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Posted: 11 years ago
thank u guys for lovely coments here is next part πŸ˜ƒ                                                                         
                        PART-7
Few days pass and akshara still seems to be distured whch was making naitik restless
naitik plans for a small trip to cheerup akshara ,he calls up rashmi n nandini as thy were best friends of akshara.
naitik ,akshara,shaurya,varsha,nandini n rashmi for a small trip to kashmir 
rashmi n nandini who were aware of wht happn with akshara ,and were cmplitly impressed with naitik's concern for akshara...!!
all of thm reach to kashmir 
naitik n akshara have opposite rooms.all of thm plan for a born fire infrnt of hotel n get sited over thr
naitik trying his level best to make up akshara's mud yet .he was nt able to 
nandini and rashmi were observing this all the time ..and thy were clearly able to make out ki naitik is madly in love with akshara.
nandini :rashmi akshara yeh kya kaar rahe hai.woh aisi konsi duniya may chalegai ki ushe naitik ji ka pyaar nahi dekhai de raha hai
rashmi:hah nandini 
but thn naitik crack joke on akshara which upsets her
akshara:yeh sab kya hai naitik ji ..koi aisa maaza kaarta hai kya 
naitik:shocked..!! per akshara woh 
akshara:bas bohat hogaya mujhe appse koi baat nahi kaarni 
naitik:per akshara
akshara:gets up frm thr n go 
naitik:run's back of her.turn her towrads him n catch and shake her.kya hai akshara yeh sab kaab taak chalega .
akshara:(in deprission) react wierdly.hah hah sirf idhar kyu .yaha touch ki jiya .yaha touch kijiya.aap maardo ko toh bas ladkiya..
naitik:atmst shocked.was broken down cmplitly..
akshara:shout at naitik n run away frm thr
nandini n rashmi see the whole thing,thy go to akshara but she was  ready to listen anyting 
nandini;shouts at akshara kya tu pagal hogai hai ya aandhi hogai hai.
akshara:kyu kya hogaya 
rashmi:kya tujhe dekhai nahi deta ,ya tu dekhna nahi chati 
akshara:yeh tum dono kya keh rahe ho
nandini:akshara ..naitik ji tujse pagalo ki taraha pyaar kaarte hai.tujhe yeh sab dekhayi nahi deta kya 
akshara:shocked..cmplitly shocked ..tum dono pagaal hogaye ho kya ..woh mr naitik singhaniya hai ..mr perfectionist.unka samne may kuch nahi hu .
nandini :pyaar aisa hi nahi hota akshara
akshara:tum dono na ..
rashmi:aagar hum yeh baat sabit kaarke dekhya diya toh 
akshara:konsi baat 
nandini:dekh tune naitik ji itna bura bhala kaha ,phir bhi tera choti se pareshani say woh behaal hojate hai 
akshara:aisa kuch nahi hai 
rashmi:aisa hi hai 
rasmi n nandini plan out a trick
morning time 
rashmi n nandini come n beat naitik's door 
shouting :naitik ji naitik ji 
naitik:in half sleep comes n open door ..and ask kya hua ..?
rashmi:naitik ji woh akshara 
naitik:akshara kya hua akshara koh.kaha hai woh 
nandini:woh hum tino pass ka jungle may gaaye toh.per
naitik:kya per ..akshara hai kaha 
rashmi:in a stroke .'akshara ghum gayi'
naitik:kya ghum gayi kya..kya.??
nandini:woh hum jungle gaaye thai ..ek lion ki awaaz aayi toh hum bhaag ne laage,may aur rashmi toh jungle ka bahar aagaya per akhara kahi dekhi nahi 
naitik:kya ..? pagaal hogaye aap loog koi jungle may jaate hai ..aur akshara ..saying this without looking at himself her run to the jungle
nandini:dekhi rashmi.the grt business tycoon,jisko aapni image sab se imp thi aaj woh bina duniya ki chinta kaare hua appna pyaar ko bacha na gaaye
                                                                  JUNGLE
naitik: akshara..!! akshara ..!! aap kaha hai 
           (he was running like crazy here n thr..he was feeling as if he was loosing his heart beat)
