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ok guys this is my 2nd one shot on ArVi os
basically the inspiration came from listening to the song ishq sufiana 
this os is based after Arjun-Purvi have realized their love for each other and are now standing at a very crucial stage in their life.
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LcRpuB9qBjw link to the song enjoySmile

Rab ki qawali hai ishq koi Dil ki Diwali hai ishq koi
Mehki si pyaali hai ishq koi Subah ki laali hai ishq
Girta sa jharna hai ishq koi Uthta sa kalma hai ishq koi
Saanson mein lipta hai ishq koi Aankhon mein dikhta hai ishq

Arjun Kirdloskar-the name itself boasts of pride and success, but she had changed him, changed him so much that life without her smile and chattering was impossible. Her funny tactics to bring her parents closer or her making weird faces behind his back had suddenly become a part of his life. She was shy yet confident, outspoken yet traditional, sensible yet sacrificial.

 At present she entered the hall wearing a brick red colour sari, her lips twisted into a tight and forceful smile, her eyes displaying pain and sadness. He was surprised with her presence or one can say shocked. How can someone be so audacious and brave enough to see the love of their life with someone else?

 He was angry and furious when she had made him promise to accept Ovi, but her determination and expressionless face scared him. He was sure there was no arguing back, and her oath had made him welcome Ovi in his life.


Mere dil ko tu jaan se juda kar de Yun bas tu, mujhko fanaa kar de
Mera haal tu, Meri chaal tu Bas kar de aashiqana
Tere vaaste mera ishq sufiyana Mera ishq sufiyana, mera ishq sufiyana
Tere vaaste mera ishq sufiyana Mera ishq sufiyana, mera ishq sufiyana

As she made her way through the crowd, he felt as if his breath is caught in his lungs. His chest pained to see her so helpless and vain. He knew she loved him and will never fall for anyone else, but her gratefulness towards her aai would never let her accept him.

She stood far in the corner away from him, away from the crowd and silently shed the tears that were ready to flow through her big dove shaped eyes. His eyes not leaving hers and his soul dying to see the Tigress Purvi so vulnerable. On feeling a strong gaze upon herself she looked up and for a second her eyes met his, but before he could read the naked eyes she turned her face around.


Sochun tujhe toh hai Subah Sochun tujhe toh shaam hai
Haan manzilon pe ab toh meri, ek hi tera naam hai
Teri aag meri jalti, koyle se meera banki
Khwaabon se aagey chal ke hai tujhe bataana
Tere vaaste mera ishq sufiyana Mera ishq sufiyana, mera ishq sufiyana
Tere vaaste mera ishq sufiyana Mera ishq sufiyana, mera ishq sufiyana

She silently wiped of her tears and indulged herself in some sort of conversation with the guests, thus avoiding direct contact with him. He could not believe that she loved him and was yet ready to let go off him, for the sister she never met.

On hearing her forceful laughter, he remembered how she had jumped with joy during the Holi day, her face glowing due to the musical laughter and her eyes gleaming with joy. That was the day when for the first time he had given his feelings a name-LOVE. Yes he was in love with her.

 She was the hope  which had converted the covetous AK into a kind hearted Arjun. He was so lost in his thoughts about her that he had to be snapped out from his dreamland, to continue with his engagement ceremony. How he had dreamt of this day with Purvi but today she was here to be a part of this celebration, which was more of beratement for Arjun.

Befor he could slip the ring in Ovi's finger, he saw her disappearing from the crowd. With each step that she took away from him, he died a thousand deaths. It seemed like his heart was broken into pieces and he was going to die due to the suffocation of being away from her. Without caring about the promise he had made, he rushed from the hall leaving a shocked Ovi and the rest. He made his way through the whispering crowd and reached the garden to see her standing with her back turned towards him, gazing at the stars as she silently made some wish.

 

Saath-saath chalte-chalte haath chhoot jaayenge Aisi raahon mein milo naa

Baatein-baatein karte-karte raat katt jaayegi Aisi raaton mein milo naa
Kya hum hain, kya rab hai Jahan tu hai, wahin sab hai
Tere lab mile mere lab khile Ab door kya hai jaana
Tere vaaste mera ishq sufiyana Mera ishq sufiyana, mera ishq sufiyana
Tere vaaste mera ishq sufiyana Mera ishq sufiyana, mera ishq sufiyana

 

He was relieved to find her there, he moved closer to her and whispered her name slowly in her ears. The husky and soft voice sent chills in the pit of her stomach; she turned around to see him standing there in front of her. She didn't know if it was her dream or reality, and to remove the confusion she moved her hands to touch him, to feel him. Sensing her queries, he grabbed her by her waist and claimed her lips.

He let his actions speak instead of words; his hand gripped her waist even tighter on getting no response he pulled her closer to him. Finding it to be real, she let go off her inhibitions and responded to the kiss, her hands ruffling his hair as she let herself drawn in this moment. After what seemed ages he moved away to get some air and looked in her eyes which were now glistening with joy.

 He was glad to see her smile from her heart, and his heart cried in pain on remembering the days when he would desperately miss her soulful laughter. As if reading his eyes, she meekly moved her hand to cup his face and planted a soft kiss on his lips- a kiss that assured him that no more is she going to sacrifice her happiness as a proof of her gratefulness.


 Rab ki qawali hai ishq koi Dil ki diwali hai ishq koi
Mehki si pyaali hai ishq koi Subah ki laali hai ishq

Mere dil ko tu jaan se juda kar de Yun bas tu, mujhko fanaa kar de
Mera haal tu, meri chaal tu Bas kar de aashiqana
Tere vaaste mera ishq sufiyana Mera ishq sufiyana, mera ishq sufiyana
Tere vaaste mera ishq sufiyana Mera ishq sufiyana, mera ishq sufiyana

 Being loved by Arjun deeply gave Purvi the strength to go away from from him and  Loving Purvi deeply gave Arjun the courage to face the world and go back to her.They were like two souls whose love was mystic (ishq sufiyana).

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end of my os hope you enjoy it and please do comment

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 3:42pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
hey sis really loved your osClap
i hope purvi dosent sacrifice her love in the serial as well
it was truly sufiyana 
thanks 4 the pm

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 4:12pm | IP Logged
it waz beautifully written... kip it up!!! Clap

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 4:28pm | IP Logged
This was absolutely brilliant! Smile

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 5:29pm | IP Logged
Heartloved it! Tongue

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 5:41pm | IP Logged
that was well written and i figure Purvi will sacrifice for her mom because of her gratefulness to the woman who raise her

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 7:36pm | IP Logged
DK will never allow Arjun to marry Ovi. He has already witnessed Arjun's gaze at Purvi in the office. DK knows the value of Love and he knows his son very well. He will not tolerate any drama or complication in his son's life.

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