FF :"KYA PYAAR HOGA..??" (PT-12 AT PG-42) - Page 29

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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry 4 late commenting
awesome creation
superb 
what 2 say sooo nice
akshara is modern type thats sooo cool
loved ur ff
thanks 4 pm
waiting 4 next part

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesum part sonali...
Luvd it...
Thnx for d update...
Waiting for d nxt part...
Do update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
As always its a very nice part...

Good going...lovely piece of writing... do update soon

Thanx for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Firstly thank you guys for ur lovely coments will try to work on it ..sorry that i coudnt thank each personaly .thank you ones again😳
                                                      PART-10
party was done and whole of familiy was in hall 
akshara:shuarya kya baat hai ..u have done it .now ur going to marry my di..wht shud i call u jiju are shaurya,aur di app bhi badi chuphi rustam nikkli..maan hi maan shaurya ko pasand kaar liya aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chal na diya 
varsha:showd a angry look to akshara 
akshara:ufff ...shuarya god bless u ..bhagwan tumhe himaat da.
shaurya:kya kyu ..??
dadi:chalo chalo..lets deside all events 
naitik:come and sit opposite to akshara 
akshara:wantdly ignoring naitik..was making faces 
naitik:was trying his level best .folding his hands aab maan bhi jaao.
akshara:NO 
naitik:with actions sorry woh business clients thai 
akshara:TOH 
naitik:okay baba sorry ..and catch his two ears 
akshara:NO NO NO 
naitik:may kya kaaru kuch toh boliya.kaisa manu aapko 
akshara:in actions show her chick and say give me a kiss
naitik:open his eye widely,and by moving his finger near his forehead n ask aap pagal hogai hai kya ..?
akshara:kya .??"give a angry look ,with full eye open "
naitik:akshara aap bhi na..yaha kaisa.?
akshara:give wht do i knw walla expression 
naitik:acha theek hai detha hu
akshara:okay okay ..and farword her cheek ..
naitik:give a flying kiss 
akshara :naitik ."gets more angry"
naitik:will be rolfing at it 
dadi:okay final we wll have all events haaldi,sangeet,eangment and final with marriage
       akshara..??
akshara:dint pay attention to it 
dadi:shout akshara ..
akshara:hah dadi .??
dadi:tum sangeet may dance kaarogi ..?
rashmi and nandini:we wll do we wll do 
akshara:ya even.i will do ..per mujhe salsa kaarna hai .
shaurya:per salsa ka liya toh tujhe patner ki zarurat hogi .kiska saat kaaregi ..?
naitik:keep hopes ki akshara wll take his name 
akshara:wantdly ..hai mera ek friend i wll choose him 
naitik: shout out kya..?? aisa kaisa ..yeh family function hai ..aisa koi bhi bahar wallo ka saat aap ..woh bhi salsa nahi 
shuarya:give a "sumting is wrong walla look"
akshara:aisa thodi na hota hai ..?
naitik:aisa hi hota hai 
shaurya:understood ..okay kool down ..akshara y dnt u select anyone from house
akshara:ghar may say kon kaarega ..?
shaurya:hmmm ...naitik hai na..?
akshara:kya.??? n laugh ..yeh ..i mean naitik aur dance ..aap bhi na jiju
shaurya:hah kyu nahi naitik na college may freshers pay kiya tha ..hai na naitik.tu baanega na akshara ka patner.?
akshara;per inha office aur appne so called clients sa fursat milegi toh dance sikhan gaya yaar practice kaarenga 
shuarya:hah toh ..yeh manage kaar lega hai na naitik..??
naitik:hah hah kyu nahi ..i wll 
akshara:get a smile per hide it n say okay ..if naitik dnt have prblm why will I
naitik:hah hah i wll
dadi:acha chalo baaki ki baate kaal hogi 
everyone leave for respective rooms
naitik in his room:yeh akshara bhi na ekkdum pagal hai ..kuch bhi kahi bhi sujjthi rehti inko 
aksara in her room:yeh naitik bhi na ekkdum sadhu hai ..MR attitude ..correct naam ..unko image ko kaafi suite bhi kaartha hai 
