Sawaare Sabke Sapne Preeto

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Posted: 11 years ago
2 DAYS LATER...
Preeto was at home cleaning the house. He was gone to camp. She was wearing a green and torqouis suit. At about 6 pm, the door bell rang. Preeto rushed to the door as she usually does cuz she knew that it was Rajbeer. When she opened the door.
 
Rajbeer went upstairs to change withoust saying anything, then he came downstairs where Preeto had the dinner all ready. He sat down in his usual spot and then Preeto started serving him. Rajbeer w
Preeto sat in a chair beside Rajbeer. Rajbeer- aaj ke din kya hua tha yeh tumhe yad hai Preeto.
Preeto- kya hua tha.
Rajbeer- kuch nahi
He continues eating his food. After Rajbeer finishes Preeto starts clearing the dining table. Later at night, Preeto is wearing her orange night suit. She comes out of the washroom and sees Rajbeer sitting on the bed. Preeto comes and sits on the bed beside Rajbeer.
Rajbeer looks at her- tumhe sach mein yad nahi hai.
Preeto- sach mein yad nahi, please batao na kya hai aaj.
Rajbeer- aaj se thek ek sal pehle hum donu mile the.
Preeto- hey raba yeh kaise bhol gaye mein.
She looks over to the window and looks at the stars. Rajbeer gets up and walks behind. Preeto feels a necklace around her neck. She looks at it, it is a golden necklace with a heart on it. Preeto smiles and Rajbeer wrapps his arms around and resting his head on her shoulder.
Rajbeer- i love u
Preeto- i love u 2 lekin meine toh apko koi gift bhi nahi diya.
Rajbeer- de sakte hona.
Preeto turns around and now they are facing each other. Preeto- kya
Rajbeer has a naughty smile- ek chota sa, pyaara sa, cute sa baby aur aagar tumne mujhe woh de diya toh phir mein tumse kuch nahi mangonga.
Preeto smiles. Preeto- uske liye toh soch na badega.
She then goes over to the bed. Rajbeer sits on the bed- thek hai tum sochu aur ek baby ko janam dene ke liye jo karte hai na woh sab mein karta hon tumhare saath.
He takes her hand and pulls her down so she is sitting in his lap. Preeto- Rajbeer please ja ne dona.
Rajbeer nuzzles her hair- Waise tumhe yad hai jab hum mile tab meine kya pehna tha.
Preeto thinks for a while- oh yad aya. Ap ne black kapde pehene the.
Rajbeer- good, ab tumne kya pehena tha.
Preeto thinks again and then gives up- yad nahi
Rajbeer- mujhe yad hai, blue and yellow salwar kamez. Blue dupatta aur kamez, Yellow salwar ke saath.
Preeto is now facing Rajbeer, wraps her arms around Rajbeer's neck- accha mujhe nahi patta tha ke mere fauji ko itna sab yad rehta hai.
Rajbeer was kissing her neck by that time, they lean back and they are now lying on the bed. Rajbeer starts kissing Preeto. The night fades.
 
----Another leap to happen.----------------
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Sana. Your imigination of romantic scenes is just wow.  You actually can see these unfolding.  πŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago

rajbeer-preeto's baby on the way πŸ˜›..thank you...
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Posted: 11 years ago

5 MONTHS LATER...

Rajbeer comes home at 6 pm as he usually does and Preeto as usual rushes to open the door. Rajbeer goes upstairs and changes his clothes, Preeto has the  dinner ready. Suddenly while serving Rajbeer, Preeto feels that she needs to vomit. She stops serving and rushes to the washroom. Rajbeer notices that but, thinks that she probably eat something.
 
Bedroom at 10 pm...
 
Preeto was changed in her night clothes and Rajbeer was working on a file. Then Preeto heads to the washroom to vomit again. Rajbeer sees that too and gets tensed. When Preeto comes out of the  washroom, and Rajbeer starts cuddling her from the back
Rajbeer- kya hua. Ulti kyun kar rahe ho?
Preeto smiles- apko kya lagta hai.
Rajbeer- bhaut saari reasons ho sakte hain.
Preeto- lekin apko kyunsa lagta hai.
Rajbeer- mujhe lagta hai ke tumne kuch kha liya hoga.
Preeto turns around and they are now face to face. Preeto- bhodhu ke bhodhu hi raho gay na.
Rajbeer- lekin hua kya
Preeto signals him to come close to her, which he does. Preeto wispers in his ear- mein pregnant hon.
Rajbeer- really r u sure
Preeto- test kiya tha.
Rajbeer smiles then picks her up and then spins her.
Preeto- Rajbeer please nikey utaro
Rajbeer- nahi
Preeto- please mujhe chakar a rahe hai
Rajbeer stops spinning her and then walks towards the bed and places her gently on the bed.
After Rajbeer finishes his work he goes up to Preeto, who is sleeping because its late at night. Rajbeer puts his ear on her stomache. He listens for a while- accha papa bhi tumhe bhaut miss kar rahe hain.
Preeto wakes up to see Rajbeer walking to someone.
Preeto- kise baat kar rahe ho?
Rajbeer- tumse nahi apne beti se baat kar raha hon.
Preeto- kya apko kaise patta beti hai yeh betta. Itne jaldi thodi patta chalta hai.
Rajbeer- mera baby hai sabse pehle apne papa se baat karegi.
Preeto- again betta hua toh.
Rajbeer- toh bhi itna pyaar karonga. Lekin tum dekh lena betti bhi hogi.
 
