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KRIYAANSH OS-SAD ENDING

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 9:30am | IP Logged
hey guys hey all my kriyaanshians this is my first os ever n tht too on kriyaasnh hoope youl love it
it is dedicated to my best friends tehmina (i love u girl)n to my beechdhi hui behen who i met yest lol her name is upasna aka upi lol to all my pyaare n loving BQ's(love youl like hell)n to all the  true kriyaanshinas
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KRIA'S POV
 
HAPPY ENDING!~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
jabhi koi happy ending hoti hai toh woh TRUST n UNDERSTANDING pe juthi rehthi hai.
Pyaar trust aur understnading pe banthi hai.
Par kya SAD ENDING wohi trust aur understanding pe end  nahi ho sakthi?????????
Jaroori toh nahi hai na ki koi bhi sad ending ek misunderstanding ke wajhse khatam  ho ??????
Sad ending without misunderstanding  ki baat  se i dnt mean ki apne lover ke liye apni  jaan de dena like romeo-juliet heer- ranja etc??? NO!!!!!
Par main ek aise sad ending ki baat kar rahi hoon joh main bhi kabhi nahi samajthi thi par
sad ending without misunderstanding aur wohi trust aur understanding ke baareme mujhe ajj 4 saal baad  samaj pai hoon!!!!!
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FLASHBACK-4 YEARS AGO
 
{note:the flashback starts from the pre-valentine day wen rey goes to kria's house}
 
kria was standing all alone after her mom left the house she was thinking abt rey
 
rey enters the room from the window n he sees kria standing alone there thinking abt something he goes there n hugs her from back
 
rey:kis ke baareme soch rahi hoon??mere baareme????in a very romantic voice
 
kria was dam shocked
 
kria:rey app yaha plzz jahiye mom agayi toh problem ho jayegi she was on the verge of crying as she was leavign fro dehradun the next day she was hjappy tht she atleast got a chance to see rey who is her life for the last time
 
rey notices this
 
rey:kria tum ro rahi hoon??? 
 
kria:nahi rey aise baat nahi hai app bas jao yaha se
 
rey:no kria batao mujhe kya hua
 
kria:rey plzz dnt force me
 
rey thinks tht he should not force her n instead make her mood proper
 
rey:acha theek hai kria tumhe pata hai na ki kal kya hai
valentines day i m dam excited yeh tumara aur mera first valentins day hai iseliye main tumare liye pre-valentine night ko tumhare liye kuch laya hoon
 
kria in her mind:rey kitna innocent hai kitna excited hai woh valentines day ke liye
 
rey:kria red roses tumhe bahout pasand hai na fir chocolates,he gave her many gifts
but kria was just staring at rey
 
rey:aur last main
he takes kria's one hand in his hand n gives her a heart (the same one which rey gave her in the show)
 
rey:yeh mera dil hai kria joh main tumhe hamesha ke liye de dena chahtha hoon u mean alot to me tumse dur rehne ka soch bhi nahi saktha main tum mere liye itni spl hoon ki i cant express it kria
 
kria just broke out now
 
kria:rey main ye nahi le sakthi mujhe app ko kuch batanna chahthi hoon main kal dehradun ja rahi hoon
 
rey:ohhh toh tum iseliye itni sad thi but kyu jarahi hoon kria???leave le rahi hoon kya kiten din ke liye????
 
kria:rey main hamesha ke liye dehradun  jaa rahi hoon
 
rey:kria mazak mat karo april fool day ko tym hai hum feb main hai
 
kria:rey mom ko mere dance karne ke baareme pata chal gaya hai aur mom ko hamare bareme main bhi pata chal gaya hai
 
rey:wht???
 
kria:ha rey aur mom itni naraz hai ki unhone ne mujhse promise liya hai ki agar main elims main jakar perform karu toh uske baad mujhe aoo se aur dance se door jana hoga
 
rey:kya?????kr..i..a ma..in w.oh. tum a..isa mujhe door
 
kria:nahi rey humhe alag hona hoga mujhe bahout acha laga ki maine tumhe sam kuch bata diya ab humaere beech koi nahi misunderstanding nahi hai plzzz rey tum jao yaha se
 
rey:nahi kria tum mujse itna jaldi door nahi ja sakthi
 
kria:rey tumhe mujhse ek promise karna hoga ki tum alne life main age bado ge
 
rey:kria rey starts crying
 
kria:no rey plzz mat ro se moves forward to wipe his tears but  she
stops rey is staring at her
kria:rey plzzz promise me warna main life bar apne app ko kosthi rahungi ki maine tumare sath yeh kiya kya tum chathe hoon ki main apne life main apne app ko kosthi rahu pehle hi tumse door hone ke baad main andar se mar..
 
