PH FF - This Love : Chapter 1 - Page 1 - Page 2

classyandsassy

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice update & plz add me 2 ur pm list 😊

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Aashifa

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luv.Harshiti
isnt it related to khushi story,,,\>>>???

yes it is I mentioned this at the beginning as well. But its going to be adapted and changed for PH😆

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182291

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: curledup

yes it is I mentioned this at the beginning as well. But its going to be adapted and changed for PH😆

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aisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

luv the upt

and a new and fresh ff

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Scribbler M

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Posted: 12 years ago

Great start 👏. . . . . .I loved the way you expressed Prem's anger 😡 and pain and Heer's confusion 😕. Even in the FF you could feel the strong chemistry b/w them 😍...haye, those days...hmm, awesome start. 👏 👏 😊

Its nice to see you here. 😃 Welcome back to the forum...and thank you for the FF. 😃

Please do add me to your PM list. Thank you.

Take Care.

Shwetasri 😊

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Divya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awsum. ArHi and Premeer the most eternal Jodi. 4th line Khushi is mentioned u need to make it as Heer. =D

"Main main kya khushi?" he mimicked her stuttering.
Awsum. i really loved the way it was wrote on premeer. ArHi and Premeer have diff effect even if the story line is same.
Even i have posted some of my works their. response was awsum. So Premeer and ArHi factor is HIT. =D
do add me to ur PM list. =D Edited by divya4salmanyk - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

Like it love it...

do add me to ur pm list..

continue soon!!!

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