9 MONTHS LATER...
Hospital
Rajbeer is very tensed about Preeto and the baby. Bj somehow let Ishmeet and Meeta come to the hospital. Pankaj was at work, Dhruv was at the hospital. All the sister were home while bj papaji were at the hospital. Ishmeet now had a son named Sonam, and Meeta had a baby girl named Nikita. Nikita and Sonam were at the hospital with them. The doctor came out of the operation theater.
Doctor- Patient ka patti kyun hai.
Rajbeer- mein hon
Doctor- dekhiye baby ke delivery mein complications hai. Hum maa aur bache mein se isse ek ko bacha sakte hai. Agar maa ko bachaya toh phir baby jaega aur woh phir khabhi maa nahi ban paege. Lekin baby ko bachaya toh phir maa ko nahi bacha paengay. Decision is yours.
Rajbeer was soo shocked, he couldn't say anything.
Edited by unknownunknown - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

wow loved this part..i hope both baby and preeto will be saved...but have to keep reading to find out πŸ˜‰...thank you.πŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow this is nice but sad at the same time. Please let Preeto and the baby be ok.  I read this with tears in my eyes especially the last bit.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Baby or preeto hmmm tough decision
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The doctor tells Rajbeer that only the baby or Preeto can be saved. Meeta comes behind Rajbeer and says- Mere baat maano toh bache ko bachao. Rajbeer is all broken, - doctor ap please Preeto ko bachaeya. The doctor- are u sure

Rajbeer- waise beti thi na

Doctor nods and then leaves.

20 MINUTES LATER'.

Everyone hears a crying of a baby. Rajbeer forgets all his pain and stands up from his chair. Doctor comes out and hands the baby over to Rajbeer.

Rajbeer ' apne kaha tha ke sirf maa yah bacha bachaeya ja sakta hai.

Doctor- issa bhaut cases mein nahi hota lekin maa aur bacha donu safe hai.

Doctor smiles and leaves.

PREETO'S ROOM IN THE HOSPITAL'.

Preeto is lying on the bed when Rajbeer enters with their baby girl in his hands. The Dhillons and Ahluwalias are waiting outside since only one person is allowed in.

Preeto sits up and Rajbeer comes and sits beside her.  He shows her the baby. Preeto takes their baby and holds her in her hands for the first time.

Rajbeer- kaise hai humare pyar ki nishani.

Preeto kisses the baby's forehead.

Preeto- naam kya rakhe.

Rajbeer- I don't know. Maa tum ho nam bhi tum sochu. Aur mein apne beti ko bhaut lad karonga.

Preeto thinks for a while- oh Ichha nam kaisa rahega.

Rajbeer takes the baby in his hands- bhaut pyara nam hai. Ichha bilkul apne papa jaise hogi.

Preeto- oh hello. Apke jaise ek ko toh thek se samhal nahi pati, ek aur hoga toh phir mera kya hoga, yeh toh rab hi jaane.

Rajbeer- jo bhi ho, mein apni ekloti beti ko bhaut pyaar karonga aur lad bhi.

Preeto- ha toh phir jab mein use daato tab ap use bachae. No thanx.

Rajbeer- tum mere beti ko datogi kyun aur mere beti koi sharat nahi karegi.

Preeto- accha toh phir jab Ichha mujhe pareshan karegi na toh phir shaza bhi apko milegi na

Rajbeer- tum Ichha ko khabhi nahi datugi.

Preeto- apse matlab, mein uske maa hun. Usse dat sakte hon.

Rajbeer- toh phir mein bhi uska papa hon.

Preeto- toh mein 9 months ka use apne kok mein rakha hai.

Rajbeer- oh listen, baby lane ke liye jo karna padta hai na us mein mere bina namumkin tha.

Preeto and Rajbeer both laugh and Rajbeer hugs both Preeto and Ichha.

 

RAJPREET HOME'

It is late at night Preeto was singing a lullaby to Ichha when Rajbeer was in the washroom taking a shower. When Rajbeer came out, he saw that Ichha was almost asleep. Finally Ichha fell asleep and then Preeto got up and gently placed her in her crib. As soon as Preeto put Ichha in her crib, Rajbeer grabbed her by the arm and turned her. Rajbeer- ab toh Ichha so gae. (looks at Ichha) Sorry Ichha lekin ab Papa Mummy ko pyaar karengay.

He picked Preeto in his arms and then placed her on the bed and they made love.

 

THE END!!!!

Edited by unknownunknown - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

nice to see both mom and baby were ok...your ending this one 😭... but wow it was amazing felt like I was in journey with rajbeer-preeto...really nicely written...thank soo muchπŸ˜›..Looking forward to reading the other two...
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was nicely written.  It was nice that both PReeto and Iccha was safe and well.  I totally love all your FFs Sana.