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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mel420

Originally posted by 9n9i9s9h9u9

Phoolon mein hoti hai wo khushbu

jo man ko bhaa jaati hai

jo is man ko chhute hi

ek madhur geet ban jaati hai
 
tere har update main wo  baat hai ke 

jise read karne ki maan main sochte hi

face par muskaan aa jati hain

ab yeh baat alag hai last update

read kar ke smile ki jaghe bhuchaal aaya tha

wah kya poem thaClap but madame that won't help comment to chaiya hai hey you can read I mean comment In know you love that mer kamini friendTongue
okkk  i m doing

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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 7:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 9n9i9s9h9u9

Originally posted by mel420

Originally posted by 9n9i9s9h9u9

Phoolon mein hoti hai wo khushbu

jo man ko bhaa jaati hai

jo is man ko chhute hi

ek madhur geet ban jaati hai
 
tere har update main wo  baat hai ke 

jise read karne ki maan main sochte hi

face par muskaan aa jati hain

ab yeh baat alag hai last update

read kar ke smile ki jaghe bhuchaal aaya tha

wah kya poem thaClap but madame that won't help comment to chaiya hai hey you can read I mean comment In know you love that mer kamini friendTongue
okkk  i m doing

LOL I had already the feeling In had to do something like that. Now that you already made me a Hitler teacher can I grade you for you commentLOL
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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 7:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mel420

Originally posted by 9n9i9s9h9u9

why i feel like someone going to do this
now

Oh I want to do this but not to the computer but to you. EHh you wait the next update will be even more sadder I promise just for you


Pls don't do this yar
Want to see maneet happy
Update soon

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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 7:33am | IP Logged
Hey mel wat i m reading yaar... Pls dnt do dis ok ok i agree i too was nt mch happy wid d twist bt being a writer i understand dat twist is needed in every story bt probably d thing which is right 4m our pov doesnt mean dat it'll lyk by our readers too... Their reactions 4 our updates cannot b always as we expected... Ananya nd 9n9i9s9h9u had reacted d way dey felt ok i agree dat it is discouraging bt jst look at d other side of d coin it'll help u to improve ur nxt update nd in dat u can clarify ur reason to gve dis twist... So dnt b sad nd trust me dear i truly luv ur story so pls dnt think i lost my interest in it... It was jst mst of d tym no scrath dat almost everytym m ol thru cellphone nd wen i get ol thru pc i just update nd log off thanx to my busy schedule datsy couldnt able to comment on tym bt i read each nd every update of urs even wen m at office... So nw chillax take a deep breath refresh ur mud nd start writing d nxt part... M dyieng to read it...

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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 7:34am | IP Logged
oyeee meri  pyariii bachiii 
naraz mat hooo reee
happens whn everything happy turns sad all of a sudden
comon if people didnt like d sad part
it means u hv written it sooo welll tht it made people feel d pain
n u rockkk melll
dnt get sad for these thingsss

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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 7:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mel420

Originally posted by 9n9i9s9h9u9

Originally posted by mel420

Originally posted by 9n9i9s9h9u9

okkk
now see 
geet ke babaji

this kudi
isne mujhe kahi muhe(face) dikhane layak nahi rakha

arre kya main isse gussa hoker kuch bhi nahi kah sakti
but nahi yeh to bura hi maah gayi

uttha lo babaji uttha lo
mujhe nahi isse

yeh hum sab se sad ho gayi hai

jab aap is ka mood thik kar do 
or yeh happy wala update karne ko agree ho jaye to isse nicche bhej dena

acha so now that's to mean tum kahi face dihka ne laik nahi reh wah that's what you call choor ke dari me thinka or something like that.
your aloud to say anything you want but I need and I repeat I need my comment .
Kamini what did you just say utta lo ehhh Bittey blueyy and all the other pets tumlok hi isse tiek karsakte ho

WHAT DID YOU JUST SAD
kaminiAngry

or main LOL
nahiiiCry
yeh kya hogaya babajiOuch
isse toh shock lag gShocked
and iski language ko kya hua

haila yeh to pagal Winkho gayi
mujhe  last update read karte hue hi shaq hua tha
ab conferm ho gayaCry




ROFL acha wah geet ke babaij sun li ya meri zebaan ko kya hogiya hai yeh madame mutje upper bech ri hai or meri zebaan ki baat kari hai.
Shocked you called me pagel just wait for the next update if you hated this update I don't now what you will do when I post the next updateEvil Smile

dekh lo geet ke babaji
iskoEmbarrassed aapke pass free main round lagva rahi thi main
and look at herOuch
she is not saying thankuLOL
but just 
dhamkiAngry pe dhamkiOuch
ki next update main dekh lagi

main kya karuConfused
kaha leker jaau Cry
aapne maan Cryko
pata nahi next update main yeh usse koun si degree ka torture degi

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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 7:35am | IP Logged
wahtever u did...
arghh...
anyway...i wont be available on IF now
no comments just bye bye for weeks now
gosh...poor maan! see ya

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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 7:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aakritisri1111

Hey mel wat i m reading yaar... Pls dnt do dis ok ok i agree i too was nt mch happy wid d twist bt being a writer i understand dat twist is needed in every story bt probably d thing which is right 4m our pov doesnt mean dat it'll lyk by our readers too... Their reactions 4 our updates cannot b always as we expected... Ananya nd 9n9i9s9h9u had reacted d way dey felt ok i agree dat it is discouraging bt jst look at d other side of d coin it'll help u to improve ur nxt update nd in dat u can clarify ur reason to gve dis twist... So dnt b sad nd trust me dear i truly luv ur story so pls dnt think i lost my interest in it... It was jst mst of d tym no scrath dat almost everytym m ol thru cellphone nd wen i get ol thru pc i just update nd log off thanx to my busy schedule datsy couldnt able to comment on tym bt i read each nd every update of urs even wen m at office... So nw chillax take a deep breath refresh ur mud nd start writing d nxt part... M dyieng to read it...
thanku
thanku
thanku

chalo kisi ko to hammare gusse main pyaar bhi nazar aaya

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