kriya os...raat baki,,baat baki,, (Adda OS part 1)

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heyy guysss...after huge success😆 of a random os made by me and muskaan in a thread named   lets plan.
am posting this combined os with a suitable title here fr everyones conveneince...hope u all will enjoy our behudapan...long 1..take uor time guysss  

              ...        bold words by me...😆
             ...       normal by kriyaarja...
               ...nd a sweet share in this os by our dear friend kabe at starting in greenn...   

                                                                                      --  here it startsss...place...addaa
                                                                                                                         time ...night 12'o clock

    its night time...ss nd gd are sleeping outside ...nd prats is still waiting fr krish who is busy with rest restart...😊..., she keeps caling him at his mobile, he dont pick up mob as he's vry busy, she's all angry... 

..she decides to go by herself to see him,,bt its night time she is at adda 😕,,gd nd ss sleeping outside...she is confused nd angry...nd go inside the adda,,jstt then she felt a knock so he is coming😳 all tired ,,poor soul😕
she came out ,,angry...krish hug her frm back...nd she says bauji dadi sleeping so go inside adda nd change i will bring food there nd sleeping arrangement also there on the floor😳..as ss nd gd sleeping out vere nly two beddings left after that storm😆

Krishna lifts her up and takes her inside the adda...
Keeps her down and puts his hand on her mouth...
Krishna-"Itni mushkil se toh woh bakaity lal gaya hai yaar ab toh sirf tum aur hum hi hai na.."😳
he is whispering and at that time SS comes and asks-"Kisnabau...Paani dyo...''
hahahahah ss go uorself.😡...krishna bahu is busyyy😳...😆(thats my dialogue)

chlo in reply to ss krish came out nd say ee bauji ee liyo pani nd sleep now am sleeping inside as there is mosquitoes out nd no other net is left after storm...so vtever u need ask nowww 😆then dnt disturb agn nd agn..

SS-"ka be hain..?? Saala apne baap ko disturb karne se mana kar raha hai behooda..Humaar bahuriya humko paani degi samjhyo ki nahin.."😳
Krishna-"Tumri bahuruya humri biwi hai... chain se sone do na yaar..tumri biwi chali gayi hai toh humka kaahe pareshaan kar rahe ho..??

"jsst then prats came...""go krishna go inside ,,i will give paani to bauji...'''
ss...''ee dekh ,,ee hamri bahu ,,tumho jase nhi,,apne baap se distaarbb hota hai behudaa.."'
gd also wake up,,nd asks fr paani to krishna bahuuu😆

krish superangry now😆..goes inside in anger mode,,prats noticeddbt busy in giving paani too ss nd gd both😛

Pratigya comes back and Krishna pretends to go to sleep...😆
Pratigya sleeps besides him and says-"So gaye kya..??"
krishna still angry and says-"Tum jao na...apni bahu hone kaa dharm nibhaoo...patni kaahe bann rahi ho..??"
pratigya giggling silently..
Pratigya-"ok..Krishna..agar tum yahi chahte ho hum jaa rahe hain..waise bhi dadi ne hume unke paas sone ke liye kaha tha.."
Pratigya pretends to leave and soon krishna holds her and drags her below him and says-"Aise kaise chali jaabo hain..humka tumre bina neend thodi ayegi...they hug each other.

.awww   they r still in each othrs arms bt jst then again they distrbed by a sound,,,a sound frm room itself..
prats'''krishna vts this😕
darkness in room..jstt mooonlight is there...nd krish noticed a rat😆who throws water jug

prats afraid nd shouting '''oh krishna am very scared f it...plss send him outtt😆...she gets upp nd moved to one side ...krishna assuring her nd saying to'' come nd sleeep rat will nt do nything as her lion is there😳bt prats nt cnvinced'' will come nly ven this rat will go outt😆

poor krish on mission of rat bhagao prats ko close laooo😆

krishna'''ee babu ab agr chuha ko bahar bhejne main lag gye to bauji uthjayenge yaarr tum kahe tensioneai padi ho...aa jabo na hamre pas...😳
prats'''krishna ham jameen par kase so skte hai jab ye chuha neeche guum rha hai,,ye galat hai infections ho skte hai😆...ham yahi khde rhenge jab tak ye chuha baher nhi jata😆

nd chuhaa still in own masti...
nd our krish sitting on floor nd looking in direction f chuha😕😆

vt will he do noww...😕

.Krishna still tensed.
Krishna-"Abe yaar ee sasure ko bhi abahi aanan tha..saala humri raat kaahe bigaad raha hai yaar..??
Pratigya-"Waah Thakur saab..waise toh bade bahadur bane ghumte ho aur ek chuhe ko bahar nahin nikaal sakte..??
At the same time, pratigya's foot fels something soft and imagine what, its the rat himself..
Pratigya yells-"krishna and hugs him tightly..
Krishna happy at this but pretneds to be anjaan..
Pratigya-"krishna,please iss chuhe ko bagao..hume darr lag raha hai.."
krishna taking advantage of this lifts her up and says-"Ee saale chuhe ki itni himmat ke humre babau ko pareshaan kare..?? Aye babu, ab na tum bilkul chinta nai karo..hum tumka puri raat aise hi pakde rahenge..

