okay guyz this is ma first go at writing a fan fic so plz b honest and comment 😊 well here goes:
scene:walia house during da party jigyasa has jus annouced da jai iz gunna b a dad, jai lookz as though he iz gunna faint, bani has tearz in her eyes,every1 else is shocked (except ranveer roshni has gone ) every1 clapz and congratulates jai and bani as they leave. every1 has gone only the family memberz, piya nd pushkar nd family (imagine jai forgiven dem) o nd sonali is dere (she jus came back 4rm wereva she woz) nd mohan. every1 iz quite jai now has a changed expersion (one like he gunna kill jigyasa,ranveer nd bani ) bani is quietly standing with tears trickling down her cheekz
Jai:- wat kind of joke is dis jigyasa?
jigyasa:- im nt lyin jai every1 in this house knows dat bani is pregnant da report seyz so.
jai:- thatz nt possible unless..... (realised da bani has been bewafaa)
ranveer :- ( in da most remosreful tone he cud do 2 try nd mask his happiness🤢) mamaji we r tellin u the truth mami iz a characterless women and is a stigma on wommen hood (nd blah blah blah seyin bad stuff about bani 😭😭)
bani:- (lukz up wid tearz in her eyes chokin on her tearz she sez wid as much strength as she can) plz mr walia...... trust me i havent done anything wrong and.....
jai:- just shut up bani i thort u wud have atleast thort about my prestige in society nd if u were that much in love wid dat man u cud have told me i wud have personally gt u 2 married buh u decided u cudnt have waited much longer
bani:- buh i didnt..... i wud never..cuz i....
jai:-jus tell me hu the man iz nd ill c wat i can do cuz i dnt have ney strength in me 2 fite okay i no longer feel as though i can trust u 2 b my friend, i jus want u 3 sisterz out of my life
sonali:- (calmly) itz not neccessaary 2 tlk 2 her bout this matter she wnt sey, (turns 2 bani in an angry manner) i thort u were a campasionate women hu thort of otherz nd nt bout herself u. i guess i made a wrong judge of character.
jai:-sonali jus tell me u cant change her no1 can
sonali:- his name is PUSHKAR SHUKLA
every1 is shocked (including bani nd pushkar) pia iz jus like i h8 u 2
i will continue after, tell me if u guyz like it so i can continue!!!😊
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