rey puts his fingers on her lips aisa kabhi nahi hoga kria main promise karta hoon ki main age badunga both wer crying kria couldnt control she just hugs rey rey hugs her back suddenly the door bell rings
 
kria moves away from rey
 
kria:rey mom app jao
 
rey:kria main she moves forward n kisses her forehead kria hamesha khush rahena par ek baat yaad rakhna tumari jagah mere dill main koi nahi le saktha
 
both unwantinlgy get betrayed from eachother kria tellinhg rey to go away n rey going away from kria
 
FLASBACK ENDS
 
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use baad main aur rey kabhi nahi mile par us din ko 4 saal hogaye aur mujhe yaad hai yehi 6 mahine pehle main use mili thi swayam n sharon ki shadhi main
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FLASHBACK STARTS-6 months ago from present POV
 
it was swaron's wedding swayam invites kria kria was not gng to go but she goes forcefully
 
kria entres the weddign venue her heartbeat was going higher n higher wen suddenly neha n vishaka came n hugged her amar bharat swayam,sharon eveeryone cum except rey
kria meets everyone n she was very happy to meet them then everyone go kria is still standing there she looses hope of meeting him she turns n sees rey entres the hall with a girl she was dam happy to see rey moving on in his life rey sees kria n tells tht girl to go n he goes to kria
 
kria:he.y rey
 
rey:hey kria kaise ho tum
 
kria:main theek hoon infact khush hoon ki tum life main age bad chuke hoo
 
rey:nahi kria u are misunderstanding me woh ladki taani thi swayam ki cousin aur meri bahout achi friend aur kuch nahi
maine tumse pehle hi kaha tha ki tumari jagah mere life main koi nahi le saktha main aajj bhi tumse pyaar karta hoon aur hameshakarta rahunga
 
kria was in teears
 
rey:plzz kria mat roo plzzz
 
kria:stops for rey's sake
 
kria:par rey tum puri zindagi
 
rey:kria nahi maine tum ari baat mani ki main tumse door rahunga par plzzz mujhese hamara pyaar mat cheeno main khush hoon trust me ask swayam main khush hoon tumare saare sweet memories ke sath
 
kria:rey main woh
 
rey:kria tumhe kuch kehne ki jarrorat nahi hai i knw its difficult for u i still understnad u mujhe tum par wohi trust hai joh pehle tha iseliye hamari yeh sad ending abhi bhi trust aur understnading pe juthi hai
 
FLASHBACK ENDS
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woh meeting ne prove kar diya ki tum sayad ek sath na ho par hamre dill hamesha sath hi tha .jis phrase se main hamesha confuse thi ki kya sad enidng understanding aur trust pe juth sakthi hai woh ajj clear ho gaya ans the answer is YES
us din muhe hamre pyaar ka true meaning pata chal gaya
 
HUM EK SATH TOH KRIYAANSH NAHI BAN PAYEE
PAR HAMRE DILL AJJ BHI HAME KRIYAANSH BANAE HUI RAKHA HAI
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hope youl love it plzz do like n comment
 

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 9:42am | IP Logged
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this was an awesome update akshara.
loved it.
wow they are sepertaed by soul but together in hearts.
loved ur way of expressing the feelings nd emotions.
thanks for the pm.
lovey one.
keep writing more.



Edited by asmaju - 07 April 2012 at 9:52am

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 9:43am | IP Logged
it was awesome
i felt like crying
i really wanted this to happen in d3

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 9:44am | IP Logged
it was amaizng and if u do continue plz pm me n thanks for the pm

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 9:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by crazysky

it was awesome
i felt like crying
i really wanted this to happen in d3

thank u so much chetna
me too wanted this to happen thts why just wrote a os thanx again
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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 9:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by The007Shivani

it was amaizng and if u do continue plz pm me n thanks for the pm
thanx shivs thanx alot will cont soon if i get any ideas thanx again glad u like it
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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 9:49am | IP Logged
Dude it was aaammmaaaZzziiinnnggg!!n I just luved it...I mean I hv no words to express how much I hv fallen in luv wid it...I just luuuvvveeddd it n whtever u wrote in the start n end it was amazing...n the flashback OMG I just miss them a lot means a lot!!!!! thank u 4 uploading it!!<3

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 9:51am | IP Logged
it ws awesom...
i luvd it...i ws cryin while reading it...
i really wntd it 2 happen in d3...
plzz do write such awesum work & plzz pm me...

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