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MG ff "BE INTEHAH" teaser on 27,update nxt mnth

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
heeyyy..cuties...sweetiesss...maaneetians...nd gurtians...i hav been a silent reader 4 a long time ...so ab bhut chara...soo all jutis nd chappals r welcum...nd plzz tell me should i continue or nt...soo here goes...





EmbarrassedProlougeEmbarrassed


it's 5:00 am...



A tiny bit of sunrays...start peeping into a hugemention.the mention...ws royal itself.Having a
huge corridor,the living room ws enchantd wid
various kind of rich paintings nd
sculptures.



Howevr the mention wsn't set up in a proper way.There were boxes of different sizes
lying all around the living room.The whole house
was in pin drop silenc...xcept 4 1 room...



There ws light cuming 4m 1 room of the house.the
room ws well-organized compairing wid the rest
of the mansion.there were few boxes here
also...lying lazily...



A guy wearing his vest nd track pants...ws
unpacking the boxes.Evry muscle of his hand ws
reflexd whn he reachs 4 a book in the box...nd
thus placing it on the shelf.Suddenly he found a
picture which ws half burnt by fire in the box.A
faint smile appeard on his perfect M-shapd lips.He ws admiring the photo...there ws a knock on the
door.



His smile ws instantly replacd by anger.He said in
cold voice
"nakul,u knw k mujhe mere study me
kisika ana pasand nahi..."


Nakul "srry...sir...bt he is here..."


 
He sighs nd says "fine...tell him 2 wait...i m
cuming..."




Precap
   "i knw...i knw ...evry tim a new nam...a
new identity...wht's the nam this time'



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Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 10 May 2013 at 6:16am

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EmbarrassedINDEXEmbarrassed




DancingProlouge pg 1


Part 1 pg 1Dancing


DancingPart 2 pg 2


Part 3 pg 3Dancing


DancingPart 4 pg 3


Part 5 pg 4Dancing


DancingPart 6 pg 4


Part 7 pg 5Dancing


DancingPart 8 pg 6


Part 9 pg 7Dancing


DancingPart 10 pg 8



Part 11 pg 11Dancing


DancingPart 12 pg 13



 Part 13 pg 15 Dancing


DancingPart 14 pg 19




Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 28 December 2012 at 2:09pm

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interesting..
continue soon

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congooo for the new ff...
great start dear...
cont sooonnn...Smile

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guyzzz i'l b updating evryday...so no pms...

Nw tell me want 1 nw or tomorrow...???

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Part 1




After keeping all his books...& the photo frame
on the shelf...he proceeded 2wards the door.
Giving 1 last luk 2 his study...nd being content wid
his work...he got out of the room.



He startd
walking to the long stairs that ws connectd wid
the living room... The living room which ws pitch dark a few
minutes ago...ws nw decoratd wid bright lights
which ws eluminating 4m the large
shandelier ...hanging 4m the centre of the celing
of the room...



Climbing down the stairs he saw a middle-agd
man...probably late in his fiftys waiting 4 him... Nakul ws trying 2 move the boxs 2 1 side...4 free
movemnt of the 2 men...


He said...'nakul...bring...sumthg 4 the gr8...ACP
RAVI RATHOR...nd 1 blck coffee 4 me...



Nakul...'yes...sirr...'


Ravi 'okk...tht ws rude...btw hw r u young

man...'


 He lukd at ravi wid a sarcastic smile nd said...'wht
brings u here this early...???'



Ravi...'no hellooo...no...hiii...sraight 2 the point...'
& laughd a little nd added...'u r geeting ruder...'


He bends a little...aftr taking a box...he
startd...unpacking it...thn said...'i told nakul 2 get
u sumthg 2 eat...nd u r telling me i m rude...huh...'




he surpressd a small laugh...nd said...'u still didn't
giv me my answr...y r u here...????'



 Ravi smild...nd shook his head nd said...'u knw y i
m here...u hav 2 start a new lif...'



He lukd bck at ravi...nd stood staight...saying...'i
knw i knw...evrytim ...a new name...a new
identity...wht's the nam this tim...????'



Ravi passd sum papers 2 him nd said...'maan...it's
maan singh khurana...'


 Maan took the papers...nd said...'hmmm..,..classy
nam.,...much better than last tim...'


Ravi chukld a little nd said...'nakul'l b needing sum
help in cleaning this house,...i'l b sending sum
serventss...


 Maan nooded...


 Ravi again lukd at him nd said...'u knw how
impotant this is...'


Maan...'who cn knw bettr than me...'


Maan took a
seat on the europian sofa...nd said...'wht's the
story this time...???'


Ravi...'u were born here nd movd 2 london...ur
family i mean ur mom nd dad yash nd simran singh
khurana...were dead in an accident...nw u r bck
in delhi...in ur home...nd nw continuing ur
studies...'


Maan gave him a small smirk nd said...'hmm,...nic
story...kisi film se liya kya... '


Ravi smild a little and said ...'u should knw all the
details...btw hav made ur admission in the best
cllg of delhi...the xcel cllg..nd my son also studies
there...'


 Nakul brought sum snacks 4 ravi nd 1 blck coffee 4
maan...Maan took the coffee...nakul placd the othr
snacks ...nd wnt bck 2wards the kitchn...


 Maan ws going through the papers nd
said...'hmmm...my clss starts 4m 2morrow...'


 Ravi took sum cookies nd said...'yess...i hav gave
ur report 2 thm...tht u were needed here 4 ur family
business ...tht's y ...u r joining in mid-term...'


 Maan...'okkk...this is it thn...'


Ravi...'yess..kind of...i'l b wid u on ur first day at
cllg...'


 Maan...'i don't need a baby-sittr...i cn tak care of
myself...'


Ravi...' i knw tht maan...bt i wnt u 2 meet my
son..may b u 2 becum gud frnds...'


Maan...'wht's the need of all these...????..".he rose
4m his seat nd said...'whn nothg is going 2 last...'


 Ravi sighd nd got up... Ravi...'i knw maan...bt...'


 Maan...'there is no but in my life...i thk ur job is
done nw...u cn go...'


 Ravi...lukd at maan nd said...'fine...i m leaving...bt i
m nt stop cuming here..'
he cukld a bit...nd
said...'okk...byee...young man...srry maan...tak
care...'



 Wid tht ravi wnt out of the mansion... Maan ws luking at his vanishing figure,...nd turnd
2 luk 4 nakul...


 Maan...'nakul...nakul...'


Nakul...'yess sir...'


 Maan...'mr.rathore has arrangd sum more servents
4 the house,...thy'l b cuming in sum
minutes...clean the house nd arrange evrythg...'


Nakul...'okk...sir'


Maan...'i m going 2 my gym...evrythg should b
done...b4 i cum bck...'


 Nakul...'yess ...sir...'


Wid tht maan left 4 his gym nd nakul stard the task
askd by his mastr who ws nw calld...


MAAN SINGH KHURANA


Precap


 'aap apne pati k sath romnc kijiye...nd
mera khana...italy se plane me aajayega...'


Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 21 December 2012 at 1:03pm

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