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New Maaneet FF TUJHKO JO PAAYA #5 link#6 pg131 (Page 105)

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 3:51am | IP Logged

Geet: Lagta hai aap koi khoobsurat khwab dekh rahe the jiski chamak abhi bhi aapki nigahon mein jhalak rahi hai [It appears as if u were living a beautiful dream I can still see the spark of it in your eyes]

Maan: Maan ka har khwab Geet se shuru hotha hai aur har khwab Geet par khatm , tumhi meri zindagi ka sabse dilkash khwab ho jise main har lamha har pal jeeta hoon [Every dream of Maan starts and ends with Geet, u r the most divine dream of my life Geet and I live this dream in every moment of my life]

Geet was trying to look at Maan's face but her eyes were not giving her the permission to get a clear view as her magical mirrors were completely wet with tears of happiness

Maan: Geet inn motiyon ko apni nazro mein aane ki ijajat mat diya karo warna inki wajah se tum mujhe thik se dekh nahi paayogi aur ye main kataiyi bardash nahi kar saktha [Geet don't give permission to these pearls to enter the territory of ur eyes as u won't be able to see my face clearly in their presence and this something that I won't allow to happen]

beautiful dialogues...
How r u are 2 write poetic dialogues?Hats off 2 u.
Maan finds Geet an Angel in d bridal attire.No wonder.She has never found so secure b4.Maan i so caring.Geet wil b secure in his arms


Edited by jasminerahul - 06 July 2012 at 3:51am

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 3:59am | IP Logged
Piya ,lovely update ,especially the poem was so good.

maan making her understand the meaning of the blessing Wink
punishment for maaneet Unhappy

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nice update Clap

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Kya update tha yar piya u seriously rock ... love the way u write ... punishment kahi shaaadi toh nai ?????????? waiting fr it ...

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 4:13am | IP Logged
hey not fairDisapprove
so short update n still have to wait for explanation of maan


but still i loved the updateSmileSmile
Smileas usual you rockClapClapClapClap
ClapClapClap

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loved it

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Fabulous part Clap

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