FF :"KYA PYAAR HOGA..??" (PT-12 AT PG-42) - Page 20

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by akshi


very very very nice update loved ur ff so sorry i couldnt cmnt on last part bt i have read that too that was also superb...thanx 4 the pm sona n keep cntinue it soon...w8ing 4 ur update😛
itna uchal maat ...n its okay 
ya wll try to update soon 😃
Posted: 11 years ago
comment edited on pg24
plz update soon😊
Posted: 11 years ago
hi..
awesom ff..write son dear..n pm me 22...

Posted: 11 years ago
amazing ff
been reading it
continuee 😃
Posted: 11 years ago
                                                         part-6
Days pass and naksh really become good friends they do share things now.they spend great time together,naksh shaurya and varsha hang out together more often.
One fine morning like daily naitik, shaurya and varsha leave for office.after going to office naitik realise he forgets his file..he ring up akshara and say her to search file and keep with her .he will come and collect it 
akshara:keeps naitik file with her.and keep waiting for naitik but she is having a outing plan with rashmi & nandini her best friends..akshara keep waiting for naitik and she go into the bathroom for havng bath 
naitik:after sometime naitik comes house ask for akshara 
       ..he was informed ki  she is in room ,
        naitik goes to akshara's room but cudnt find her he searches for his file here n thr 
       .he finds the file..he opens it due to blow of air paper's fall out of file 
        naitik keep on collecting them two are three paper's go down of bed for which he goes down of bed 
akshara:just complit her bath..unknown of naitik's presence.come's out of bathroom in bath robe
 IN FRONT OF MIRROR:(akshara in pink colour bathrobe stand infrnt of mirror and talk to herself)
            OMG akshara tumhe itni khubsurat dekhna ka koi addikar nahi,(naitik see's akshara and was listning to akshara's words and was laughing)
            tum itni khubsurat dekhogi toh INDIA may saari laadkiya tujse jaalne laag jayenga kyu ki saare laadka tujpe joh laatu rahenga
           AKSHARA TAKE A COMB IN HER HAND :this year the best face of year award goes to MISS AKSHARA MAHEHWARI
           (naitik all the time listning to akshara was laughing out seeing her funny expressions)
           akshara was suddenly going to open her bath robe 
naitik:COMES OUT SHOUTING AND CLOSING HIS EYE WITH ONE HAND
         nahi nahi nahi ek mint rukkjaye 
akshara :shocked and panicked naitik app.??
naitik:(still with coverd eyes)
         im sorry sorrry akshara very sorry ..actually may file lenna aaya tha 
         jaab may file khola hawa say pura paper idhar udhar uddgaya thode bed ka neecha bhi chalegaya thai toh may ..
        (akshara was just observing naitik's pancid and innocent face and was smiling at his innoscence)
        bed ka neecha gaaya aur uttni dehr may aao aagayi ..im sorry sorry very sorry may na kuch nahi dekha ,,plzzz mujhe maaryega maat
akshara:naitik.!! naitik..!!
naitik:im sorry very sorry 
akshara:naitik..!! meri baat toh suniya ..
naitik:im sorry akshara very very sorry 
akshara:suddenly places her hand on naitik's mouth .and slighlty remove his hand from upon his eyes 
naitik:slowly opens his eye out of akshara's gentle touch on his lips
akshara:its okay naitik..i trust u .i knw u have noy done it wantedly i knw u ..wht sort of guy ur wht is ur character please do give explanation
      (air was blowing inside and was swinging with akshara's hair)
naitik:everything got numb he was just seeing akshara's swinging hair..the way thy were touching her cheek's her lips and akshara saying saying moving thm back of ear
akshara:naitik..!!naitik..!!
naitik:hah ..okay akshara thank u .n sorry one's again per may meeting ka liya late horaha hu..:
akshara:okay naitik byeee ..
naitik:move out of room bend his head in room n say 
       akshara ,,!!
akshara:hah .??
naitik:plzz continue with ur bueaty contest 
akshara:gets embarrised blushes out..n thorw the comb at naitik 
naitik:just run away frm thr
akshara: TO HER SELF
          suddenly look's at her self in mirror ..and notice that she actualy blushing 
         akshara tu blush bhi hoti hai ,,omg..!!
         chal chal aab pagal o ki tarha muskurana baand kaar aur rasmi aur nandini tera liya wait kaar rahe honga
                                                                                                                          CLUB
Akshara,rashmi and nandini at club having fun.
Rutraj and sneha were present in same club 
sneha:point out towards akshara and say .woh hai akshara .akshara maheswari varsha maheswari ki choti behen
rutraj;oh okay 
sneha:kya okay ..? kya tum samaj nahi raaha ho 
rutraj:kya..?
sneha:aagar tum usse nasdikiya baadoga toh..
rutraj:give me 5 sneha..!! i got u 
