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Chaand Sitaare... ArHi OS (Page 7)

farfar319 Senior Member
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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 9:17am | IP Logged
Loved it. I love it whenn Arnav realizes how much he misses all the crazy that is Khushi and how much he's used to it. 

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 9:17am | IP Logged
When the 'Arnav-starts-thinking-with-his-brain' track is on, I would hope this plays out! *sigh* wishful thinking I guess. Lovely fic :)

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 9:26am | IP Logged
Simplicity is true beauty, well that's what I go by!!!

And this OS is just that, defining Khushi simple yet exquisite beauty!!!

Loved the song and well it coordinated with Arnav noticing Khushi every simple behavior and gesture!!

Truly a beautiful and thoughtful OS dear, excellent work!!!

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 9:56am | IP Logged
amazin os

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 11:33am | IP Logged
beautiful os well written loved how you described his feeling and his ways of thing about her and his realization about he might be wrong loved it thanks for the pm

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 11:51am | IP Logged
OHH WOWW.. I LOVED THE SONG CHOSEN N HIS DETAILING FOR EACH N EVRYTHNG.. IT WAS BEAUTIFUL ... U SHUD CONTINUE THIS... THNX FOR THE PM... :)

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lyraa99

u said it all... Arnav's gradual realization of Khushi's innocence.. the way he is puzzled at her behavior and even after all this he cant stop loving her,,, him marveling at her childlike innocence,,,her carefree attitude.. n then the song that added beauty to the entire os
awesome

Thank You so much, Lyra! :)

I am so glad you got all the emotions and enjoyed my work! :)

Originally posted by zaniax

awww..tht was soo sweet & beautifully written . Loved the way Arnav silently admired her and rmbrs the smallest details.Day Dreaming
Fabulous piece of work..it was a pleasure reading it. :)

Thank You so much, Zania! :)

I am glad you feel so! :)
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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by melovemayur

Beautiful OS!!

Thank You! :)

Originally posted by Smita.M

Fantastic OS!Loved how u co-ordinated the lyrics of the song with the story!Clap
 
M a fan of ur writing yaar,u write awesome stuff!

Thank You sooo much! :)

I am just glad you like it and am truly humbled. :)

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