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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 3:18pm | IP Logged

CrySome one needs to shoe me offOuch

Hullo ji I am backEmbarrassed...I am back...HugFirst of all a huge thanks for reading and lubbing my stories and giving me ur precious feedbacksEmbarrassedThe warmth of  of the readers always motivates me to  write something more...Hug

No no mojris pleaseCry but with MKKDH and Ankahee almost coming to an end within a week..Cry.I just could not resist but put thisOuch..I do not know whether there will be enuf readers left to read this after EDT ends or if someone would like me to continue..ConfusedBut I am gonna listen to my heart and put this on...Hope I get ur support and lubb as always...Hug

SO the concept of this FF is based on ..this...Please do play it once to get a feel of the FF...Embarrassed


So Here I present to you New FF Chal..Come with me..

"Life can give us some wonderful surprises ...Life is always so difficult..But then who knows what lies in your destiny..Life is about unexpected twists and turns...It's essence withers away with predicatablity...Once in a while life gives you a chance to live your life to the fullest..Go grab that chance..."

"Kabhi kuch aisa kiya hai tune jo duniya ki nazron mein galat ho ,tere liye bhi bilkul galat ho..Phir bhi use karne ka ji karata ho...?",He said with a strange steadfastness and his freaking evil smile  widening an inch every passing second as he winked at her...

"Kya bakwaas hai...jane do mujhe...",She writhed in pain as her wrists almost were squeezed in his strong grip...The dust storm puffed her nostrils and her eyes blinked with a pleading look...

But he knew exactly what she wanted ...



He had nothing to lose ,nothing to gain...His life was that of a vagabond..Until he met her..He found his aim..that was only to love her...

GULAAL a.k.a Nirja

Her life was meant for a purpose..A vow which she was bound to... Her virtue was her honour...Her life was pure ,virtuous and sheer bliss..only until she met him..She forgot she was born with a purpose and just surrendered to his desires...


The story is set in the mystical city of Varanasi also known as Kashi or banaras...Embarrassed

Koi padhega kyaOuchLOL

P.S-A request to all writers in this forum...HugIt has come to notice by many other FF writers in FF forum that  works are being copied and plagiarism is on the roll.And they are  also putting these notes in their works too.So Please do put the following note on your works too.Embarrassed


This work exclusively belongs to me and please refrain from copying .If you like to use my work.Please feel free to ask me first..That would be highly appreciated.This update is meant exclusively for India-forum members only.





Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

chapter 6

Chapter 7

Chapter 8

Chapter 9

Chapter 10-a

chapter 10-b

Edited by manzilmukul - 27 September 2012 at 10:11am

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 3:42pm | IP Logged
cant wait for this one to begin

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 4:52pm | IP Logged
Of course you HAVE to continue Piyu  Hug  I can tell you for myself, the one reason I'll always come back to Gulaal is to read the stories here ... GK are a forever phenomenon! 

And here goes a saying I hold very priceless in my life - even got a stick on magnet made of it for myself ... your intro partly matches it up, if not entirely... 

"I wanted a perfect ending. Now I've learned, the hard way, that some poems don't rhyme, and some stories don't have a clear beginning, middle, and end. Life is about not knowing, having to change, taking the moment and making the best of it, without knowing what's going to happen next. Delicious Ambiguity."  - Gilda Radner.

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 12:40am | IP Logged
Piu,what ShockedCryyou are ending MKKDHCryNo say this isn't true...nahiCry

ok so now that the melodrama is overLOLyay you are starting a new FFDancing.Me so happy and this one looks so interesting.Beautiful posters.Lovely concept.I am sure this too will blow me awayEmbarrassed
so please continue jaldi jaldiBig smile

ps:Don't end MKKDH so soon.Please...I want to see a lot of romance...please...that is my fav FFCry

Piu,yeh le ek badi si jhappi for you and your creative mindHug

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 2:14am | IP Logged
Pehle how come you are breaking your promiseAngry you said MKKDH will be a looong FF and abhi to you have few more chapters to go even to compete with your first one,this is so not doneCry

I am happy and excited that you will be starting new one though and the start looks so intriguing ,Piyu teri stories aur EDT ka kya lena dena hai both have special place in my heart and I will be here to read whatever your brilliant and creative mind comes up with...please bring it on, looking forward to it...

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 2:33am | IP Logged
Yeah bhi koi puchne ki baat hai,continue...ab jaldi kar

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 2:48am | IP Logged
PiuHugI am so happy to see a new story from u,..and the posters definitely conveys that the concept is going to be really differentSmile Waiting forward for the updates..but one minute Piu...that means ED ke baad yahan koi nahin hoga?Cry..Oh no..Piu all ur fans including me will be surely here  to read whatever u write..because we are sure that it will be promising. but yeh Kya MKKDH ka kya hua Disapprove

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 4:19am | IP Logged
Piu...first of all you have to continue this FF Day Dreaming...Saying so how can u finish MKKDH so soon has to be a longgg FF na...dont worry EDT ho ya na ho we all will definitively come n read all your stories...

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