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dil se rey:kriyaansh ff thread 2 part 34:pg 146 (Page 113)

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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 9:10am | IP Logged

                                               CHAPTER 32

so guys em here wid yet anothr update.hope u like it!!em sorry 4 no kriyaansh romance bt u knw all tym romance z nt so interestng n thr r othrs thngs in lyf 2!!bt i promise 4 a big surprize n many twists

Thr ws a tussle gng on between chotay n moti(names crdt goes 2 sandhya) n evry1 ws enjoying their cute fight.sharon came 4m behind n ws shocked 2 c this.they were holding each other s hairs n pulling it badly.vick behaved like a 5 yr old boy infront of neha..

Sh:damn!this grl started fighting wid her deewana 2!i dnt understand wot ll happen ov this!!

She came 2 her n stopped her.

Sh:stop it neha!wot r u dng??r u mad??

N:c sharon!he z mr Vicky singhaniya.the idiot chotey we had in childhood n he z callng me moti!

Sh:wHAATTT???really!!(n she instantly pulled him into a hug)hw r u chotey??

V:u also started this stupid chotey chotey!!i hate it!!

Sh:ok ok!so wot r u dng nowadays??

V:gng 2 b dr vick.stdyng in _ medical school

Sh:wot??really??then u must b kriya s classfellow

V:yup n we r v gud frnds.

Sh:hmm'.n hz rey dng?

V:well he z in IAF.he n k'(he ws nterrupted by swayam who came 4m behind n tried 2 cover up the blunder vick ws abt 2 commit)

Sw:hey vick!hw r u??(n he pulled him into a tight hug n whispered in his ears!!u moron!r u mad??y were u blurting out our secret?remember they r nt 1 yet n we still hav long way 2 go)whr were u in all those years bro!i missed u so much!

V:I missed u 2 buddy!nw u ve become a gr8 personality.ur built z also very fit n u look smart.em sure many grls wud drool over u n u must hav lots ov gfs

Sw:well em nt tat lucky!hav just one!(n held Sharon s hand.she blushed)

V:owww!!!wow!!!this calls 4 party man!!

Sw:any tym budd!!

N they started partyng.they ordered shampaigne 4 the guys n girls ordered orange juice bt u knw swayam z swayam,he signaled the waitor 2 mix sme rum wid the orange juices.n then he came wid their orders.

N:its bitter.yuck!!

Sw:no no its gud.finish it

Sh:I cn smell smthng me neha

Sw:no no thr z nthng fishy.u take ur own juice Sharon.

Sharon tasted it n spit tat out

Sh:yuck!its so bitter

Sw:cmon Sharon!its orange juice na!tats y!nw take it!!

N on swayam s so much insistence she had 2 take it n she got high n so do all the grls..swayam ws inwardly v happy tat thr ll b many confessions 2day.

Sw:ok guys!lets go 2 our rooms.

V:y rooms?we cn go home na!

Sw:no!i thnk we shud stay.

N he asked the receptionist ov the nearby hotel 2 give 2 rooms,he had a nasty idea ov makng vick n neha stay in 1 room n he n Sharon in another bt 2 his dismay thr ws only 1 room available so he had 2 take it.

He came wid the keys n took them 2 the room.vick n neha were so much drunk tat they cudnt walk swayam ws cursing himself tat all hi plan ws destroyed.

Swayam opened the door n all entered.vick hit the bed 1st

V:this is my bed n em gonna sleep here.moti u cn join me bt no1 else

N:moti kxko bola chotey??

V:aey!dnt call me chotey!!

N:n u dnt call me moti!

N they both started pillow fight..

Sh:swayam I also wanna do pillow fight wid u n she started tapping her ankle on the floor like kids

Sw:oh no!whr em I struck??cmon Sharon its nt gd

Sh:no!cmon lets fight!!

Sw:plx Sharon no!!

Bt she dint listen 2 him n went n grabbed a pillow n started hitting him..

Sw:stop it Sharon.god!whr em I struck??

N he forcefully dragged Sharon 2 the washroom n made her stand below the shower n turned it on..both became wet..instead of gaining consciousness,Sharon started enjoying the watr!!

Sw:god!kitni charh gayye e isko!!she z highly completely so much tat water z nt dng anything 2 her!!

Sh:swayam u look so cute wen u angry.ur wrinkles n pouts r so lovely.coochie coochie!!u r so cute!!i like u!!no no I love u swayam.

Sw became inwardly happy

Sw:I love u 2 sharon.wish u cud hav said tat 2 me in ur senses

N aftr smtym he took a towel gown n wrapped it around her n wrapped the othr 1 around him n came out.

Sh:no swayam!i wanna enjoy more..plx..

Sw:no dear!cmon change quickly!

N:deewanay u r so cute!

V:deewani!u r beautiful.

N:I love u

V:I love u 2!

Sw(thnkng):wow!its plan z working bt its nt gng the way it shud!bt still never mind!!u r superb swayam n smirked

Sw:ok guys!nw lets go 2 sleep..

V:I ll sleep on bed wid ma deewani

N:neha loving it

Sw:stop it guys!u ll regret it later!cmon we guys ll sleep on the floor n the grls cn sleep on bed!!

(thou swayam has naughty plans bt aftrall neha z his real sis.hw cn a bro c his sis lyk tat??)

Thr kriya ws so sad.she cried evry night wid rey s pic in her hand thnkng hw ll he react 2 evrythng?ll he trust her or nt??her sleep,hunger n evrythng ws disturbed.she ws loing weight n her grades.she ws losing herself.thr rey ws busy wid his mission n he cudnt evn call kriya 4m thr.he wson his training flights.evryday on his flight,he remembrd universe jee n requested him 2 take care of his baat cutter.its been a week since he left n it ws his last day nw..he got awarded wid the best pilot n he ws v happy.he wanted 2 surprize kriya.


Kriyaansh facing the truth!

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Edited by tinatartari - 16 May 2012 at 9:12am

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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 9:21am | IP Logged



Loved Chotey-Moti relationship.

They were so cute..

Liked d way swayam told vicky dat he n sharon were in a relation.

Swayam's dirty mind finally got some work...

He made them hav d mixed drinks..

Loved Sharon's drunken avatar she was so cute.

Poor Kriya she was missing rey n so was him.

Rey got d best pilot award dat was so gud..

Amazing updt..

Waiting for d next part...

Dont even think to discontinue it.

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 16 May 2012 at 9:58pm
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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Amazing update
swayams plan was too gud...swaron n viha confessed...hehe
how cute
no cant see kria in this
and rey was awarded...wowww

Edited by --Kinjal-- - 16 May 2012 at 9:45am
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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 9:31am | IP Logged
ittss awsomme mann totally cool plz dont discntinueeiitt i really wanna read onn plz dntt
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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Naughty swayam Wink ,viha confess their love n sharon is soo cute Tongue i hope rey meet kria soon..Update it ASAP...N don't ever think of discontinue it,it is the of my fav.ff Star
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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 9:34am | IP Logged
its was amazing as usual... deewana-deewani say i luv u... n SwaRon too sharing the same moment under the shower but that too Sharon not in her senses...Kria is so fed up wid this Moron Shivam...n precap is really scary...what if, they cum to know the truth... hope u update soon
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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 9:44am | IP Logged
Amazing update tina.It was lovely one.
Thanks for pm.
Hope there r no shocks in twists.
Update next part soon.

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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 9:47am | IP Logged
gonna soon complete this thread as well n start a new one..

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