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snoopy84 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 5:42pm | IP Logged
The ending was beautiful being there for one another. Cant wait for the sequel.

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lovespell Goldie
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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 5:50pm | IP Logged
that was fantastic how they cleared up the mess. and was little funny.  i was kinda funny visualizing arnav - kushi doing that.  He said - she is pregnant.  I loved bothe arnav and kushi's POVs.  Am so eager to see what comes next.  You are the best

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purplekid IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 5:57pm | IP Logged
That was wonderful! Loved how the last line fitted perfectly without being corny! Thanks for the PM, and please continue soon, with the sequel!

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nayika IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 6:25pm | IP Logged
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Downhill IF-Addictz
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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 6:36pm | IP Logged
awesome updates...sorry like button isnt  working

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yusam Goldie
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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 6:45pm | IP Logged
OHH.. THT WAS ONE HELL OF AN UPDATE GIRL... LOVED IT TO BITS... THY STANDING FOR EACH OTHR AGAINST THT NUTTCASE SHYAM, WAS BEAUTIFUL.. N OFCOURSE THE LAST FEW PARAS, TOOK MY BREATH AWAY... SOOO YUMMM.. HAAAYE.. SIGH.. U ENDED DIS.. BOOHOO NOOO... SEQUEL KE LIYE CANNOT WAIT.. ;)

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JalebiJane Goldie
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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 6:47pm | IP Logged
Stay with me tonight!
(WOW!)

I really enjoyed this maha conclusion.
So much is implied in your writing.
Especially how they are already a couple in every meaningful way. The way they touch each other without even knowing it. 

Like this bit:
Khushi clutched at the stitch in her side, and leaned against Arnav without thinking. His hands came up and around her waist, just as unconsciously-

Also want to say that you show how brilliant a team they are. In how Arnav starts telling a story, and then Khushi adds another bit, and then he adds the pregnancy bit.  (Arnav being Freudian!)
They have each other's back--that is what I mean.
And, you convey that in the hand squeeze. 
Beautifully done.

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SilverBell IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 6:52pm | IP Logged
Loved The Ending. It Was Cute. Do Make A Sequel.

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