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Chaand Sitaare... ArHi OS (Page 14)

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 2:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shruti_P

Wow Rae
It was so beautiful
Reading it once again the song is so apt here

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by aditi07

brilliantly written...Superb OSClapClap
loved the way u hv shown arnav's gradual realization...him noticing every little about khushi...him feeling lonely & alone without herEmbarrassed...awesome one!! really hope in show too they show a gradual movement!

Thank You so much! :)

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 2:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Inked

Beautiful layers of realization for Arnav shown in your work.
Also speaks to how certain people wrap themselves around our heart and we fail to realize until they become silent. You capture that.

The bit where she winces while brushing her hair was really well-written---his response to wanting to eliminate everything that disturbed her even if it was her own hair.
Made me smile.



Thank You so much! :)

I am glad you enjoyed the plot and my writing style.

Originally posted by .Saraa.

loved it..well written

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 2:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lena07

loved it rae Hug
well written...
i like this part very much aaj mausam hai suhana,kapre dhonay ka hai bahaanaLOLDay Dreaming
Day Dreaming

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Originally posted by flowers4u

excellent update ...beautifully written ... keep on writtting

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Originally posted by areeba_blossom

That was on cute OS! 

Really sweet! Loved it!

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 3:18am | IP Logged
This was simple n beautiful...

Beautifully penned down...!!

Loved it...!!

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 4:00am | IP Logged
Awesome OS..
very nicely written..

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Posted: 13 April 2012 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -bansi-

This was simple n beautiful...

Beautifully penned down...!!

Loved it...!!

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it! 

Originally posted by swetha10

Awesome OS..
very nicely written..

Thank You! :)
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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 9:39am | IP Logged
Definetely she affected him in more ways than he would acknowledge!

Beautifully written!!

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pikudika

Definetely she affected him in more ways than he would acknowledge!

Beautifully written!!

Thank You so much! :)

Glad you liked it.

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