rutraj go to akshara and approch her for dance ..akshara agree to him .akshara was impressed by rutraj beacuse he was the one whom she was always looking for rich,modern..
she spend quality time with him she come's home happily and share with naitik everyting ..naitik was atmost sad ..but he was not understanding why was he sad,,whts making him sad 
months pass akshara and rutraj use to hang out together.
ONE NITE:rutraj and akshara were at a hotel on a dinner ..naitik come ther for a business metting he see akshara and rutraj.
   soon naitik complits his meeting and  see rutraj taking akshara to room ..naitik finds something fishy in it ..he follows thm 
naitik:passing all the room's to search out for akshara 
suddenly he hear's a shout it was akshara's naitik runs towards room he just kicks out door and rush inside..he see rutraj was trying to get physical with akshara .he just throws out rutraj .bangs him ..
akshara:see's this just run towards naitik and hugg him titly out of afarid.out of safty,out of pain..
naitik:hugged back akshara more titly to take her all afarid with in him
akshara got a sprain in leg due to which she was not able to walk naitik lifts her in her arms
akshara:naitik please mujhe neecha uttar dijiya koi dekha ga toh kya sochega last time yaad hai na kya hua 
naitik:cumon akshara app important hai mera liya,mujhe logo ki koi parwha nahi hai ,ki woh mera baare may kya sochenga app bas chu rahe hai
akshara:naitik aap mujhe daant kyu rahehai ..?
naitik:may kaha daant raha hu 
akshara:dekhiya app
naitik:chup akshara ek word aur nahi
                                                      NIGHT
akshara still in turma with what all happend with her ,,was sitting on bed and crying .
naitik:knew the restlessness of akshara and come to her 
KNock KHock...!!
akshara:kaun.??(she wipes out her tears)
naitik:akshara may anitik
akshara;go and open door and try to act normal 
naitik:(observing the tear back of akshara's smile)
         akshara aap theek toh hai na..??
akshara:hah hah im absolutly fine
naitik:akshara idhar meri auur dekhiya 
akshara:turn toward him
naitik:just keep his hand on akshara's shoulder and care for her 
akshara:(unable to take it anymore)hugg's naitik titly ..n starts crying out loudly 
naitik:addresing her hair,akshara its okay ..it happns per kuch hua toh nhai na 
akshara:still crying out loudly
naitik:bas akshara bas bohat roah chuki aap bas bhul jaaye sab kuch 
akshara:(catche's naitik hand) naitik .thank u naitik aagar aap nahi hota toh pata nahi 
naitik:puts his hand on akshara's mouth n say ..ek word aur nahi aur akshara ..may kyu nahi hota waha ..app taklif may ho ..aur may appki madat nahi kaaru aisa kabhi hua hai nahi 
     na.bas abhi aap us baat ko khatam kijiya
    aap na koi cream laagai ..nahi na may jaanta hu aap aapne liya kabhi kabhi care nahi kaarti
naittik sit down on his knee take akhsara's feet and apply medicine to her leg and treat it with atmost care
akshara:was just adoring at naitik..naitik's act moved her complitly.she was feeling as if she was in safest hands ever
naitik make akshara sleep on bed ,cover her with blanket n try to go 
akshara;naitik mujhe bohat daar laag raha hai akkela
naitik:sit on a chair next to akshara and care for her by addressing her head and make her sleep and he himself fall of sleep leaning on the bed holder
akshara;caught naitik's hand and slept with atmst tension free and fearless
                                                                                                                             MORNING
akshara wake up and see naitik lying on the bed corner gets moved and feel pitty for him 
akshara;TO HERSELF:tu bhi na akshara ,,khud aaram say sogai aur naitik.ko sarri raat pareshan kaardi 
just thn naitik wakes up .
akshara:Im sorry naitik m,eri wajha say 
naitik:bas akshara no sorry ..!!abb may jaata hu aapna khayal raakna raat ka baare may zyada maat sochna 
naitik left a adorable impression on akshara .which made her to feel less guilty for wht all happn 
precape:naitik plans a picnic with akshara ,varsha .shaurya.nandini and rashmi ..so that akshara feel better 

Edited by bebo. - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
me first
res edited
good part 
thnx for pm
Edited by -Rasmi24- - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
superb sonu very very nice...loved it😳 n loved ur writing😆 Edited by __Aleena__ - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
loved the part...first part tho ek dum kamal😳😳😳naitik ke barre main kya kahu😳😳😳...superb part...👏
Edited by ammu4u - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update thanks 4 d pm 
Posted: 11 years ago
vry nyc part n interesting too...
update nxt part soon...😃

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