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FF:Arshi~Please forgive me (Page 9)

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Posted: 23 May 2012 at 6:57am | IP Logged
Itz tooo goood
so continue writing i m waitin fr yr nxt update...lov u fr ur intersting work

So update the nxt part ASAP

Luv u

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Posted: 02 June 2012 at 11:09am | IP Logged
too good, read all the 8 chapters in one go. update soon. as it is more than a month now, your last update was 28th april. story is interesting do not stop, continue  please it is a request.

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Posted: 02 June 2012 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
very nice updates.. loved it..continue soon pl

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Posted: 03 June 2012 at 2:21am | IP Logged
Good story
Khushi has always had to suffer eventhough she was just as mucha victim as anjali
please continue soon

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Posted: 04 June 2012 at 2:50am | IP Logged
ClapClap luvd it!!!!pls do pm me once ur done with da next...btw am happy dat arni z being torturd a litl!!!! it shudnt b easy for him...aftr all wat he has done to her...

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Posted: 04 June 2012 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
Part 10

Arnav wanted Khushi to forgive him at any cost. He took the first step which was the entry in the house but there is a long way to go.
It was time for dinner. Pooja's mom called Arnav and Khushi to eat.
Arnav calls Khushi.
"Honey its time for dinner, lets go eat!!"
"Listen you-" Khushi said as she pointed her finger at Arnav
"oh stop it sweetie" said Arnav as he grabbed her hand which was pointing a finger at him. He pulls her towards him and before he tries to hug her, Khushi pushes him away. He turns her around to make her see Pooja's mom standing right in front of her.
"oh my god!! You guys take so long just to come to the dinning table!! Hurry up!"
"ok we're coming!!" said Arnav
Arnav and Khushi went down the stairs holding hands. Pooaja's mom follwed as she blushed seeing their love for each other.
"look khushi aunty has made your favorite aloo puri for you!!" Arnav said with excitement.
"wow!! Thank you soo much aunty" said Khushi
"Khushi can i feed you?" asked Arnav
"uhhh..."
"oh comon khushi.. please" said Arnav as he fed her a big piece of aloo puri that she couldnt even finish
As Khushi was still trying to finish the piece in her mouth Arnav shoved another one in her mouth. Khushi couldnt even say anything since her mouth was full of food. Finally she was able to talk after few mintues
"stop it Arnav" whispered Khushi
"I'm so sorry honey i thought you were hungry so i kept on feeding you" said Arnav.
"Just stop it enough is enough" Khushi said angerly.." aunty we're done thanks for the delicious dinner"
"oh my god, i ate alot!! I need to go for a walk"said Arnav as he held his stomach.
"Khushi betia, why dont you accompany him" said Pooja's mom.
Khushi and Arnav went for a walk as they were walking they discovered a park. They quitely sat down on one of the benches.
"Khushi I need to talk to you" said Arnav
"I dont wanna hear anything" said Khushi as he got up to leave and Arnav got up to stop her and just when she was about to leave thunder striked and she hugged Arnav out of fear and they had their rabba ve moment. Khushi was hugging Arnav really tight and her eyes were closed too. Arnav felt Khushi's fast heart-beat.
It started raining. Khushi broke the hug and ran away from Arnav as she was running she twisted her ankle and before she fell to the ground Arnav grabbed her
"Khushi are you okay?" asked Arnav
"yes I'm fine" said Khushi
"No, you're not. You cant even walk" said Arnav
"Dont worry I'll manage" said Khushi
"Just stop it Khushi!!!" yelled Arnav as he picked her up in his arms and walked back to the house in the rain. They were lost into each other's eyes. Not paying attention where they were going. Both wished they could go on like this forever

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Posted: 04 June 2012 at 9:36pm | IP Logged
loved the update arnav force feeding her so cute and the walk so sweet loving it thanks for the pm



Edited by dumas - 04 June 2012 at 9:36pm
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Posted: 05 June 2012 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
Loved it.

Update soon.

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