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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 10:39pm | IP Logged

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-_-harsh42 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
That was so simple, yet so elegant and beautiful, Rae. I loved how Arnav was noticing even the smallest of Khushi's gestures...

Thanks for the pm... :) <3

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -_-harsh42

That was so simple, yet so elegant and beautiful, Rae. I loved how Arnav was noticing even the smallest of Khushi's gestures...

Thanks for the pm... :) <3

Harshu, Thank You! :)

But I think there is something wrong with this...not to sound like a stuck up...but so many views, so little likes and just one comment?! O.o :p


Edited by AngelTeen - 06 April 2012 at 11:10pm
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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
u said it all... Arnav's gradual realization of Khushi's innocence.. the way he is puzzled at her behavior and even after all this he cant stop loving her,,, him marveling at her childlike innocence,,,her carefree attitude.. n then the song that added beauty to the entire os
awesome

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
awww..tht was soo sweet & beautifully written . Loved the way Arnav silently admired her and rmbrs the smallest details.Day Dreaming
Fabulous piece of work..it was a pleasure reading it. :)

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
Fantastic OS!Loved how u co-ordinated the lyrics of the song with the story!Clap
 
M a fan of ur writing yaar,u write awesome stuff!

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
Rae I read this without seeing the PM Honest judgement ; D -It drew me somehow and it didn't disappoint.Just a single word-WOW! I am on my phone so can't quote lines but will do so later.It is just so tremendously heart-clutching that you feel sad -WHY oh why does this happen to two beautiful people in love? You penned it so beautifully I am spellbound-reference to yellow,the sunshine in his life Brilliant!EmbarrassedBest of both worlds-indeed she is a child and a woman at the same time!Loved how you portrayed that she isn't a gold digger.Love how he smiles despite everything.Just beauutifulLOL

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
simple but nice.i loved it

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