessly...


 Yash...'aj yeh geet mujhe marvayegi...aise hi xm
me mark nahi ate...ek hi mauka hai yeh
presentation...agr isme maine garbar ki toh mujhe
passmarks bhi nahi milne wale...mummmyyy...'



A cubby-luking grl eating chips said...'yash chinta
nah le...apni geet hai...aa jayegi...'


Yash...'pinky tu toh kuch bol hi maat...teri
sugession pe hi maine geet ko iss project ki sari
jimmedari di..'



Pinky...'toh...agr tujhe koi passmarks dila sakta
hai...woh geet hai...samja...'


Yash...'woh toh hai...'


Xactly tht time a car zoomd in cllg parking area...


Pinky...'yash...woh dekh...geet aagayi...xactly on
time...'


Geet hurridly came out of car...came running 2 the
corridors of the cllg...


Geet..'yash...tujhe mujhe jitna pitna...marna
hai...presentetion k bad maarna...ab jaldi chal...'


3 of thm...almoat ran 2 the room whr the
presentations ws held...thy seatd thmselves among
the othr members of their grp...which
consistd...annie... meera...


Annie..'geet kaha thi tu...???'


 
Meera...'tune toh jan hi nikal di...'


Geet giggld a bit saying...'bad me batati hu...r8 nw
shw tim...'
nd winkd...


 The presentation program started...all the guests
were givn introductions...who were all cuming 4m
biggest business firms... As the programe...continud...all grps presentd their
projects on how a product cn b reachd 2 the
remotest area of India...1 member of evry grp
presentd their research on behalf of the whole
grp...


Geet representd her grp giving an asome
presentation wid utmost confidence nd ability...there ws a spark in her eyes...her
walking...talking ...evrythg...ws admird by evry1... At last of all presentations...the results were
announced...nd as pinky said earlier...their grp ws
among the top 3...as a result evry membr of the
grp'l b recieving sum xtra marks at their final
result... All five of thm came out of the room...laughing nd
congratulating each othr...



Yash's happiness knew no bounds...he ws literally
crying in ovr happiness...in xceitmnt he hugged
meera nd said...'oohhh...god...m soo happyy...'


Meera ws 1st shockd thn angry...she at once
puched him...nd slappd him t8 on his face... All of thm fell silent...yash put his on 1 hand on his
cheek...which ws nw red...


Yash poutd lik a kid nd said...'dhakka de diya kafi
nahi tha...slap krne ki kya zarurat thi...woh bhi itne
zor se...'



All of thm burst out laughing...while yash
continued 2 cress his cheek...


Pinky...'yr...ab toh party bnti hai...'


Annie..'ha ha...woh toh hain...'


Yash...'yr chal...mere ghar chalte hai...mom kisi k
shadi me gayi hai...nd bro nd dad r as usual ...in
desh ki raksha krne k task me...sooo...m alone...'



Meera raisd her eye-brow nd said...'kyun...akele
ghr me hume kyun le jana chahta hai...????'


Yash...'oh ...hello...tum 4 ho...nd main ekela...izzat
toh mere khatre me hain...'



Meera laughd nd said..'woh toh hain...'


Geet...'accha tum sab jao...yash k ghr... main aur
pinky taj se khana kharid k aate hain...okkk...'



All of thm agreed... yash,annie nd meera went 2
yash's house in yash's car...nd geet...nd pinky sat
in geet's car nd stard going 2 taj...


 Maan ws reading the portfolio of xcel cllg...suddnly
his stomuch growld in want of food...


Maan...'damn...i m hungry...'


He quickly switchd on his lappy...nd stard finding
4 the bst italian restaurent...he found out taj hotel's
3rd floor italian restaurent ws bst...he changd in a
blck shirt nd blue jeans...took his wallet nd bike
keys...nd wnt outside...


Maan came downstairs nd saw evrythg ws nw in
plce...


Maan..'nakul...'


 Nakul..'yess sir...'


 Maan..'i m hungry sooo i m going oitside 2 get
sumthg 2 eat...'



Nakul..'bt sir...give me 2 minuties...i'l make
sumthg...'



Maan...'no...i bored...i jst wanna get sum fresh air...'


Nakul..'bt sir...ur secuirity...'


 Maan...'nakul...don't worry..i'l jst bring the food
here nd i'l b fine...'


 
Saying this he wnt outside...sat on his bike...feed
the location in his navigator...nd stared his
journey...2 taj... Maan ws stopped on a traffic...he has heard abt
delhi's traffic...he ws kinda pissd off...


