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Chaand Sitaare... ArHi OS (Page 13)

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 12:56am | IP Logged
Rae my darling i loved it... sorry for my late comment sweets...

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 4:20pm | IP Logged
Beautifully written, Rae!! Clap

Loved it!!.. esp the end parts.. how he noticed her own jewellery & him doubting himself. I like this side of ASR!! hehe.. btw, great song choice!

Well-done!! Thumbs Up

Sorry for the late reply, this week has been too hectic for my liking.. >_<

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 4:31pm | IP Logged
What an absolutely lovely, sweet, wonderful OS.
You know, that movie was airing here yesterday and I watched that song too. That same line "Hai roop mein itna sadapan..." and it reminded me of Arnav and Khushi. I thought o myself, with her Dabba service and her child tutoring, how can he still accuse her of being a golddigger?
He really needs to start using his head

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 4:32pm | IP Logged
beautifully written. 

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 4:47pm | IP Logged
It was so good! I loved it! Maybe my reading speed is weird, but it was really cool how, at my reading speed, the lyrics of the song lined up to where I was in the story. I'm totally going to go check out your other works now!

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 12:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by farfar319

Loved it. I love it whenn Arnav realizes how much he misses all the crazy that is Khushi and how much he's used to it. 

Thank You! :)

I am glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by shona-li

When the 'Arnav-starts-thinking-with-his-brain' track is on, I would hope this plays out! *sigh* wishful thinking I guess. Lovely fic :)

Awww! Thank You! :)

I want those days to come soon too! 
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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Harshiti4Lyf

Simplicity is true beauty, well that's what I go by!!!

And this OS is just that, defining Khushi simple yet exquisite beauty!!!

Loved the song and well it coordinated with Arnav noticing Khushi every simple behavior and gesture!!

Truly a beautiful and thoughtful OS dear, excellent work!!!

Awww! Thank You so much! :)

Glad you enjoyed it! :)

Originally posted by tina_1234

amazin os

Thank You! :)

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 2:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dumas

beautiful os well written loved how you described his feeling and his ways of thing about her and his realization about he might be wrong loved it thanks for the pm

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it. 

Originally posted by yusam

OHH WOWW.. I LOVED THE SONG CHOSEN N HIS DETAILING FOR EACH N EVRYTHNG.. IT WAS BEAUTIFUL ... U SHUD CONTINUE THIS... THNX FOR THE PM... :)

Thank You so much! :)

But I think this is going to remain an OS only... :)

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