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PaSSion oF LuV *kriyaansh* SS #2 completed (Page 14)

anniemathiaskr IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
it was awesome i just loved it the update was very romantic it seems

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keetha... Senior Member

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
Smileits ok nams take ur own time we will wait 4 ur updatesSmile

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Shweta-kriyansh Goldie

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 6:16pm | IP Logged
hey,nxt update kab karoge aap...dis ff is very gud and romantic...i despised the f's which had married couples but dis 1 alongwid few others seriuosly stole my breath away//////////////////...wl b waiting fr nxt update...

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..nams.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 11:03am | IP Logged


Part 1:




sorry for typos and errors and dint re-check Ouch

After reaching delhi they completed the formalities of registrations.. and headed to a place unknown to kriyaansh..

Rey: swayam wer rv going ??? hope u knw we have our flight early mrng?

Sw: haan baba I knw! Don't worry u nd kria, actually we all will enjoy it! he said wid a smirk..

Rey gave up in finding out were wer they going..

Finally swayam stopped at the outskirts of the city.. a very big palace kind lodge stood infront of their eyes..

All wer confused on why r they coming to lodge ?? wernt they supposed to enjoy ?? wasn't it was party time for the gang ? thn why wer they here ?? confused rey raised his eye brows at swayam..


Sw: so guys isn't this part day ???

All: huh ?? *confused*

Sw: okay okay I knw many of u wondering why rv here ?? jus for a change.. guys this is Delhii Darbaar lodge.. lets rest here for sometime.. and then move to party mood..

Sh: party mood in THIS lodge ???

(p.s lodge looked more like a palace a traditional one)

Kr: guys its sounds fun.. winking at swayam as she understood his plan..

Swayam was amazed to c kria found out.. but he registered..

Rey: okay kay fine! Chale.. I really need some rest of all this buzz..

They headed to the rooms..

Everyone received swayam's msg:

"guys have ur breakfasts in ur rooms.. and come down for common lunch in the afternn.."

Rey freshend up and saw kria staring out at the window..

He hugged her from behind..

Rey: kria..

Kria: hmm.. inhaling rey's fragrance as she rested her head on his shoulders..

Rey: kya soch rhi ho.. ???

Kria: rey is this some kind of a dream ??

Rey broke the hug and looked into her eyes..

Kria: rey tym kitni jaldi beet jaati hena ? aisa lagtha hai kal hi mei Mumbai agayi.. kal hi aapse mili.. pyaar hogyaa… fights MUs ke beech finaly hum mile.. finally hum relationship mei agaye.. and aapne meri mom ko convince kardi dance ke liye.. aur aaj ?? humari shaadi b hui.. aur meri sabse bada dream pura ho rha hai..

Rey smiled at her innocence..

Rey: kria ? btw tumne jo kuch b kaha sab sahi hai.. but one question..

Kria: kya ?

Rey: kya tumari saari sapne pure hogaye ??

Kria: hmmm almost.. shaadi hui.. we r going to London.. so saare sapne pure hogaye..!!

Rey: kuch nhi bacha ??

Moving closer.. she startled and moved back..

Kr: umm well k kuch nhi.. haan aage jaake shayad aur sapne add ho jaye.. she said stammering..

Rey: really now ?? indone ke alava u nevr wished for anythn else ?

Kr: hmm n nhi..

He moved still closer.. nibbling on her hair.. holding her waist.. she rested her chin on her shoulders..

Rey: bolona..

He kissed her nape..

Kr: umm n n nhi.. it was getting hard to answer anythn wen she was in his arms..

Rey smiled and whispered..

Rey: lekin mera ek sapna abi thak pura nhi hua..

Kria looked puzzled at him breaking the hug.. he smirked..

And brushed his lips on hers.. she was taken aback of his actions.. he broke the kiss and whispered..

Rey: mein tumei puri tarah apna banana chahtha hoon..

She opened her eyes.. wid amuse..

Kr: rey..

He placed his finger on her lips

Rey: ab toh I have licence hena.. he winked her kissing her 'mangalsutra'

She blushed..

And he aimed at her lips. Before they cud indulge in further romance the door bell rang..

And they received the call for lunch..

Rey smiled at kria irritatedly.. kria giggled and dragged him out of the room..

*in dining table*

Sw: guys! Ab shuru hoga hum sab ka surprise for the one and only KRIYAANSH..

All hoot.. kria blushed..

They had royal lunch.. cut the Biggest cake.. and all relaxed in the couch in a rest room..

Rey: swayam hum yahan kya kar rhe hai ?? can v go to our rooms ??

Sh: kyu rey ?? kria ke saat romance karne ke liye itna bekaaraar hai ??

All laughed and strtd teasing..

Sw: woah guys lets come to the point.. btw rey we all going to amusment park near by..

All: WHAT ??

Sw: yes!!! Wont that be fun ?? c'mon guys!! It's the best way to celebrate!! Hena ?? *winks*

All agree


In water park..

Everyone had their gala time.. it was fun.. they dint realise how time passed by..

Those water rides..