At the same traffic signel...geet's car came on a
hold beside maan's car...suddenly geet saw sum
red roses...nd smild


Geet...'pinky ek minute ruk...main kuch flowrs
kharid k aati hu...'


Pinky...'bt geet...abhi singal green hoga...' Geet...'nahi..abhi time hai...main aati hu...' Saying tht geet got out ofthe car nd stard
dissgussing wid a kid who ws selling the
flowers...


 Maan ws pissd off wid this waiting...he luking here
nd there...suddenly sumthg's sound..or sum1's
sound caught his ear...


He saw 1 grl buying sumthg 4m a small grl...she ws
laughing full-heartdly...her melodious voice ws a
heavn among these horns nd screaming ppl...she
ws buying sum flowrs...may be she checking evry
small thg abt the flowrs...maan tried a lot 2 c her
face bt her back ws 2wards him...he could c her jhumkas plying here nd there...finally she bought
sum flowrs..pulld the kid's cheek...nd sat inside the
car which ws beside him...the car had blck-
glasses...so he couldn't c her face...the car startd
nd vanishd in front of his eyes...


The signal ws turned green nd ppl were snouting
on maan 2 move his bike...maan's trance brook
4m ppl's shouting...nd he startd his bike..nd zoomd
ahead...


Maan...'woh thi kaun...????...jiske khayal me main
aisa ghum gaya...'


He left his weird taught...nd took his bike on a full
speed...2 reach taj...passing geet's car... Maan reached taj hotel first...geet reachd there aftr
a few moments... Maan wnt into the lift of the hotel nd pressd 2
numbr...he stard 2 c his new blckberry
phone...geet nd pinky wnt into the lift talking abt
the masti ...thy'l b doing in yash's house...geet
pressd the numbr 5 ...the lift reachd on 2nd
floor...maan..saw the numbr on the lift's screen...nd startd 2 go out luking in his phone...he pushd geet
a bit...nd said...'srry...'...widout luking bck...


Geet heard the srry...it ws may b the most
muculine voice she evr heard...thn she smelt the
most delicious colongue...she lukd upto 2 c who
this guy ws...mny ppl were entering the
lift...pushing geet more behind in the lift...she saw
a guy wearing blck shirt nd blue jeans,...she could only c the bck of the guy...she wntd 2 c the guy bt
the door of the lift closd...


 She ws still luking at the lift's door...still being lost
in the strong voice nd strangr's smell which ws still
in the lift...


Pinky shook her a little nd said...'kya hua
geet...???...kaha kho gayi...??



Geet came out of her trance nd said...'kuch nahi...bs
aise hi...tu bol...kya bol rahi thi...'


Pinky again startd her blabbering...


 Geet thought...'woh tha kaun...???...jisme main itna
kho gayi...??'


She left the weird feeling nd concentratd on wht
pinky ws sayinggg...


Precap...


Geet..'kamina kahika...'

Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 21 December 2012 at 1:07pm

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Nice ff...
Could u pls pm me da updates :)

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srry sweety...m nt giving any pms...bt i'l tell the date whn i'l update...okkiiee...
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EmbarrassedPART 5Embarrassed


Maan lukd around evrywhr...nd saw it ws thai
quisine...he again checkd in his blck-berry nd saw
the italian quisine ws on 3rd floor...he slapped his
head wid the phone...nd wnt 2wards the stair 2
reach 3rd floor...


Meanwhile geet nd pinky reachd 5th floor ...thy
placd thier order nd ws waiting 4 their
food...suddenly geet's phone rang.,... She took out her phone 4m bag...nd receivd it
widout evn seeing the caller ID...


 Geet..'han...dm boliye...???'


Dm...'kaha thi tu...??? Tera project kaisa gaya...'


Geet...'ohh...dm..it ws awsome...we rockd...apko
pata hai...we r among the top 3'


Dm...'i knew it...mera pyara baccha...i m proud of
u..'


Geet...'thank u...dm...luv u...'


 Dm...'accha...ab bol ghar kab aa rahi hai...tere liye
tera favourite blck forest cake...banaungi...'



Geet...'nahi nahi...dm...abhi maat banana...hum sab
yash k ghr ja rahe hai celebrate krne...main ghr
aake apke sath banaungi...plzzz...'


Dm...'accha acha...jaldi ghr aana...'


 
Geet..'okkk..dm...byeee...luv u...'


