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Posted: 02 May 2012 at 6:31pm | IP Logged

wow loved this part..i hope both baby and preeto will be saved...but have to keep reading to find out Wink...thank you.Tongue

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Posted: 03 May 2012 at 2:20am | IP Logged
Wow this is nice but sad at the same time. Please let Preeto and the baby be ok.  I read this with tears in my eyes especially the last bit.

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Posted: 03 May 2012 at 7:18am | IP Logged
Baby or preeto hmmm tough decision

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Posted: 03 May 2012 at 4:09pm | IP Logged

The doctor tells Rajbeer that only the baby or Preeto can be saved. Meeta comes behind Rajbeer and says- Mere baat maano toh bache ko bachao. Rajbeer is all broken, - doctor ap please Preeto ko bachaeya. The doctor- are u sure

Rajbeer- waise beti thi na

Doctor nods and then leaves.

20 MINUTES LATER'.

Everyone hears a crying of a baby. Rajbeer forgets all his pain and stands up from his chair. Doctor comes out and hands the baby over to Rajbeer.

Rajbeer ' apne kaha tha ke sirf maa yah bacha bachaeya ja sakta hai.

Doctor- issa bhaut cases mein nahi hota lekin maa aur bacha donu safe hai.

Doctor smiles and leaves.

PREETO'S ROOM IN THE HOSPITAL'.

Preeto is lying on the bed when Rajbeer enters with their baby girl in his hands. The Dhillons and Ahluwalias are waiting outside since only one person is allowed in.

Preeto sits up and Rajbeer comes and sits beside her.  He shows her the baby. Preeto takes their baby and holds her in her hands for the first time.

Rajbeer- kaise hai humare pyar ki nishani.

Preeto kisses the baby's forehead.

Preeto- naam kya rakhe.

Rajbeer- I don't know. Maa tum ho nam bhi tum sochu. Aur mein apne beti ko bhaut lad karonga.

Preeto thinks for a while- oh Ichha nam kaisa rahega.

Rajbeer takes the baby in his hands- bhaut pyara nam hai. Ichha bilkul apne papa jaise hogi.

Preeto- oh hello. Apke jaise ek ko toh thek se samhal nahi pati, ek aur hoga toh phir mera kya hoga, yeh toh rab hi jaane.

Rajbeer- jo bhi ho, mein apni ekloti beti ko bhaut pyaar karonga aur lad bhi.

Preeto- ha toh phir jab mein use daato tab ap use bachae. No thanx.

Rajbeer- tum mere beti ko datogi kyun aur mere beti koi sharat nahi karegi.

Preeto- accha toh phir jab Ichha mujhe pareshan karegi na toh phir shaza bhi apko milegi na

Rajbeer- tum Ichha ko khabhi nahi datugi.

Preeto- apse matlab, mein uske maa hun. Usse dat sakte hon.

Rajbeer- toh phir mein bhi uska papa hon.

Preeto- toh mein 9 months ka use apne kok mein rakha hai.

Rajbeer- oh listen, baby lane ke liye jo karna padta hai na us mein mere bina namumkin tha.

Preeto and Rajbeer both laugh and Rajbeer hugs both Preeto and Ichha.

 

RAJPREET HOME'

It is late at night Preeto was singing a lullaby to Ichha when Rajbeer was in the washroom taking a shower. When Rajbeer came out, he saw that Ichha was almost asleep. Finally Ichha fell asleep and then Preeto got up and gently placed her in her crib. As soon as Preeto put Ichha in her crib, Rajbeer grabbed her by the arm and turned her. Rajbeer- ab toh Ichha so gae. (looks at Ichha) Sorry Ichha lekin ab Papa Mummy ko pyaar karengay.

He picked Preeto in his arms and then placed her on the bed and they made love.

 

THE END!!!!



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Posted: 03 May 2012 at 5:22pm | IP Logged

nice to see both mom and baby were ok...your ending this one Cry... but wow it was amazing felt like I was in journey with rajbeer-preeto...really nicely written...thank soo muchTongue..Looking forward to reading the other two...

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Posted: 04 May 2012 at 3:44am | IP Logged
It was nicely written.  It was nice that both PReeto and Iccha was safe and well.  I totally love all your FFs Sana. 

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Posted: 04 May 2012 at 4:36pm | IP Logged
Thank u everyone

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Posted: 05 May 2012 at 5:50am | IP Logged
Superb story and beautifully written...Continue writing pls...

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