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Chaand Sitaare... ArHi OS (Page 11)

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 5:41pm | IP Logged
This is so beautiful! So simple, yet sooo wonderfully beautiful! Arnav's feelings, his thoughts, and the way you perfectly captured the essence of Khushi, her childish charm and her womanly sensuality...I felt like I was looking at the world through Arnav's eyes, literally...and the ending- sigh, when will I get to see that day when he starts using his head again? 

Amazing:) 

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 5:47pm | IP Logged
Your story is amazing! I loved the beginning scene. I think it would be great if the CVs put in a scene like that where Khushi is putting on her sindoor and mangalsutra and she feels pain by doing it and Arnav feels bad for it. If I were forced into marriage like her, I would feel a lot pain putting on sindoor for a marriage that is "fake."

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 9:27pm | IP Logged
awww..tht was very sweet...:)

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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 9:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bones88

beautiful OS

Thank You, Bona! :)

Originally posted by MairaKhan1180

So touching Rae! I feel precisely the same way I felt when watching yesterdays episode; I felt Khushi's pain and Arnav's ache. My emotions are still running high! Needless to say how beautiful this OS is, your work speaks for itself:D

Thank You so much, Maira!

I am glad you enjoyed my work. :)
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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 9:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by gkoolans

marvelous piece AngleTeen. wonderful mood, there is definitely a 'wow' factor in this writing... thinking of making it an FF? Wink perhaps
 
Thank You so much!

I dont think this is going any further but I may get inspired... ;) :D

Originally posted by Firebolt

I always love reading your OS! This one was no less... And Arnav jut cant get Khushi out of his system can he? Lover her or hate her he can't ignore her... 

Thank You sooo much! :)

And you are right...he cant ignore Khushi or be ignored by her! ;) :D

Originally posted by SuJaTa790

nice...

Thank You! :)
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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 9:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by subiscs

awww!!!! woww..loved it...he notices every small thing of khushi's !!!! super ya!!!Smile

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by march2011

its just very touching..can feel the deseperation of both parties and their hurt too...

Thank You so much! :) 

Glad you could connect with my writing. 

Originally posted by fan145

it is nice ...do tell me the  second part is coming

Thank You! :)

I think its an OS only...but I may get inspired again for all I know. :)
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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by greenarrow

Beautiful...

Thank You! :)

Originally posted by ss374

I just loved how Arnav missed Khushi yesterday!!!

It showed that he is so much in love with her...and he knows that...but now he wants to ignore that feeling b/c he thinks she has betrayed him!!!

Loved the OS!!

Love you style of writing!!!

Every emotion was so true!!


Thank You so much! 

I loved it so much that I wrote an OS on it! ;) :D

Originally posted by samiya.tas

Mindblowing... loved it... you portrayed Arnav's behavior so well

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it. 


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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sun_shine_girl

Rae, what a perfect choice of songs!
Lovely!
You have woven this song so beautifully in your story..
Arnav is slowly realizing the truth. 

Thank You so much! :)

I am glad you enjoyed it! That song just spoke to me! Lol!! 

Originally posted by A...

Fantastic work... Simply awesum!!!

Thank You so much! :)

Originally posted by kookie2020

 Simply Wow.. dear girl u have just said it all in your OS..i just hope u will turn it into a SS i guess because i am bloody greedy and i want more.


Awww! I am sorry but for right now I think it shall remain an OS...have another FF to complete or the readers there will go very angry! Lol!

But dunno...maybe inspiration shall dawn on me for this one! ;) :D

Thank You so much though for your kind comments! :)


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