 Dm...'byyyeee...bacchaa...tc...'


Geet put the phone down on the table...shortly
their food came all packd...thy took their food nd
left 4m there...


 Maan ws waiting 4 hs food...sudeenly he spotted
sum guyz wearing blck suits...he concentratd on
seeing the guyz faces ...He almost chockd the soft-
drink...he ws drinking...seeing 1 guy...He
instantly recognizd him...He quickly turnd
around...nd his instinct only said 1 thg 2 him...tht is 2...'RUN'...He quickly gathrd his stuff nd
stormed out off the 3rd floor...


Pinky nd geet came out of the hotel...suddenly geet
rememberd sumthg...


Geet...'shit...pinkss,...main apna cell bhul gayi...'


Pinky..'omg...kyun...kaha...kaise...???'


 
Geet glard at her...nd said...'chup kr...upr hotel me
reh gaya shayed...'


Pinky ...'ab kya...??'


Geet brought her car-key 4m her bag nd said...'yeh
le...car parking lot se bahar nikal k rak...main abhi
ayi...'


Pinky,...'accha jaldi ana...'


Geet...'han...han...'


 Wid tht geet again enterd the hotel...2 get her
phone bck...


Maan rushd outside the hotel...nd almost ran 2 the
parking lot 2 get his bike...He hoopd on his
bike...nd startd it..2 get out of there as soon as
possible...


Geet rescued her phone bck 4m the hotel...nd ws
cuming bck...She lukd around nd saw her car on
the othr side of the road,...she startd crossing the
road...


Suddenly a bike passd her in a lighting
speed...nd as a result...she fell on the mud
pool...she ws drenched in mud...she ws shockd 4 1 sec...thn quickly got up...she removd the mud 4m
her face...nd sw on her left who on earth did this 2
her...


Maan stopped his bike on hydrolic break...which
ws running on 80 miles/hour jst a moment
ago...he knew he did sumthg wrong...he lukd bck
2 c a grl in a mud pool..


The grl stood up quickly nd
removd the mud 4m her eyes...nd ws luking at him
wid murderous luk...he couldn't c her fac due 2 mud...he ws going 2 help her...bt he saw sum blck
cars behind her...he mistook the cars 2 b
following him...he again lukd at the grl who ws
nw approaching 2 him...he agin startd his bik nd
zoomd off 4m there...2 save him...


Geet saw a guy on a bike luking at him...she knew
he ws the 1 who did this 2 her...she ws jst going
2 sue him...bt bt bt...he jst startd his bike nd
went off...W*F...he jst took off...doing this 2
her...how dare he...???


 Geet shoutd on top of her voice ...'kamina
kahika...galti ki hai srry toh bolta...'



Ppl around evrywhr ws luking at geet lik she ws
4m planet mars...geet noticd this nd said...'kya
hai...????.koi shw chal raha hai kya...???...kisi
ladki ko kabhi kichad laga hua nahi dekha...????'



Geet thought ...'sach me...aisa toh maine bhi nahi
dekha...'..
.


She lukd around nd saw evry1 luking at
her...she quickly gathrd her thgs...nd ran 2wards
her car...nd evry1 present there blurst in laughtr...


 Maan ws on his bike...he calld...mr.rathore...


Maan..'hello...mr.rathore...hello...


Ravi...'haan ,,,,,maan...bolo...'


Maan...'i saw thm...'


Ravi...'wht...???...whr r u...????'


 Maan...' i ws in a hotel...i saw thm there...'


Ravi...'OMG...get the hell out of there...'


Maan...'i m nt tht dumb 2 stay there...i m reaching
my house in sum minutes...'



Ravi...'gud...r thy following u...???'


Maan lukd behind 4 a sec nd said...'nope...nt nw...'


Ravi...'fine...reach ur house ...we need 2 talk...'


 
Maan..'fine...'...


he cut the line nd reachd his house in
few secs...


Geet enterd her car luking lik a mess...4
once...pinky couldn't recognise her...pinky lukd
carefully at her ...thn burst into laughr...


 Pinky...'omg...hahaha...yeh kaise hua geet...????'


Geet gave a dangerous luk 2 pinky...tht ws enough
2 shut her up...


 Geet...'start the car nd mere ghar chal...'


Pinky...'bt hum toh...'


Geet again gav her a murderous luk...nd pinky
gulpd her saliva...she startd the car...nd soon
reachd geet's house...





Precap...



'kichar ka badla kichar...'


Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 21 December 2012 at 1:12pm

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