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so guys em here wid yet anothr update.hope u like it!!em sorry 4 no kriyaansh romance bt u knw all tym romance z nt so interestng n thr r othrs thngs in lyf 2!!bt i promise 4 a big surprize n many twistsThr ws a tussle gng on between chotay n moti(names crdt goes 2 sandhya) n evry1 ws enjoying their cute fight.sharon came 4m behind n ws shocked 2 c this.they were holding each other s hairs n pulling it badly.vick behaved like a 5 yr old boy infront of neha..
Sh:damn!this grl started fighting wid her deewana 2!i dnt understand wot ll happen ov this!!
She came 2 her n stopped her.
Sh:stop it neha!wot r u dng??r u mad??
N:c sharon!he z mr Vicky singhaniya.the idiot chotey we had in childhood n he z callng me moti!
Sh:wHAATTT???really!!(n she instantly pulled him into a hug)hw r u chotey??
V:u also started this stupid chotey chotey!!i hate it!!
Sh:ok ok!so wot r u dng nowadays??
V:gng 2 b dr vick.stdyng in _ medical school
Sh:wot??really??then u must b kriya s classfellow
V:yup n we r v gud frnds.
Sh:hmm'.n hz rey dng?
V:well he z in IAF.he n k'(he ws nterrupted by swayam who came 4m behind n tried 2 cover up the blunder vick ws abt 2 commit)
Sw:hey vick!hw r u??(n he pulled him into a tight hug n whispered in his ears!!u moron!r u mad??y were u blurting out our secret?remember they r nt 1 yet n we still hav long way 2 go)whr were u in all those years bro!i missed u so much!
V:I missed u 2 buddy!nw u ve become a gr8 personality.ur built z also very fit n u look smart.em sure many grls wud drool over u n u must hav lots ov gfs
Sw:well em nt tat lucky!hav just one!(n held Sharon s hand.she blushed)
V:owww!!!wow!!!this calls 4 party man!!
Sw:any tym budd!!
N they started partyng.they ordered shampaigne 4 the guys n girls ordered orange juice bt u knw swayam z swayam,he signaled the waitor 2 mix sme rum wid the orange juices.n then he came wid their orders.
Sw:no no its gud.finish it
Sh:I cn smell smthng fishy.show me neha
Sw:no no thr z nthng fishy.u take ur own juice Sharon.
Sharon tasted it n spit tat out
Sh:yuck!its so bitter
Sw:cmon Sharon!its orange juice na!tats y!nw take it!!
N on swayam s so much insistence she had 2 take it n she got high n so do all the grls..swayam ws inwardly v happy tat thr ll b many confessions 2day.
Sw:ok guys!lets go 2 our rooms.
V:y rooms?we cn go home na!
Sw:no!i thnk we shud stay.
N he asked the receptionist ov the nearby hotel 2 give 2 rooms,he had a nasty idea ov makng vick n neha stay in 1 room n he n Sharon in another bt 2 his dismay thr ws only 1 room available so he had 2 take it.
He came wid the keys n took them 2 the room.vick n neha were so much drunk tat they cudnt walk properly.here swayam ws cursing himself tat all hi plan ws destroyed.
Swayam opened the door n all entered.vick hit the bed 1st
V:this is my bed n em gonna sleep here.moti u cn join me bt no1 else
N:moti kxko bola chotey??
V:aey!dnt call me chotey!!
N:n u dnt call me moti!
N they both started pillow fight..
Sh:swayam I also wanna do pillow fight wid u n she started tapping her ankle on the floor like kids
Sw:oh no!whr em I struck??cmon Sharon its nt gd
Sh:no!cmon lets fight!!
Sw:plx Sharon no!!
Bt she dint listen 2 him n went n grabbed a pillow n started hitting him..
Sw:stop it Sharon.god!whr em I struck??
N he forcefully dragged Sharon 2 the washroom n made her stand below the shower n turned it on..both became wet..instead of gaining consciousness,Sharon started enjoying the watr!!
Sw:god!kitni charh gayye e isko!!she z highly completely so much tat water z nt dng anything 2 her!!
Sh:swayam u look so cute wen u angry.ur wrinkles n pouts r so lovely.coochie coochie!!u r so cute!!i like u!!no no I love u swayam.
Sw became inwardly happy
Sw:I love u 2 sharon.wish u cud hav said tat 2 me in ur senses
N aftr smtym he took a towel gown n wrapped it around her n wrapped the othr 1 around him n came out.
Sh:no swayam!i wanna enjoy more..plx..
Sw:no dear!cmon change quickly!
N:deewanay u r so cute!
V:deewani!u r beautiful.
N:I love u
V:I love u 2!
Sw(thnkng):wow!its awesome.my plan z working bt its nt gng the way it shud!bt still never mind!!u r superb swayam n smirked
Sw:ok guys!nw lets go 2 sleep..
V:I ll sleep on bed wid ma deewani
N:neha loving it
Sw:stop it guys!u ll regret it later!cmon we guys ll sleep on the floor n the grls cn sleep on bed!!
(thou swayam has naughty plans bt aftrall neha z his real sis.hw cn a bro c his sis lyk tat??)
Thr kriya ws so sad.she cried evry night wid rey s pic in her hand thnkng hw ll he react 2 evrythng?ll he trust her or nt??her sleep,hunger n evrythng ws disturbed.she ws loing weight n her grades.she ws losing herself.thr rey ws busy wid his mission n he cudnt evn call kriya 4m thr.he wson his training flights.evryday on his flight,he remembrd universe jee n requested him 2 take care of his baat cutter.its been a week since he left n it ws his last day nw..he got awarded wid the best pilot n he ws v happy.he wanted 2 surprize kriya.
Kriyaansh facing the truth!
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Loved Chotey-Moti relationship.
They were so cute..
Liked d way swayam told vicky dat he n sharon were in a relation.
Swayam's dirty mind finally got some work...
He made them hav d mixed drinks..
Loved Sharon's drunken avatar she was so cute.
Poor Kriya she was missing rey n so was him.
Rey got d best pilot award dat was so gud..
Waiting for d next part...
Dont even think to discontinue it.
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