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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: mel420


acha so now that's to mean tum kahi face dihka ne laik nahi reh wah that's what you call choor ke dari me thinka or something like that.
your aloud to say anything you want but I need and I repeat I need my comment .
Kamini what did you just say utta lo ehhh Bittey blueyy and all the other pets tumlok hi isse tiek karsakte ho


WHAT DID YOU JUST SAD
kamini😡

or main 😆
nahiii😭
yeh kya hogaya babaji
isse toh shock lag g😲
and iski language ko kya hua

haila yeh to pagal 😉ho gayi
mujhe  last update read karte hue hi shaq hua tha
ab conferm ho gaya😭



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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

Phoolon mein hoti hai wo khushbu

jo man ko bhaa jaati hai

jo is man ko chhute hi

ek madhur geet ban jaati hai
 
tere har update main wo  baat hai ke 

jise read karne ki maan main sochte hi

face par muskaan aa jati hain

ab yeh baat alag hai last update

read kar ke smile ki jaghe bhuchaal aaya tha


wah kya poem tha👏 but madame that won't help comment to chaiya hai hey you can read I mean comment In know you love that mer kamini friend😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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not fair...
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: mel420

i m sooo very  
Oh I want to do this but not to the computer but to you. EHh you wait the next update will be even more sadder I promise just for you

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9


WHAT DID YOU JUST SAD
kamini😡

or main 😆
nahiii😭
yeh kya hogaya babaji
isse toh shock lag g😲
and iski language ko kya hua

haila yeh to pagal 😉ho gayi
mujhe  last update read karte hue hi shaq hua tha
ab conferm ho gaya😭




🤣 acha wah geet ke babaij sun li ya meri zebaan ko kya hogiya hai yeh madame mutje upper bech ri hai or meri zebaan ki baat kari hai.
😲 you called me pagel just wait for the next update if you hated this update I don't now what you will do when I post the next update😈
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Posted: 12 years ago

👏 good one you and afraid  acha joke that
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: mel420


wah kya poem tha👏 but madame that won't help comment to chaiya hai hey you can read I mean comment In know you love that mer kamini friend😛

okkk  i m doing
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

okkk  i m doing


😆 I had already the feeling In had to do something like that. Now that you already made me a Hitler teacher can I grade you for you comment😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: mel420


Oh I want to do this but not to the computer but to you. EHh you wait the next update will be even more sadder I promise just for you



Pls don't do this yar
Want to see maneet happy
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey mel wat i m reading yaar... Pls dnt do dis ok ok i agree i too was nt mch happy wid d twist bt being a writer i understand dat twist is needed in every story bt probably d thing which is right 4m our pov doesnt mean dat it'll lyk by our readers too... Their reactions 4 our updates cannot b always as we expected... Ananya nd 9n9i9s9h9u had reacted d way dey felt ok i agree dat it is discouraging bt jst look at d other side of d coin it'll help u to improve ur nxt update nd in dat u can clarify ur reason to gve dis twist... So dnt b sad nd trust me dear i truly luv ur story so pls dnt think i lost my interest in it... It was jst mst of d tym no scrath dat almost everytym m ol thru cellphone nd wen i get ol thru pc i just update nd log off thanx to my busy schedule datsy couldnt able to comment on tym bt i read each nd every update of urs even wen m at office... So nw chillax take a deep breath refresh ur mud nd start writing d nxt part... M dyieng to read it...