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dil se rey:kriyaansh ff thread 2 part 34:pg 146 (Page 125)

tinatartari IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 May 2012 at 9:57am | IP Logged

                                                 CHAPTER 33

Hi guys!me bck wid another update.this wont b 2 much significant in a way n in a way it d b!!as I em writing this update 2 make a foundation 4 the confrontation wich wud b in the next thread!!so no more speech 4m ma side.we go directly 2 the update!!

Kriya ws crying in her room at night!

K:universe jee!y it happened 2 me??wot did I do tat bad tat em punished 4 tat??1st u snatched away my 1st love my teddy 4m me due 2 an MU n I stopped loving n living.i lived 4 others dreams n aspirations.nw u again brought love in my life n wen I feel settled em again on the verge of losing it due 2 an MU!!y u so unkind 2 me??i hav lost my interest n faith in life!!my life,my love everything has become a joke!ll I lose my love yet again??

No dear!u wont lose ur love again:a voice 4m the window came

Kriya turned 2 c who it ws n she ran 2 hug him

K:karan!u here??wot a gr8 surprize??hw do u knw em here?

Ka:doll!i took ur address buss!dnt ask me hw bt I did!

K:I missed u so much karan!

Ka:me 2!nw cn I knw y z my doll crying so badly??

Kriya told him the whole story(widout mentioning rey;her eagle as she wanted 2 give karan a surprise)karan listened 2 her patiently

Ka:doll!i got it!dnt worry I ll teach them a big lesson.they ll get 2 knw whom they messed up wid?btw whoz this 2nd love tat u were talking abt wid universe jee??

K:tat..umm..well I wanna love again.tat I ws sayng.

Ka:hmm..u ll soon!smbody v special ll enter ur lyf n u ll love the feel ov it!

K:ya!n she smiled.

Thr at the hotel

ViYam woke up due 2 the shrieks ov the girls.4 sometime they cudnt recollect wot ws gng on!!then they realized the position in wich they were sleeping.they were lying on top ov each othr wid their legs intertwined wid each othr.the grls cudnt bear their proximity.

Sh:u guys r disgusting

N:they r gay!!yuck!!

N they set 2 leave n they ran aftr the grls

ViYam:hey listen!wotevr u saw wsnt the truth!!plx listen!

Bt the grls ran as fast as they can n they followed them.wen they reached the hotel gate,the manager shouted

Ma:hey listen!pay before u leave!

N they had 2 stop n pay before checking ws such a hilarious scene wen the boys were running aftr the grls on the road.some ppl saw them n thot they were tryng 2 misbehave wid the grls so they surrounded them n gav them a perfect beating.the grls saw all tat n cudnt stop themselves 4m laughing.wen they had had enuff the grls came 2 rescue

Grls:plx stop beating them.they were nt messing wid us.they r our frnds.

N the ppl apologized n left them.

G:so hw ws the beating?(suppressing their laughter)


N they started running aftr them.finally they were outta breath n stopped 2 take rest!

B:wot u ppl did wsnt right!

G:n wot u ppl were dng wsnt right eithr!

B:stop it!we r nt gay ok!

G:acha!wot were u dng 2gthr in tat posture then??

V:I do sleep like tat!

Sw:n he slept n I ws drunk so I dnt knw..

They were still in a hangover state n the grls made them run 4 so long.swayam acted as if collapsed n fell on the floor!

V:bro!wot happened??wake up!

N he started cursing the grls..

U killed ma bro.he ws still in hangover state n u accused him n then made him run aftr u

Girls became worried n bent down 2 c swayam.

V:u both stay away!em the dr.i knw hw 2 recover him bck.

He bent down 2 chk his pulse n other vitals.they were normal.then he came near his face n tats wen swayam winked at him.he realized wot he ws supposed 2 do n said.

V:guys!he has gone in shock.we need 2 resuscitate him bck.

Grls panicked

N:oh no bhai!plx wake up!neha worried.

Sh:nw hw he ll come bck.

V:thr z 1 thng we cn do.if a person goes in hangover shock,only the kiss of his beloved cn bring him bck.


V:ya kiss!or he cn go into coma n die.

The grls were so worried tat they cudnt comprehend the evil plan ov the guys!

sharon ws so much worried tat she instantly went 2 him n kissed his cheeks!tears were falling down 4m her eyes as she ws considering herself responsible 4 swayam s demise..
swayam cudnt c her in this state n so he changed his plan ov dragging the drama any furthur n he instantly opened his eyes..
vicky ws lil disappointed wid tat he dint carry the drama furthur bt he said wid imitation smile on his face
v:yay!!awesome!c wot i told u!the kiss ov a true lover cn bring him bck.this shows u r his true lover sharon bhabhi!
n wid the cmnt bhabhi sharon blushed!!
v:oho!!wow!so our bhabhi z blushing
sw:stop teasing her vicky!!
v:so nw bro also joined bhabhi!wot a true love!
neha hit him hard on his shoulder!
n:shame on u vicky!!
v:sorry kaagu!!
v:ya!u hav a sweet voice deewani so i ll call u kaagu 4m nw on!
n:love u deewaney!!
sw:ahem ahem!
v:take sme throat lozenges bro!u r havng a thrush!!
sw:god!nt again!!i hate drs nw!!
thr at singhaniya mansion
rey went 2 meet his mother n singhaniya ws outta town!
shilpa ws overwhelmed 2 c her elder son bck home aftr 2 long!
shi:hi my son!hw r u??its so gud 2 c u aftr so long!
r:mom i missed u so much n i missed ur haath ka khana!!
shi:son!then u ll hav it as long as u here!
r:plx make sme gulaab zaamun 4 me.em v happy!!
shi:ya 4 sure
r:mom whr z pinky?
shi:whr else she cn b?she ll b in her room


 So so guys!hw ws the update?



karan taking revenge on shivam.
fight sequence
rey comes bck
swayam manofyng sharon
vicky neha tiff


N plz plz plz dnt 4get 2 hit the like button if u like it n cmnt n if u dint like it need ur suggestions 2 improve so cmnt ll encourage me 2 write more!!2 lazy 2 send 120 pms nw.hope u understand.ll send pms most probably aftr cmng 4m school!!

Edited by tinatartari - 19 May 2012 at 8:00am

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Posted: 18 May 2012 at 10:00am | IP Logged

HPHolic-3 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 May 2012 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Nice update,haha girls think that viyam r gay,bechara.vicky teases sharon n neha hit vicky,amazing
shiksha_03 Goldie

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Posted: 18 May 2012 at 10:29am | IP Logged
amazing update...waiting to see what happens next...pls continue soon
--RAINA-- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 May 2012 at 10:42am | IP Logged
nice update...yaar mujhe na lambe lambe comment dene ni ate h to short m samjh jaya karo ki update acha tha nd u all r awsome writes...
Dazzling_Smile IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 May 2012 at 11:43am | IP Logged
awesome ..
i loved it
but where is rey???
swayam kuch ziada hi naughty nhi ho gaya??
i loved that part..
and karan and kriya??
hmmm so rey kab wapis aye ga??
update soon
-FrozenRain- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 May 2012 at 11:55am | IP Logged
This was a amazing update tina 
Lovely one.
Thanks for updating. Continue it soon.

Poppy:I dont know telegu:(
spicyrays Goldie

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Posted: 18 May 2012 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
Nyc update... Bt missin kriyaansh...bechare vicky nd swayam kitni maar khane padi unko gals k karan,...hehehe

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