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hararnav IF-Dazzler
hararnav
hararnav

Joined: 06 January 2012
Posts: 4571

Posted: 10 April 2012 at 4:38pm | IP Logged
good one... the mighty asr is stumped:-))

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NothingLasts IF-Dazzler
NothingLasts
NothingLasts

Joined: 13 December 2011
Posts: 2690

Posted: 10 April 2012 at 4:41pm | IP Logged

He followed her- his mind desperately grappling after the astonishing facts that he had been faced with today- half of him trying to remember if he had indeed unknowingly consummated his marriage with Khushi for her to be Pregnant. He looked up at her, and gulped.

"Kh-khushi- you… you are-"


LOVED THESE LINES!!!!

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SilverBell IF-Stunnerz
SilverBell
SilverBell

Joined: 05 September 2009
Posts: 40780

Posted: 10 April 2012 at 4:48pm | IP Logged
Wow Khushi's Very Smart. She Showed That Shyam She Doesnt Love Him. Glad Arnav Knows The Truth Now.

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Tia.0 IF-Sizzlerz
Tia.0
Tia.0

Joined: 04 March 2012
Posts: 13856

Posted: 10 April 2012 at 5:07pm | IP Logged
I love our feisty Khushi... Go, girl, go... Clap

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TwilightHorizon IF-Dazzler
TwilightHorizon
TwilightHorizon

Joined: 11 September 2011
Posts: 2972

Posted: 10 April 2012 at 5:11pm | IP Logged
nice

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queenie11 Senior Member
queenie11
queenie11

Joined: 02 December 2011
Posts: 662

Posted: 10 April 2012 at 5:21pm | IP Logged
Brilliant! I ADORED reading it - 10 chapters and an epilogue!? That sounds amazing

Loved Arnav' realization that Khushi may in fact be innocent. Wonderful writing - you have a gift for storytelling!

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ekdoteenchar IF-Rockerz
ekdoteenchar
ekdoteenchar

Joined: 17 December 2007
Posts: 5825

Posted: 10 April 2012 at 6:00pm | IP Logged
Absolutely wonderful!!!!

This SS is so realistic that it almost gives the reader goosebumps. I can really visualize each scene that you are writing, it is something that
could and actually should happen in the show as well. Oh how I wish you and some other writers of the forum could have been the CVs & writers of IPKKND.

Although the story that is going on is quite sad, I still find it encouraging. It has a happy spirit, which I think you expressed very well in the 5th chapter when Khushi was thinking everything she has to live for and whom.

Coming to the 6th chapter, woahhh that was one twist!!! You never fail to surprise us.That small fake pregnancy statement was just perfect- the actions & reactions of Arnav and Shyam and the ending result.

Cant wait for the next updates Tongue By the way, I really liked that you put two updates in one go and made them long as well- it is more exciting this way as we have more to read and take in. So keep doing that LOL

Thank you for the lovely updates and remember that Gina jee is waiting eagerly for the next parts, so dont take too long Wink


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purplekid IF-Dazzler
purplekid
purplekid

Joined: 01 January 2012
Posts: 3082

Posted: 10 April 2012 at 6:38pm | IP Logged
YAY! This should totally happen in the show! Loved it, and thanks for the pm!

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