naitik:chalo koi baat nahi dektha hu kaab taak naaraz rahegi..kaal say toh hum saat may dance practice kaarenga 
akshara:dekthi hu yeh inka attitude kitna dhino taak rahega kaal say toh hum saat may dance practice kaarenga 
                                          DANCE CLASSES
A sanjay named young dude cum for teaching dance to naksh 
naitik:who was poor at dancing was trying his level best to keep n keep with akshara but he was unable to 
sanjay:mr naitik u need lot more practice.see akshara she is just perfect 
akshara;no its like i have went to months of classes in US,naitik ka liya yeh sab naya naya hai .he has always been in business .
naitik:just got a million dollar smile.on his face ..he smillled out with heart ..he turn towards akshara .per akshara just turn her face to other side
sanjay:oh okayy thts kool ..i wll show you naitik how to do it ..bolke .sanjay goes near akshara and catch her around at her waist
akshara:was just at uncomfertable..with sanjay ,and akshara look at naitik
naitik:saw this and he really felt bad for akshara.
        to himself:naitik tujhe dance jaald say jaald seekh na hi hoga.
that day dance class come to and end and it was already nite.at dinning table all were present it was just naitik who was missing thr 
akshara:was seeing around naitik.. even she was nt able to take a piece in
dadi:where is naitik today .?
shaurya:dadi woh naitik nah kaha uska maan nahi hai khaane ka ..pata nahi kyu per bohat ukkda ukkda laag raha tha
akshara:omg akshara kahi naitik tera sanjay ka saat dance kaarna pay tera say gussa toh nahi hai .,mujhe jaald say jaald jaakar naitik say milna hoga 
akshara tried to get up from thr and go ..per dadi stopd her saying she was some work ..helplessly akshara had to listen to dadi and stopd thr .it was alrdy 12 in the nyt
akshara tried every possibility to go to naitik per she was falling ..akshara was geting desprate to see naitik 
but finally she managed to ..
akshara go to naitilk room frm back door..as soon as she stepd in naitik's room balcony n peepd into naitik's window ..her eyes got fillled in no time 
naitik:was practicing dance...his clothes were in cmplit sweat.yet he was practicing dance
akshara:jumped window and ran into naitik..akshara just hugged naitik titly and started crying 
naitik:akshara ..aap kya hua ..aap roah kyu rahi ho ..akshara kuch toh boliya saying this he take out akshara frm him and hold her..and ask kya hua akshara kisne kuch kaha ..?
akshara:naitik im sorry ..im extremly sorry 
naitik;sorry kyu akshara kya hua 
akshara:naitik aapki halaat dekhi hai ,,itna thandi may ur sweating ,aap na khana bhi nahi khaya,appki halaat bata rahi hai pata nahi aap kitni dhere say practice kaar rahe hai ..all bcozz of me..nahi may .josh josh may aakar dance ki baat kaarti ..aur aaj dance class sanjay ka mera saat dance kaarna im sorry naitik..very very sorry .i knw naitik aapko mera sanjay ka saat dance acha nahi laaga 
naitik:nahi akshara aishi koi baat nahi hai 
akshara:phir kaise baat hai naitik
naitik:akshara mujhe aapki uncomfertableness dekhayi deh rahi thi ..mujhe dekh raha tha ..aap kitni majobor thi ..all bcozz of me
akshara:kya .?? aap sirf dance isliye practice kaar raha thai ..taaki mujhe kaal say uncomfertable nah feel ho .??
naitik:hah akshara ..may aapka liya kuch bhi kaar sakta hu 
akshara:just leave frm thr
naitik:akshara ..akshara kya hua ...saying this he caught her hand ...and turned her towards him 
akshara:eye's were red ...with full tears 
naitik:akshara kya hua .??aap abh kyu roah rahi hai 
akshara:naitik i dnt deserve you ..aap mera liya itna soch tha hai aur may hu ki ..saachi naitik ..aap mujhe itna samaj tha hai .aap mera aankhe phad sakta hai .aur may ..aapko abhi taak itna bhi nahi samaj thi 
naitik:akshara ..its okay .hamare pass hamari puri zindagi padhi hai ek dussre ko jaana ka liya ..dheera dheera sab theek hojaye ga 
