You have given a Khushi who without resorting to bitterness has given a second chance to Arnav as well as herself. That it self is like a three pronged spear to pierce his heart. It was in direct contrast to his ways and it was a very nice way to deal with an arrogant fool like ASR!
Very beautiful and emotional story..I loved reading it..read it all in 1 go..the scene where Payal meets Khushi in Shimla had me in tears...that scene stands out...
Arnav did worked his side a lot to redeem himself. Kushi with her insecurity did gave a terrible time to ASR. Payal was the main reason of thier forced marriage same Payal was there in bringing back together.
Considering the non hindi speaker readers f you would have given translations it would have been nice, as some parts of hindi were too long so have to skim read. Edited by kurinji - 9 years ago
I just came across your story and read it in one go. Nice storyline with a lot of emotions on both sides. I very much liked the first few chapters and the Simlah trip! In Shantivan I had the feeling that the story is not going on and that Khushi, even so she already accepted him as her husband - her "God"- she unfortunately is stucked in the past... it was a little confusing for me as a reader to understand her and her emotions! Thanks a lot for giving us the possibility to see Arnav's rependance. I also loved little Aryan very much. The truth is that children are always aware of their parents emotions and can see the hurt or happiness in their parent's eyes! Even when they are only 3 years old... This story has beautifully portraid a child's protectiveness towards his mother! Take care, Chanya.