prats...''krishna kya pakde rhenge..ham kya sari rat ase he khde rhenge😲..tum iss chuhe ko bahar kyo nhi nikalte'''
nd she came out frm his embrace bt still holding his arm...
now kriya on one side near door nd chuha on other side near window nd their bedding on floor in b/w chuha nd kriya😆
krishna ''babu yar dekho na ee kitne maje se yaham ghoom rha hai,,koi preshani thode hai...aur vase b ee adda pehle iss chuhe ka gar hai phir hamra to ham eeko yahan se kase nikal skte hain😆''
prats'''theek hai krishna,,tum ase nhi manoge to tum soo jaoo yahan apne chuhe k sath ,,ham ja rhe hain bahar dadi k sath sone,,vase b raat bahut ho chuki aur subah jaldi uthna hai...''
nd prats going towards door bt krish hold her hand nd said'' ee babu ..acha theek hai ruko yar ham kuch karte hain'

Krishna still furious at this rat daastaan...😆
meanwhile, Pratigya waiting Krishna to get rid of the rat..
Pratigya asking about the progress through expressions and krishna making sad faces..
Krishna finally takes one stick and says-"Tumka hum apni raat kharaab karne nai denge..and he hits him..
The rat runs out of the adda...
Pratigya feels relaxed and thanks Krishna..
Krishna-"Sirf thankoo.."
Pratigya-"Toh aur kya chahiyeh tumhe,..??
Krishna-"Humra inaam.."
Pratigya-"Inaam..??"
Krishna-"Toh aur kaa..?? Itni mehnat se ee sasure ko bagaaye hain toh inaam toh milna hi chahiyeh.."
Pratigya feels shy and moves closer to him...
At that very moment, Krishna's cell phone rings...

..phone ringsss..chandu on other side..as usual..😆who else can be there

krishna''''ee chandu yar rat ka 1 baj rha hai,,tumka neeed veeed aati ki nhi...khud to sote nhi yar hamka to sone do''..
.prats giggling nd came out f his embrace...
chandu''bhaiya hamko ekoo bahut jaruri baat bolni hai ee liye phone kiye hain...''

krishna''acha ab bkaiti naa kroo aur jaldi bolbo kaa baat hai...ooo kaa hai na ki hamka na bahut need aa rhi haiii'''
chandu'''bhaiya hamka ee btana hai ki kal se hamra restaurant pehle jaise he chlega kyuki bhabhi jab se jake sare waitors ko bhashan😆 de ke aai hai naa,,tab se vo sare bahute he sharminda hai,,aur kal se kaam pe aana chahte hai...''

krishna haapyyy''''ee to bahute achi khabar hai yaar,,,chalo phir kal milte hain ham restaurant main...okkkbyeee👏'''

krishna happy happy.. pullls prats down on floorrr😳 nd prats srprised vt haappend he told her everything ...she is also very happyyy 😛...

prats...'''krishna ye to bahut he achi khabar hai,,chlo ab tum jaldi se soo jaoo subah restaurnt b jana hai ab...''
krishna'''kaa babu ham itna khush hai..abb soyenge nhi hamm,,aur vase b abb 4 gante bad to subah hone he vali hai...to sona kaun chahta hai abbb😳..bolbo kaa khti hoo..☺️...

prats stilll in his embace,,,krishna lying on top of her nd looking in her eyes ..prats shyyy😳


Pratigya gets closer to him to hug him...
Krishna waiting to hug her back and again phone rings...
Krishna extremely irritated and its again chandu...
Krishna-"Abe yaar tumka ka paresaani hai hain..??"
Chandu-"Arre bhaiya woh ekko baat batana bhul gaye.."
Pratigya laughing...
Krishna-"kya..??"
Chandu-"bahiya..oo bhabhi ko thankoo bolna tha..."
Krishna-"Bol dyo na...beta phonewa pe kaahe hain..yahan aa ke bol do.."
Pratigya still laughing...
Krishna cuts the call and goes back to her...
your turn...