         with tears in his eyes: akshara aap kaha chalegai aapko kuch hogaya toh may kaise zinda rahunga plzz akshara kaha hai aap
         he reaches a pond he found akshara sitting at a side of small river
akshara:see naitik n get up,naitik kya hua aap yaha
naitik:hugg akshara titly n say TG aap theek hai akshara ,,aagar aapko kuch hojata toh
akshara:mujhe kya hojata naitik.aap kya keh rahe hai 
naitik:he say the whl thing wht nandini n rashmi said him
akshara:yeh dono na ekkdum pagal hai ..unhe chodungi nahi may.unhe laagtha ki aap mujse pyaar kaarte hai 
naitik:kya yeh sab ek maazak tha,itna gaanda maazak.
akshara:naitik woh..!!
naitik:kya woh akshara ..hah hah may aapse pyaar kaarta hua akshara .per may jantu hu aap meri feelings kabhi nahi samaj paayengi.ishi liye may aapko kabhi yeh baat nahi batana chatha thi ki may aapse pagalo ki tarha pyaar kaarta hu 
akshara:shocked..
naitik:chodiya aap kya jaane pyaar kya hota hai 
akshara:try to stop naitik
naitik:bas akshara mujhe aapse koi baat nahi kaarni hai..mujhe hamesha guilt rahega ki ..may na aap jaise insaan sa sacha pyaar kiya.
naitik left akshara was crying to the core 
                                                               NIGHT
phone rings
naitik:hello '
akshara:naitik may akshara .plzz phone maat rakhna plzz
naitik:mujhe aapse koi baat nahi kaarni
akshara:per mujhe kaarni hai may hotel ka terrac pay aapka intezaar kaar rahe hu 
naitik:may nahi aaunga
akshara:may jaab hi neecha aaungi jaab aap mujhe khud aakar lejanga
naitik:phir wahi paade rahe hai ..may nahi aaunga
akshara:theek hai dekte hai 
naitik just through the phone n go to bed off his light n go to bed
                                                                3 AM
naitik gets up with the sound of heavy rain,thn he see's towards phone n remeber his n akshara's conv.
                to himself:abhi taak toh akshara neecha aakar sogai hongi ..
                             per woh saachi may aagai hongi na ..??
                             ek baar check kaar leta hu
  he opens his door go to akshara's door and check whtr its locked r nt.whch was nt locked.naitik peep in to the room he found no one thr..
   he was like shit kahi akshara terrac pay toh nahi hai .waha toh baarish bhi ho rahe hogi.he run to the terrace 
 he found akshara fainted in the heavy rain
  naitik ran towards her .took her head in his laps n was trying to wake her up ..but akshara was nt geting up.naitik took her downstairs in his arms

precap:akshara still unconcious
doctor:god .she got heavy fever beacuse of geting wet in rain for hours
Edited by bebo. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nyccc part dear what a lovely part ...plz cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
yipee im first to comment wow yaar ur fab pls update soon so emotional.Edited by shurtiekta - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sameera_naksh

Nyccc part dear what a lovely part ...plz cont soon

thank u πŸ˜ƒ
yes wll try to coment soon πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shurtiekta

yipee im first to comment wow yaar ur fab pls update soon so emotional.

thank u 
ya wll try to update soon πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part sonuπŸ˜ƒ
tnx for d pmπŸ˜ƒ
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part dear...πŸ‘\
very well written...πŸ‘πŸΌ

thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hayeee sonu...
i juss luv ur ff...
u write so well...
amazing...naksh...
jlsi se nxt update dena...
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesum part sonali...luvd it...
Waiting for d nxt part...
Do continue soon...
Thnx for d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice and romantic part  πŸ‘
continueee soonnn