Kria cud nt take her eyes off him.. he looked really hot.. nd rey was trying his best to control his growing desires to have her.. to inhale her .. to kiss her.. to make her his.. her swimming suit wasn't helping either..

Since whole gang always sticked to them purposely to get them go pink wid blush, he had to stay in his limits.. but somehow he found the time!!


~dark water break~

He took two passes for 'dark water break'.. what is dis ?? well no one in his gang had a clue.

Sw: wer wer u rey ??

Rey: umm I jus went to get some snacks.. he grinned as a waiter walked in wid juices and some snacks..

Rey: guys I hav passes for scary house.. who wants to join ??

All seemed excited.. but not kria.. as she alwz dint like scary houses much.. neither rey wanted scratches over his body due to her fear.. he chuckled thinking what wud she react wen she gets in to 'dark water break' ??

Sw: okay chalo..

Rey: but kria ?

Kria: umm I I will manage.. tum sab hona..

She smiled weakley..

Rey: because u don't like dem.. and ur way to scared of dark don't u ??

Sw: lekin hum sab toh hena *confused*

Rey: ya .. but I thought if we can relax a bit.. or go abt swimming ??

Sw: but..

Sh: guys not fair.. lets all enjoy na..

All : haan kria ko b ana hoga..

Rey frowned.. kria realised he was upto something..

All knew how much kria was afraid of dark.. more than all of them.. it seemed lik it was some phobia for her..

Kria's agreed to go actually unwillingly..

Kria: guys lets go..

Rey frowned again..

Sharon defended..

Sh: guys its okay lets not go…

All gals agreed wid sharon while boys wer confused of her decision

swayam came to the rescue..

Sw: okay no probs.. lets not go to scary house..

All boys along wid rey : WHAT WHY ??????

Swayam winked at rey..

Sw: guys understand gals darr jaate hai..

Kria: huh ?

Sh: what do u mean by that ???

Sw: ki tum dar gayi..

Sh: Sharon kisi se nhi darti!!

Sw: prove it!!

Vi: ur ryt!! Sharon en kaha nhi jaate toh saare gals agree hogaye!! All gals are darpoks!!

Neha hit vicky on his arms..

Neha: neha not scared and gals not darpok!!!!

Vicky smirked at her..

All gals fell on the game!! The so called reverse pshycology.. when gals wr buys fighting wid boys.. Sharon supported gals.. and reyam winked at each othr..

Sh: THAT'S IT!! we ar going!!

Kria stepped in: yess me to!!

Rey frowned again and slapped his head 'kya karu is ladki ka!!!!' 'UNIVERSEJI' he cried a bit loud..

All looked at him..

Kria: apne kuch kaha ??

Rey: umm wo um nthn..

Rey looked at swayam confused again..

Swayam thought for a while..

Sw: okay chalte hai he admitted..

Rey shot a glare at him..

All turn to leave.. kria feared.. nd gulped..

Swayam and rey wer coming behind..

Swayam looked at rey.. slowly kicked rey's feet nd rey fell down..

He winced.. 'ouch Damn!!!!'

And all came upto him.. kria held his leg to examine.. and swayam at rey.. and rey understood and swayam came forward.

Sw: rey rey kya hua ??

Rey: swayam sprain lagtha hai.. bahut dard ho rha hai..

Kr: rey ?? kaha dard ho rha hai ? touching his feet..

Her mere touch sent shivers down his spine..

Sh: rey tumei aram karni chahiye.. guys lets go back to lodge..

Rey: aae wo wo its okay.. thode der relax karoonga toh teek hojaonga..

Sh: but..

Sw: Sharon rehne do.. guys lets go.. kria tum rey ko wahan rest room mei leke jao he will bettr after sometime..

Kr: rey are u sure tumei wapas lodge nhi jana ??

Rey: hmm ya..

All left them and went to scary house

(ok I will nt give details what wil happn inside scary house as our focus is on kriyaansh)

im not saying anythn much... wait for next updt.. and get ready to witness i mean read the suhaag raat waali updt asap.. its nt far guys.. WinkWink

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-Vaish- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 11:11am | IP Logged
yippee u updated

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chsripriya Senior Member

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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 11:15am | IP Logged
awesome as usual loved reyam they rally true frnds they can talk with eyes and kria is such an innocent boys r too smart they used reverse psychology love d the update plz update soon and thnx for pm me

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ekiholo IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 11:23am | IP Logged
ah...itna chhota update,,aur vo bhi kaha chhora!!grrr...plz update soon n do pm me!

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-Vaish- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 11:25am | IP Logged
aise point pe koi end karta hai kya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kitna accha chal rha tha...

bechaara rey always trying to come up  with something but his plan is always ruined... bad luck hi kharaab hai...

lekin finally good luck chamka... all thanks to swayam...

woder kya hone wala hai dark water break mein... vaise hai kya????

kriya cannot escape plus she was already drooling over him so zyada opposition bhi nhi hoga...

chalo update asap

sorry woh mujhse res unres wala kaam nhi hota toh issliye directly yuppiieee se first comment diya. hope u don't mind

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