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dil se rey:kriyaansh ff thread 2 part 34:pg 146 (Page 28)

-Vaish- IF-Stunnerz

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quickly update na tina.. plzzz

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demand completed now update
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                                                          CHAPTER 23

Scene contdd

So rey came n started 2 kneed the dough wid her entwining his fingers in hers..she ws feeling odd so she tried 2 shove him bt he held her more firmly..his thighs were touchng hers n her bck ws cmng in cntact wid his ws quite odd n different 4 her..she tried 2 back off b trey ws nt realizing the situation he made her in..then she took sme water n playfully splashed it on his ws floor mixed water n so did he n they started 2 hav a dough fight wid all their clothes messed up n their hair like a nest..

R:honey!leave it..i knw u cnt do it

K:r u challenging me??

R:no em nt!leave it..go n vhange..i ll make it

K:u get outta kitchen..i ll make it

R:I ll mke it

K:no I ll make it

N she set out 2 make a cake n wid lots of effort she succeeded in mkng 1!rey went 2 freshen himself as he ws v v messy aftr the dough fight n kriya remained in the kitchen..wen he came bck the cake ws ready bt aftr watching kriya he started laughing!!

K:wot happened??

R:look at ur face..

He took her infront ov the mirror n showed her..her face ws filled wid dough..he wiped it off wid his fingers n tat ws enuff 2 charge him..

Later she did all the decorations 4 him.then she asked him 2 close his eyes n make a wish..she wished 4 a happy lyf wid him..n he wished 4 her..

K:universe jee!jo kuch b rey ne mere sath kiya mjhe usy bhulaney main help karo plx..I want 2 restart ma lyf wid eagle..plx make him love me more than any1 in this wrld..n may we b happy 2gethr 4evr!!

R:universe jee!!mano k aur mere beech jo kuch b hua mjhe sb ik burey sapne ki tarha bhula do n me ko ek acha jeewan do BC k sath!!

Aftr tat he cut the ws a perfect birthday candle light dinner..the cake ws delicious...rey cut it taking kriya s hands in hers..n fed her 1st..then she fed him n put the rest ov the cake piece n his face'he also did the same n they had a cake fight..aftr getting all cake on face

R:the cake ws v tasty BC!y dint u lemme eat tat??


R:cmon BC I wanna eat it

K:bt its finished nw

R:bt I ll eat it

N he came near her n started licking her face..she ws astonished..1st he licked it 4m her cheeks,then her forehead,then he moved 2 her lips..kriya backed off bt he held her waist in his arms n started licking her lips n then tastng her tongue..she 1st resisted bt later on gav in..aftrall it ws his birthday'wen he had enuff he gasped 4 air n they parted..

R:BC it ws ma best birthday ever..

K:meri bhi!!

R:wot??it ws ur birthday 2??

:well no it wsnt bt I always celebrated ma bday 2day..

R:n u dint tell me

K:cx it nt ma real bday..I used 2 celebrate this day 4 sm1 bt nw its all ovr

R:cmon dear!4get tat!it ws ur past n em least interested in it..em ur present n future..focus on me(smirk)

K:hit his shoulder..ap bhi na!!


K(concerned)kia hua?jyada lagi kia??

R:no darling its sensual n laughed hard'n lemme tell u u r so tasty!i feel lyk I shud taste u again!!

K:eagle!behave urself..

R:cmon darling!i owe u!!

K:n I owe u!remember??

R:so em always ready!u cn make me urs wenever u want!!


Thr at swaron:

Swayam knew it ws rey s birthday party..he wnted 2 give him a surprise party wid vicks thou he knew tat rey d b celebrating wid kriya 1st so he called up Sharon..

Sw:hey Sharon!wots up?

Sh:nthng..just sittng in ma room

Sw:cn u plx come wid me 2 the market..its ma frnds bday n I wnt 2 buy him a gift n I hav a v v pathetic choice..

Sh:ok come n pick me

Sw:cmng in 10 mins

He came outside her hostel,she took permission n came n he opened the door 4 her n she sat n he closed the door(sorry me bad at depicting scenes)

Thr they started 2 search 4 thngs 4 him..sharon chose a shirt 4 swayam'

Sh:this shirt ll look awesme on u!i wnt u 2 wear this 4 the party

Sw:ya!its nice...

Sh:so buy it


Sh:bt wot??

Sw:I dnt wear red

Sh:y??its cool na!u ll wear it 4 me ok?

Sw:ok baba!i ll wear it..khush??

Sh:very much..

Sw:ok nw buy smthng 4 ma frnd 2

N she selected a perfume 4 him n they bought the thngs n came bck..


Pool party

guys plx do watch this vid..its 1 ov the best kriyaansh scenes ever..i loved it 2 the core n watch it evryday!!

Edited by tinatartari - 13 April 2012 at 8:39am

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aww..!! beautifull update.. n u included both swaron n kriyaannsh thnkz fr dat... wonderful update... thnkz a lot fr d pm... Smile

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comment fr chapter 23..Smile
firstly thnkzz fr updating 2 chapters...Smile i read dem nw actually.. Tongue
n i seriously loved dem... it was fun cake fight n dough fight lolz... overall a wonderfull update...keep updating... n dnt frget 2 pm lol..

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Awesum prt...
Kria mad d cake fr rey...
Luvd d way rey comforted her dat hezbollah hr future nd is nt bothered abt her past...
Swaron were cute...
Rey is so naughty...kria tastes vry nice...
Luvd d updt...
Lookin forward fr d further updates...
Waitin fr d pool party...

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Awesome update tina.
it was mindblowing.
wow so rey is celebrating his bday with kria.
thanks for the pm.
update next part soon.

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awsummm dear
love it
thnx alot 4 dis

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