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dil se rey:kriyaansh ff thread 2 part 34:pg 146 (Page 30)

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 9:33am | IP Logged

                                                          CHAPTER 23

Scene contdd

So rey came n started 2 kneed the dough wid her entwining his fingers in hers..she ws feeling odd so she tried 2 shove him bt he held her more firmly..his thighs were touchng hers n her bck ws cmng in cntact wid his front..it ws quite odd n different 4 her..she tried 2 back off b trey ws nt realizing the situation he made her in..then she took sme water n playfully splashed it on his face..it ws floor mixed water n so did he n they started 2 hav a dough fight wid all their clothes messed up n their hair like a nest..

R:honey!leave it..i knw u cnt do it

K:r u challenging me??

R:no em nt!leave it..go n vhange..i ll make it

K:u get outta kitchen..i ll make it

R:I ll mke it

K:no I ll make it

N she set out 2 make a cake n wid lots of effort she succeeded in mkng 1!rey went 2 freshen himself as he ws v v messy aftr the dough fight n kriya remained in the kitchen..wen he came bck the cake ws ready bt aftr watching kriya he started laughing!!

K:wot happened??

R:look at ur face..

He took her infront ov the mirror n showed her..her face ws filled wid dough..he wiped it off wid his fingers n tat ws enuff 2 charge him..

Later she did all the decorations 4 him.then she asked him 2 close his eyes n make a wish..she wished 4 a happy lyf wid him..n he wished 4 her..

K:universe jee!jo kuch b rey ne mere sath kiya mjhe usy bhulaney main help karo plx..I want 2 restart ma lyf wid eagle..plx make him love me more than any1 in this wrld..n may we b happy 2gethr 4evr!!

R:universe jee!!mano k aur mere beech jo kuch b hua mjhe sb ik burey sapne ki tarha bhula do n me ko ek acha jeewan do BC k sath!!

Aftr tat he cut the cake.it ws a perfect birthday candle light dinner..the cake ws delicious...rey cut it taking kriya s hands in hers..n fed her 1st..then she fed him n put the rest ov the cake piece n his face'he also did the same n they had a cake fight..aftr getting all cake on face

R:the cake ws v tasty BC!y dint u lemme eat tat??

K:huh!!

R:cmon BC I wanna eat it

K:bt its finished nw

R:bt I ll eat it

N he came near her n started licking her face..she ws astonished..1st he licked it 4m her cheeks,then her forehead,then he moved 2 her lips..kriya backed off bt he held her waist in his arms n started licking her lips n then tastng her tongue..she 1st resisted bt later on gav in..aftrall it ws his birthday'wen he had enuff he gasped 4 air n they parted..

R:BC it ws ma best birthday ever..

K:meri bhi!!

R:wot??it ws ur birthday 2??

:well no it wsnt bt I always celebrated ma bday 2day..

R:n u dint tell me

K:cx it nt ma real bday..I used 2 celebrate this day 4 sm1 bt nw its all ovr

R:cmon dear!4get tat!it ws ur past n em least interested in it..em ur present n future..focus on me(smirk)

K:hit his shoulder..ap bhi na!!

R:ouch!!!

K(concerned)kia hua?jyada lagi kia??

R:no darling its sensual n laughed hard'n lemme tell u u r so tasty!i feel lyk I shud taste u again!!

K:eagle!behave urself..

R:cmon darling!i owe u!!

K:n I owe u!remember??

R:so em always ready!u cn make me urs wenever u want!!

K:EAGLEEE!!!

Thr at swaron:

Swayam knew it ws rey s birthday party..he wnted 2 give him a surprise party wid vicks thou he knew tat rey d b celebrating wid kriya 1st so he called up Sharon..

Sw:hey Sharon!wots up?

Sh:nthng..just sittng in ma room

Sw:cn u plx come wid me 2 the market..its ma frnds bday n I wnt 2 buy him a gift n I hav a v v pathetic choice..

Sh:ok come n pick me

Sw:cmng in 10 mins

He came outside her hostel,she took permission n came n he opened the door 4 her n she sat n he closed the door(sorry me bad at depicting scenes)

Thr they started 2 search 4 thngs 4 him..sharon chose a shirt 4 swayam'

Sh:this shirt ll look awesme on u!i wnt u 2 wear this 4 the party

Sw:ya!its nice...

Sh:so buy it

Sw:bt..

Sh:bt wot??

Sw:I dnt wear red

Sh:y??its cool na!u ll wear it 4 me ok?

Sw:ok baba!i ll wear it..khush??

Sh:very much..

Sw:ok nw buy smthng 4 ma frnd 2

N she selected a perfume 4 him n they bought the thngs n came bck..

PRECAP:

Pool party

PART 24
guys plx do watch this vid..its 1 ov the best kriyaansh scenes ever..i loved it 2 the core n watch it evryday!!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h934tgsUsko&feature=relmfu


Edited by tinatartari - 13 April 2012 at 8:39am

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 9:51am | IP Logged
aww..!! beautifull update.. n u included both swaron n kriyaannsh thnkz fr dat... wonderful update... thnkz a lot fr d pm... Smile

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comment fr chapter 23..Smile
firstly thnkzz fr updating 2 chapters...Smile i read dem nw actually.. Tongue
n i seriously loved dem... it was fun cake fight n dough fight lolz... overall a wonderfull update...keep updating... n dnt frget 2 pm lol..
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Awesum prt...
Kria mad d cake fr rey...
Luvd d way rey comforted her dat hezbollah hr future nd is nt bothered abt her past...
Swaron were cute...
Rey is so naughty...kria tastes vry nice...
Luvd d updt...
Lookin forward fr d further updates...
Waitin fr d pool party...

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 10:38am | IP Logged
Awesome update tina.
it was mindblowing.
wow so rey is celebrating his bday with kria.
thanks for the pm.
update next part soon.

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awsummm dear
love it
thnx alot 4 dis
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awsoomee tina jus love it to the coree waiting for the day wen their truth well be revealled oh man am kinda scred for dat day annd happy but waiting for dat dey hope it comes soon by the way cool updatee totally romantic aww waiting for nextt 

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