Posted: 09 April 2012 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Shobz.TaAnu-
Can I res and comment ??
I mean...I know I cant but I want to...Mujhe kuch nahi soojh raha madam...And I dont want to say the usual thing like woow amazing update and so on...But I guess I'll just continue and write whatever I feel like OK ??So if I write something werd no blaming me
Well first of all I loved the song you used...And Im happy you added the song..But Im so stupid you had to..The OS is based on the song...And seriously this song fits yesterday's epi so muchAnd the way you describe Khushi as a child and a woman for whom any man would fall is so correct. I guess many dont notice her maturity when she handles heart-breaking situations but Im glad I have someone who gets it tooo...And Arnav the way he missed her, the way he understands that he does get engulfed in the brightness of hers, her little things that make this smile come up on his face unknowingly...Well I loved this...And finally how Khushi starts feeling uncomfortable around him, the sudden abruptness to everything around once he enters and how much it hurts him to not see much of her to hear her or her hear him.
And well I loved the ending...How he realises that what he accuses her of and the way she behaves are total opposites, and yet she doesn't complain no demands or expectations for keeping her mouth shut as he would have expected out of a *gold digger*...And how this one realisation hurts him...Well you did write just one line, but it sort of made me ache with pain or I kind of understood Arnav for that one moment...In short I love this OS...its a nice one and also its from Arnav's POV which I think is rare from you..Ok no offence but I guess you write more from Khushi's POV its just an observation so gussa mat ho jaana...And I loved how you inferred his thoughts throughout...Grreat man...I so love you...You are an amazing reader and an even more amazing friend !
PS: deal yaad haina ?? no mention of thank you anywhere in the comment...varna I hope you rem.And Im gonna be reminding you till you get out of your thank you habbit !! So till then you can give me jhappis and pappis tooocause here goes my present a pappi *kisses in a FRIENDLY way* And jaddu ki jhappi
Shobu, my friend, you are too kind! Just too kind! A MASSIVE hug for you for being such an awesome and integrated reader and a brilliant and supportive friend!
And if this is weird...Arnav aint hot and we both know THAT aint true! ;) :D
Coming to your analysis of the story - GREAT JOB! You got everything that I left between the words...I just feel awesome I have readers like you! :)
And I think you are right...I write more from Khushi's POV in the sense of take her side...but I think it was okay okay balanced in Hamesha and Ab Main...what do you think?
Again, HUG! :D :)