ooo now romantic half to mee very smart...😆

chlo let me tryyy😛

pratigya still laaughing ...😆

krishna irritated'''eelio abb tum kahe has rhi ho...''

prats'''hamari marji,,kyu aapko koi preshani hai''

krishna''acha beta ,,hamka preshani,,abii btate hain tumka''
nd he take her in his arms nd embrace her😳...rest you guys can imagine😆

..body nd soul meets together☺️
mooonlight falling on themm...nd both are in their own worldd...☺️

camera slowly mooved towards window nd out nd out...😆 usual scene😆
camera retrnd back nd it 5'o clock in morning.😆..kriya under a while color bed sheet 
...ven prats heard a hen giving baaang 😆.(..commom in rurall or basti area😆)

prats in krishna's arms talking to herself''omg its morning time,,looking at him,,kisses him on cheek..😳..tries to come out f his embrace..nd looking fr her saari on side f their bedding..take it on herself nd slowly goes toward their smaalll bathroom they had made whose door is frm that room itself...😛

she came outt ,,,dressed.
..krishna still sleeping...she saw outside frm window bauji woken upp...
she goes to krishna to wake him,,nd take his clothes...
prats ''krishna utho,,subah ho gai hai,,aur bahar bauji b uth gye hai...tum jaldi se utho aur apne kapde lo..bauji kabii b nahane k liya aana vale hongee...


Krishna-"Arre yaar..ee subah bhi na.."
SS enters the adda... Krishna shirtless...
SS-"kaa be saale..?? Ee kaa huliya banaya hai be..??
Pratigya both shy and laughing..
Krishna-"ba ba bba bauji woh...woh..woh..raat ko garmi bahot lag rahi thi toh aye liye hum.."
SS-"Chup saale..garmi lag rahi thi behooda saale kutta.."
Krishna and Pratigya stare at each other and smile..
SS moves to the bathroom..
Meanwhile, Pratigya has hidden his shirt...
Krishna searches for it but he couldn't find it..
Pratigya moves outside to make breakfast for everyone...
Krishna-"Babu..humra sharat de dyo.."
Pratigya-"Nahin denge."
Krishna-"Acchaa...toh ee baat hai...toh thik hai..hum bhi aise hi bahar aa jaenge aur sabka keh denge ki..."
Pratigya runs and gives him his shirt..
he grabs her and says-"Arre hum toh ee sabka kehne waale the ki humka bahot grami lag rahi thi aye liye hum sharat utaar diye..tum kaa samjhi..??
hahahahah...
prat"""arre nhi thakur sahab ham kya samjenge..hamto jante hain hamre thakur sahab kisi se darte thoda hainn''haan bass kal raat ek chuhe se jarruur dar gye thee...😆'

krishna''dekho babu tum majak mat banano yarr..ham dare nhi the,,,ham to bass chahte the ki uu chuha hamka distrbb matt kre...''''😳kaa samji distrbb to nhi kiya naaa😆.kaa khti hoo😳

prats blushed ☺️ ''   dattt..krishna tum b na...chlo ab shirt phno aur tyar ho jaoo kam pe jane k liye, ham bahr khana banane jaa rhe hain...'

prats outside making food...krishna goes to bathroom after ss came outt...
krishna dressed in meanwhile ,,nd ready fr restaurant...

krishna to prats near her chulha'''ee babu hamre pas khana khane ka time nhi hai to hamke dabbe main daal ke de diyo tumm...''

ss ''ee baba subah jaldi utha kro saala baad main khta hai time nhi hai,,pta nhi raat bar kaa krta hai behudaa...''😆
krishna''ee bauji tum bkaiti mat kro ,,hamka vase he der ho rhi hai...''

prats give him dabba nd come till outside of adda to see him off...

nd said in his ears''''krishna restaurant main jake kaam krna ,,raat ki need puri krne k liye sote mat rhnaa''''😳
both start laughing,

,krishna gives her a side hug...nd goes to his wayy...nd prats eyes still following himm😛👏

enjoy...😃
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Wonderful compilation done teeena...👏👏


thanku thankuu...am happy we gave a wonderful weekend treat to our dear friends😊...after a week which vs full f tensions due to rumours spread by some mids😡...

u too vs amazing  there...😊
thanks to u too😛
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thanku thankuu...am happy we gave a wonderful weekend treat to our dear friends😊...after a week which vs full f tensions due to rumours spread by some mids😡...

u too vs amazing  there...😊
thanks to u too😛

My pleasure always...
My exams are getting over on 9th so then I will be on a full time job of Kriya scenes author...😉
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My pleasure always...
My exams are getting over on 9th so then I will be on a full time job of Kriya scenes author...😉


mine over,,,so nowdays fulltoo  freee😆..