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Road To Redemption Epilouge 21/02/13 (Page 16)

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Chapter 12.
Arnav and Khushi both stared at each intently. And then Khushi broke off her eye contact with him when she heard Aryan say mama kya voh vahi insaan hai jiski photo lekar aap roz soteh hain aur roteh hain'. 'Nahin beta aap choop ho jayeh aur shant ho jayeh Mama hai na aap ki paas' said Khushi trying to console Aryan and at the same time trying to stop him blurting out anything else that she didn't want Arnav to hear. 
 But it was too late Arnav had already heard what the little boy had said. He kept getting closer and closer and Khushi kept moving further back because the look in his eyes terrified her. It terrified her because she knew any minute now he would come up to her and yell the hell out of her for coming back into his life and ruining it. Khushi kept moving back and eventually bumped into Anjali whom said to her 'Areh Khushji kya hua aap theek to hain na'?.  'Jee hum theek hain Di' and then she looked straight ahead back to Arnav and acknowledged that he was still walking towards them. But the sight that she saw when he approached her almost caused her eyes to pop out of their socket.
Arnav bent down in front of the little boy. And what he saw shook him to the core. His saw his own younger self staring back at him. Could it be? Could it be that he was his child. Scrath that he thought. There was no way in hell that kid could not be his. And he knew, he knew for a fact that he would not have to ask Khushi if the kid was his or not. Khushi was not that type of girl. He was the only one that she let get close to her in that way. The little boy standing in front of him looked no more than three years old. That meant that Khushi was pregnant when she had left. She had been alonre with no money, no food and no support and on top of that she had been pregnant. How had she managed to survive he wondered. Why hadn't she told him that she was pregnant he wondered but then he remembered why and his eyes closed as he remembered the flashback of the time when he had told Khushi loud and clearly that she was in no circumstances to sleep anywhere near him and then trap him into staying with her on the basis of her being pregnant. And he had also told her that he would be better of dead than have a kid with her.
Khushi stared at him closely as he inspected the child and thousand emotions ran flashed across his face. But what he did next surprised her even more. He tapped the little boy on the shoulder and then held on to his ears when the little boy turned to look up at him Arnav said 'Sorry tum dargayeh?' Aryan let go of his mum and stood in front of Arnav and nodded his head as if to say  yes. 'Tumhara naam kya hain?' asked Arnav gently. 'Humhara naam hain Aryan Singh Raizada. Aapka naam kya hain?' asked Aryan 'Mera naam?' said Arnav with a smile on his gace after hearing what Aryan's name was said to Aryan 'Mera naam hai Arnav Singh Raizada'. 'hey yeh to mera naam jaisi sound karta hain!' exclaimed Aryan with a excited smile on his face. 'Lekin' said Aryan his face suddenly dropping 'Hum jante hai ghar main aur sab ko kya bhulayeh lekin hum aap ko kya bhulayeh' said Aryan confused.
Khushi who had been quietly watching the encounter between them both suddenly saw Arnav's face fall when Aryan asked him that question.
 
Arnav had gotten thrown off by that question. He did not know how to respond for a second. He did not just want to tell that little boy after three years that he was his father. He had himself just discovered the existence of his son and he was still getting round the idea so how could a little three year old come to terms with it too?
 
Arnav turned back to Aryan and said 'Aap humhain dost bola sakti hain. Kya aap mujhse dosti karoge? asked Arnav and stuck out his hand to shake hands with Aryan. Aryan willingly took his hand and smiling said 'Okay dost. Kya apki paas koyi kiloneh hain? 'Ha hain aap khelna chahtai hain?' asked Arnav 'Haa' said Aryan and so Arnav stood up and looked at Khushi as if asking her permission. She looked at Aryan and said to him 'Zyada badmashi nahin karna Aryan sumjhe? Varna mama gusa hojayenghi'. 'Okay Mama' said Aryan. Khushi saw Arnav smile as she gave him permission indirectly to go play with their child. Then Aryan turned to Arnav and said 'Chalo dost' and then he put his small chubby little hnd into Arnav's and let Arnav lead him into the house to go play with toys leaving behind a tear eyed Khushi.
 
Khushi had thought that her son would only ever meet his father in her dreams, but here they were walking away hand in hand and it tugged away at her heart and the tears flew out of her eyes on their own. All she could do was stand their and watch as her dream became a reality...
 
Okay so I managed to get repititive strain by the end of this chapter. I have updates three chapters in one day so please do not forget to like and commentSmile 
 
 

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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 2:51pm | IP Logged
Amazing thank u so much for so much effort ur brilliant

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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
wow that was g8 Day Dreaming
i read all three chapters in one breath 
couldn't stop 
u have a knack for writing 

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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 3:06pm | IP Logged
Wow. That's Was Aswsome. Khushi's Son Is Just Like His Dad. ASR.
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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 3:08pm | IP Logged
the chapters were jst awesome!!!!!
loved them!!!!
they were jst too good!!!!

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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 3:47pm | IP Logged
Amazing!
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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 4:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cuteheart96

i just CANT wait for the next part.

 
I am lost at words. it reallly pains to see Khushi n Arnav suffer like this
 
for you i have nothing more then this Hug amazing writing style
 
wow thank you so much. Its things like that, that make write more Tongue
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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 5:05pm | IP Logged
OMG just read your FF all in one go & I love it =D Cant wait to see Arnavs & Aryans interaction!

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