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It was so good! I loved it! Maybe my reading speed is weird, but it was really cool how, at my reading speed, the lyrics of the song lined up to where I was in the story. I'm totally going to go check out your other works now!
Originally posted by: farfar319Loved it. I love it whenn Arnav realizes how much he misses all the crazy that is Khushi and how much he's used to it.
Originally posted by: shona-liWhen the 'Arnav-starts-thinking-with-his-brain' track is on, I would hope this plays out! *sigh* wishful thinking I guess. Lovely fic :)
Originally posted by: Harshiti4LyfSimplicity is true beauty, well that's what I go by!!!
And this OS is just that, defining Khushi simple yet exquisite beauty!!!Loved the song and well it coordinated with Arnav noticing Khushi every simple behavior and gesture!!Truly a beautiful and thoughtful OS dear, excellent work!!!
Originally posted by: tina_1234amazin os
Originally posted by: dumasbeautiful os well written loved how you described his feeling and his ways of thing about her and his realization about he might be wrong loved it thanks for the pm
Originally posted by: yusamOHH WOWW.. I LOVED THE SONG CHOSEN N HIS DETAILING FOR EACH N EVRYTHNG.. IT WAS BEAUTIFUL ... U SHUD CONTINUE THIS... THNX FOR THE PM... :)
Originally posted by: Shruti_PWow Rae
It was so beautiful
Reading it once again the song is so apt here
Originally posted by: aditi07brilliantly written...Superb OS👏👏
loved the way u hv shown arnav's gradual realization...him noticing every little about khushi...him feeling lonely & alone without her😳...awesome one!! really hope in show too they show a gradual movement!
Originally posted by: InkedBeautiful layers of realization for Arnav shown in your work.
Also speaks to how certain people wrap themselves around our heart and we fail to realize until they become silent. You capture that.The bit where she winces while brushing her hair was really well-written---his response to wanting to eliminate everything that disturbed her even if it was her own hair.Made me smile.
Originally posted by: .Saraa.loved it..well written
Originally posted by: lena07loved it rae 🤗
well written...
i like this part very much aaj mausam hai suhana,kapre dhonay ka hai bahaana😆😍
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Originally posted by: flowers4uexcellent update ...beautifully written ... keep on writtting
Originally posted by: -bansi-This was simple n beautiful...
Beautifully penned down...!!
Loved it...!!
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