akshara:saachi ..? kya aisa ho sakta hai naitik..??
naitik:aur kisna kaha ki aap mujhe samjthi nahi ..ajj jaab sanjay mujhe sunha raha tha ..aap na mera bina kuch bole hi mera liya react kiya .isha hi understanding keh tha hai akshara saying this naitik wipes akshara's tear.
akshara:theek hai ..abse hum dono saat may practise kaarenga ..
naitik:hah kyu nahi .aaya start kaarte hai 
akshara:abhi nahi pehla aap dinner kaarenga 
naitik:per akshara abb dinner i mean kitchen may kuch hoga bhi nahi 
akshara:nahi nahi kuch toh miljaye ga ..aap chaliya mera saat .saying this akshara catch naitik hand and take him to kitchen 
                                                KITCHEN
naksh open fridge and thy actuly find nothing to eat except some fruits 
naitik:may na kaha tha na yaha kuch nahi milega ..aur akshara mujhe bhukk bhi nahi hai 
akshara:aisa kaisa bhuuk nahi hai aapko ..suddenly akshara turn on either side she find maagi packets ...naitik kya aap maagi khayenga..?
naitik:maagi hah ..kool per mujhe baananhi nahi aati maagi ..
akshara;hah toh mujhe aati hai 
naitik:aapko aati hai ..?/
akshara:hah hah isma kya hai ...i wll make maagi n coffee okay na 
naitik:hah hah kyu nahi 
akshara:was making coffee and naitik was standing near akshara and adoring her .akshara's hair were falling on the either side and disturbing her 
naitik:slowly with his hand set akshara hair behind her ear 
naksh have a eye lock ...thy were just drowned in each others eye's suddenly buff of coffee break thr eye lock ..and both were sharmaofing to see each other 
akshara was done with coffee and maagi ..
naitik had maagi and said .wow akshara not bad .ur hand have lot of taste 
akshara:aap bhi na naitik ..aisa kuch nahi hai ..may baanu ya koi aur maagi toh maagi hi rahagi na 
suddenly it start raining ..
naitik:no akshara aap barish may bheegna ka baare may sochiya ga bhi nahi 
akshara:hah baba theek hai ..per baarish ko dekh toh saakti huna .?
naitik:hah kyu nahi ..thy go to naitik's room 
In balcony near window ..
naitik having coffee by holding coffee mugg in left hand .akshara near naitik with hand around naitik's waist n head on naitik's shoulder and naitik's right hand on akshara's sholuder ..
both standing and enjoying rain 

precape:naksh out for shopping along with shaurya and varsha.Akshara eating choclate have bit of it left on her chin and naitik see it 

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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely part...😉
bechaara naitik kitne papad belne pade dance seekhne ke liye
but akshi ke liye he'l do anything😳
loved this part...😛
keep writing more and update regularly...
thnx for the pm😊
Edited by janhavi58 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesm part sonali...
kithna pyar vkarthe hai ye dono ek dusre se😃😃😃
kisi ka nazar na lage dono par☯️
enjoyed readng room scene,party ,kitchn n dance practicing😃
precap sounds intrstng😳😳
thnx 4 the pm
Edited by ammu4u - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow lovely part👏
especially the last one😃
great efforts keep writing...
n continue soon precap sounds interesting 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely part sonu...
thanx for d pm 😃
updt soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part sonali. u rock it. full of emotional one . I read u r os. tears comes in my heart s. really no words to come awesome awesome . aksara choose his dance partner tat scene is so cute . and naitik room scene is so nice. in kitchen scene wow awesome awesome awesome lovely one . naitik takes aksara hair tat scene is so cute thank u for give the emotional one
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nycc part bebo welldone & thanks for long part & PM plz cont soonEdited by sameera_naksh - 11 years ago