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Posted: 12 years ago

This is so beautiful! So simple, yet sooo wonderfully beautiful! Arnav's feelings, his thoughts, and the way you perfectly captured the essence of Khushi, her childish charm and her womanly sensuality...I felt like I was looking at the world through Arnav's eyes, literally...and the ending- sigh, when will I get to see that day when he starts using his head again?

Amazing:)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Your story is amazing! I loved the beginning scene. I think it would be great if the CVs put in a scene like that where Khushi is putting on her sindoor and mangalsutra and she feels pain by doing it and Arnav feels bad for it. If I were forced into marriage like her, I would feel a lot pain putting on sindoor for a marriage that is "fake."

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Posted: 12 years ago

awww..tht was very sweet...:)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bones88
beautiful OS

Thank You, Bona! :)

Originally posted by: MairaKhan1180
So touching Rae! I feel precisely the same way I felt when watching yesterdays episode; I felt Khushi's pain and Arnav's ache. My emotions are still running high! Needless to say how beautiful this OS is, your work speaks for itself:D

Thank You so much, Maira!

I am glad you enjoyed my work. :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gkoolans
marvelous piece AngleTeen. wonderful mood, there is definitely a 'wow' factor in this writing... thinking of making it an FF? 😉 perhaps

Thank You so much!

I dont think this is going any further but I may get inspired... ;) :D

Originally posted by: Firebolt
I always love reading your OS! This one was no less... And Arnav jut cant get Khushi out of his system can he? Lover her or hate her he can't ignore her...

Thank You sooo much! :)

And you are right...he cant ignore Khushi or be ignored by her! ;) :D

Originally posted by: SuJaTa790
nice...

Thank You! :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: subiscs
awww!!!! woww..loved it...he notices every small thing of khushi's !!!! super ya!!!😊

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: march2011
its just very touching..can feel the deseperation of both parties and their hurt too...

Thank You so much! :)

Glad you could connect with my writing.

Originally posted by: fan145
it is nice ...do tell me the second part is coming

Thank You! :)

I think its an OS only...but I may get inspired again for all I know. :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: greenarrow
Beautiful...

Thank You! :)

Originally posted by: ss374
I just loved how Arnav missed Khushi yesterday!!!

It showed that he is so much in love with her...and he knows that...but now he wants to ignore that feeling b/c he thinks she has betrayed him!!!

Loved the OS!!

Love you style of writing!!!

Every emotion was so true!!

Thank You so much!

I loved it so much that I wrote an OS on it! ;) :D

Originally posted by: samiya.tas
Mindblowing... loved it... you portrayed Arnav's behavior so well

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it.

Edited by AngelTeen - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_shine_girl
Rae, what a perfect choice of songs!
Lovely!
You have woven this song so beautifully in your story..
Arnav is slowly realizing the truth.

Thank You so much! :)

I am glad you enjoyed it! That song just spoke to me! Lol!!

Originally posted by: A...
Fantastic work... Simply awesum!!!

Thank You so much! :)

Originally posted by: kookie2020
Simply Wow.. dear girl u have just said it all in your OS..i just hope u will turn it into a SS i guess because i am bloody greedy and i want more.

Awww! I am sorry but for right now I think it shall remain an OS...have another FF to complete or the readers there will go very angry! Lol!

But dunno...maybe inspiration shall dawn on me for this one! ;) :D

Thank You so much though for your kind comments! :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: indy12
wow what a beautiful realization potrayal by Arnav! loved it!

Thank You! :)

Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: Chocoangel
beautiful..

Thank You! :)

Originally posted by: appy_12
Beautiful!! This was so good, and you reminded me of that song. I'm listening to it right now! :)

God, so wish Arnav in the show could think like your Arnav!

Thank You!! :)

Awww! I am sure he will soon! :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ashna27
This was sooo beautifully written...and you reminded me of how much i used to love this song :)

Thank You! :)

I am glad you feel that way. :)

And it is a beautiful song.

Originally posted by: mjht4everr
it was really nice
n the song is my favourite so chaar chand lag gaye os par
well done dear😊

Thank You so much! :)

I am glad I didnt let down your favourite song. :)

Originally posted by: Maddy1270
a beautiful piece of writing... at least here asr doesn't have blinders on and, as arnav, has noticed the tiniest things about khushi, besides yearning for her... khushi's beauty lies in her simplicity and not in the expensive jewellery presented to her, thank god arnav realised that

Exactly! :)

Thank You so much! :)

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