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dil se rey:kriyaansh ff thread 2 part 34:pg 146 (Page 82)

tinatartari IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 April 2012 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
kritzz i ll!! :)
n thnks

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 6:28am | IP Logged
congrats 4 gtng such a gud result...ab jaldi se nxt part update karo...m dying 2 read it...well i luv ur ff a lot...u r superb writer...

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Posted: 22 April 2012 at 3:14am | IP Logged
                                                    CHAPTER 28
sorry frnds 4 the delay!!i ws dwn wid 102 fever n cudnt get outta bed.still em wid 100 fever bt in the 1st attempt i came here 2 update 4 u guys!!hope u like it!!n em nt gonna type on wrd this time as it ll take more tym 2 update then so bear wid me nw!!
thr ws lots of hustle n bustle in the party n kriyaansh enjoyed a lot!!they were very happy 2 win the round ov coordiantion n 2 b calld as a perfect couple.nw they were called on the dance floor 2 do a free lance dance
the tune in bg ws baahoon k drmiyaan!!!
rey 1st held her 1 hand n put it on his sholder,then he took the 2nd n took it in his hand n then placed his othr hand on her back n brought her closer.this gav tickling sensations 2 both(sorry 4 the repitition guys bt i cudnt thnk ov anythng else right nw)
they started shaking their legs in rhythm wid each othr.every1 ws watchng them in awe.then the lights fade out n evry1 started dancing.thr ws a rock n fast music nw!!n they moved wid faster steps.1st salsa,contemporary,rumba n then othr dance forms(sorry cnt thnk ov any abhi)
the scene ws gettng nobody ws watchng so rey moved closer 2 her ears n whispered
r:BC!whr z ma gift??
k:gift?wich gift??i ve already given u ur gift!
r:no BC!wot abt gift 4 this party?
k:ok wot do u need??
r:well...ummm...i need...ummm...A BIRTHDAY KISS!!!Wink
k:wot???birthday kiss??
r:sshhh!!BC dheeray!!sb sunleen ge to kia sochenge??n he chuckled lightly
k:ye ap kia keh rae o eagle??ap ko sharam nae ati??
r(sarcastically)sharam??kis c sharam??n kis baat ki??apne ap c kaun sharmata e??
k:ap ye baat ane ap se nae mjhse kar rae o!!
r:toh?iss c kia farq parta e??me n u r 1!!
she blushed
k(hit her shoulder playfully)ap b na!!!
r:main kia BC?bolo!!
she freed herself 4m his hold n ran away.he ran aftr her n their cute chasing session started!!
she hid herself behind a pillar n he came 4m bck n pecked her cheeks!!she ws shocked..
she turned bck 2 c him
r:kyun BC?hw ws it??
k:eagle!ap bohat badmash hotey ja rae o!!apko theek karna parega
r:kro na theek BC!tum c theek honey ko hum bekarar bethe hain!!
k:eagle!stop it
r:i ve nt started it yet honey!!
n then aftr smtyme their frnds came n calld them 4 a bonfire party..
they lit out a bonfire at night n sat infront ov it..1st the boys n then the grls danced around the bonfire on random songs n then all sat dwn while rey played the guitar wid kriya in his arms.every1 ws gettng envious ov the v bautiful n cute couple..
then they started playing truth or dare
it ws flt lt prateek s turn.he chose dare
raju:ok prateek tell me who ws ur 1st gf??
his gf anita ws cnfdnt he ll name her..
p:raju ye tu ne acha nae kia!!truth b bolte o n qs b aise karte o!!pass
r:no u ve 2 answer
p:well i dnt remembr
r:dnt pretend
p:ok it ws sadhna
anita became angry
a:prateek u casanova n they started chasing game.evry1 laughed
then it ws rey s turn.
p:ok baby!choose truth or dare
p:u coward!ok tell me the ame ov ur 1st GRLFRND
r(pointed 2wards kriya)its none othr than ma BC
she blushed n everybody:awww!!!
 prateek:ye eagle har dfa e bach jata e!!nt fair!!
then again the bottle ws spinned
then it ws kriya s turn.rey came 4ward truth or dare??
r:ouch!!!u seem 2 b in a very dangerous mode nw
every1 laughed
rashi came 4ward..
rashi 2 rey:i ll giv her the dare
rey:ok madam!as u wish
rashi:ok grl!woo the guy u love the most wid ur dance
all grls threw flying kisses at her
boys:wot an awesome dare
kriya ws taken aback 4 a while bt she composed herself n started dancing on sharara sharara around rey
n she swayed her body facing her bck 2wards rey n touching him wid her hands..
n she faced him n strted dancing infront ov him leaving him look seductively on her curves!!
n she pointed 2wards all the guys n moved 2 rey s bck n moved her hand thru her whole bck..he ws nw fully ON n he dint knw hw 2 stop her..she ws dancing wid the beats n he ws drooling ovr her..then he held her by her waist n started dancing alongwid her..(imagine their khudaa jaaney performance)
it ws gettng so uch romantic.he held her close at the end ov the dance n ws abt 2 kiss her wen evrybody clapped n he came bck 2 his senses..
then aftr playng evry1 ws tird so they laid dwn close 2 their loved 1s.rey placed his head in her lap.she started brushing his hair wid her fingers...
it ws heavenly n all slpt like tat!!!
romance in the air
so guys its all 4 2day.i hope i dintbore u so much!!nw i cnt thnk ov more.hav  a v severe headache

Edited by tinatartari - 27 April 2012 at 12:45pm

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Posted: 22 April 2012 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Firstly if u r still suffring wid fever toh update kyu kiya u should have taken rest
cuming to the update Amazing update shonu...
luved it to the core...bechare rey ko uska b'day kiss toh diya hota kriya ne
n wow kriya wooing rey luved it...i wont ask nex update fast u take care of ur health...get well soon

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Posted: 22 April 2012 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Awesome update!!
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Posted: 22 April 2012 at 5:19am | IP Logged
awesome update.. loved it...

chalo take care of ur health. updates toh baad mein aate hai..

u r a med student health. u shud knw that health is wealth...

and my party?????????

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Posted: 22 April 2012 at 6:56am | IP Logged
being in such can u dare 2 update...we wud hv surely waited untill u wer fit n fine...wat ws d need 2 get urself in more pain...cuming 2 ur update it ws nxt tym update nly if ur well...n can do it without suffering...i hope u get dat...
get well soon...

Edited by shenz_kriyaansh - 22 April 2012 at 6:57am

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