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OS: Beautiful innocent angel-last part- p. 18 (Page 13)

tinsel IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 3:59pm | IP Logged
Awesome update! Khushi fasted for Arnav,Clap

Bibliobibulus IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
Sweet update.. Looking forward to the next part.. :)
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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 12:21am | IP Logged
pm when u continue!!!!!!!!
thelondon12345 Goldie

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Posted: 20 April 2012 at 8:09am | IP Logged
                               Here goes the next part...I am sorry if it's boringErmm... After this it's a last part..Thank you so much everyone for responding....Smile

                             Arnav and Khushi was trying to sleep but no one could sleep peacefully, both of them remembered their hug. It was so calming and full of love. Here on recliner Arnav was looking at Khushi on bed and Khushi was looking at the flower which he gave to her.She couldn't help but smile, she felt soo good, she didn't know that he could bring a flower for her. She had kept the flower near her and slowly fell asleep, but Arnav couldn't sleep. He was so restless. He got up and sat on the bed and turned to look at her. He leaned over her to see if she was sleeping or not and he was overwhelmed looking the rose next to her lying. He was so happy that  Khushi  has kept the flower with her so lovingly. She was so cute and innocent like a baby while sleeping. For 10 minutes he kept staring at her beautiful face  smiling and mesmerized by her beauty and completely lost in her.


               Arnav woke her up lovingly , " Khushi...Khushi..." in a husky voice. She opened her eyes and almost jumped on bed and got soo worried. And asked so many questions in a one go without breaking the line, " Arnavji?? Kya hua??AAp itni raat ko?? Aapki tabiyat to thik hai na?? Aapko kuch hua to nahi??Kuch chahiye aapko??Bhukh lagi hai kya??Aapne davaayi lit hi k anhi?? Haan??" trying to check if he was ok she held his hand and checked his forehead to know the temperature. Arnav calmed her down and said, "Khushi...Khushi..Relax...I am fine...kuch nahi hua hai muje..main bilkul thik hoon..calm down..." And smiled.Khushi asked, "Kya hua fir??Aap itni raat ko??Soye nahi kya??"

     He said, "Main sirf ye puchhn a chahta tha k..main...i mean yaha...bed..mera matlab.."


     She said , "Are boliye na.."


    He said, "Main yaha bed par so jaun tumhare sath?? Agar tumhe thik lage to."


   Khushi felt good that he was asking for her permission. She just nodded her head to say yes. He said, " Are you sure?? "

   She said yes.He got up from there and took his blanket and pillow and lied down on bed.Khushi also lied down and turned her back to him. Arnav said, "Khushi..."

   She said, " Hmmm.."

   "Thanks.." loking at her back he said.

   " Nahi aapka room hai aap jaha chahe so sakte hai. " She said without looking back.

   " Par fir bhi thanks." He said in a husky voice.

  "Hmmm..." she said closing her eyes.


                    Next morning both woke up and while Arnav was getting ready she came to him and said, " Arnavji sirf do din baki hai uske baad.." and she stopped midway.

       " Uske baad...?  do din?? Kiske??" he asked confusingly.


     "Aap bhul gaye?? ^ months pure hone me sirf 2 din baki hai .." She said without looking at him, "Hamne Nanheji se baat kar li hai wo  sara intezaam kar denge aap fikra mat kijiye. "


                          He was shocked and couldn't speak anything. He felt the land slipped under his feet.He was getting weak. He couldn't bear that she was leaving him.He left for the office without saying anything to her.He kept thinking about what she said. He cant let her go like this she was his life. He is nothing without her.He thought, " She ws being nice with him for some  last days, she allowed him to sleep with her on same bed, she accepted his rose and talked with him normally. This was all because she was leaving this house and him forever.He was wrong that he thought she felt something for him that's why she changed but it was just she was leaving from here??"


                      He wasn't able to concentrate on his work and kept thinking about her. He returned home so late and Khushi was sleeping. He also lay down and tears rolling down on his cheekand he fell asleep like that crying. Next day Khushi woke up but he was still lying in and she freshened up and was getting ready but sill he was in bed. She tried to wake him up, "Arnavji..Arnavji..bahut late ho gaya hai.." But he didn't reply. She tapped on his hand once and got shocked his hand was hot like radiator. She checked his forehead and neck. He had a high temperature . She got scared and rang the doctor. She went downstairs and said anjali that he had a high fever.She came upstairs almost running and checked him and tried to wake him up but he didn't even move.In no time everyone gathered in their room. Anjlai was besides him and Nani was other side.Rest of the members were around him sitting on bed.Only Khushi was standing far from the bed and staring him with shocking expressions and tears made their way down her cheeks.

     PRECAP: Khushi reads a letter and repents on being so selfish with him...

     Last part is a confession not so hot but still close moments...and some very touchy too...I hope you all will like it...Smile

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Downhill IF-Addictz

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Posted: 20 April 2012 at 8:16am | IP Logged
awesome update..loving it
princessunara IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 20 April 2012 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
aww nice!!! waiting for an update!!!-)
Ravuri Senior Member

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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
Loved this update. Waiting for the last part. poor arnav and khushi
aNkItA.C IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
good oneThumbs Up
pls update soon nd if possible thn pls snd pmSmile

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