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Arshi143 Senior Member

Joined: 02 March 2012
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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
Wow nice weaving story, waiting for the suspense to clear!

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Fazila~ IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 16 July 2007
Posts: 32773

Posted: 12 April 2012 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
HEy..thanks for the she really there??? or what???
I hope she is...n they sort it out their MU soon :))

Good work...ASR will never change, n nor will khushi hehehehhe

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vaselisa Senior Member

Joined: 12 March 2012
Posts: 373

Posted: 13 April 2012 at 12:13am | IP Logged
khushi blabbering...and behaving like khushi..good one!!
thanks for the pm.

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nareshSV IF-Dazzler

Joined: 24 November 2011
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Posted: 13 April 2012 at 12:31am | IP Logged
Come on...Come on...update soon...

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kajal620 Goldie

Joined: 13 December 2011
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Posted: 13 April 2012 at 1:36am | IP Logged
seriously its still like puzzle...i loved the updt

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rkapoor1382 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 11949

Posted: 13 April 2012 at 4:21am | IP Logged

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ashred12 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 April 2012 at 6:22am | IP Logged
read all parts in a go...superb !!! yaar d suspense is killing me !!!
sheun Senior Member

Joined: 18 March 2012
Posts: 505

Posted: 13 April 2012 at 6:38am | IP Logged



Khushi and Arnav are in the car.

















The chauffer is driving the black 2013 BMW 7 series.

Khushi is looking at the car interior and admiring every angle. She looks up and smiles at Arnav.

Both are in the backseat, side by side.


Her hand rests inches apart from his.

Arnav's desire to touch her hand, becomes unbearable.

But he restrains his need, with all he has.

Arnav can smell her perfume and feel her breathing.

When ever Khushi glances out of the window, Arnav instantly steals a look at her.

Hearing her speak, touching her, seeing her reaction and now going for food, in his own car, all still seems a bit hazy.

Arnav talks to himself: "yes, she is here and she is real. No matter what happened and what she went through, she made the effort of coming back to me. I better stop daydreaming and focus on her completely. With a crazy mind like hers, I have to give full concentration.

Some things don't add up. But it will.

I will let her cool down a bit and am 100% sure, after she eats, she will spill the beans, well I hope and pray she does."


Arnav turns around slightly sideways to block Khushi's view of him and very slowly rises up his palm. He puts his left hand on his chest gradually, and tries to make sure whether his heart is beating or not.

Still he feels the last ray of trance remaining last night.




The girl, whom I did so much wrong with, the girl I married giving condition or ruining her sister and her, the girl whom I showed unbelievable  rudeness, made her cry each time she tried to come close, taunted her for each motive, doubted beyond belief, trashed her soul for the rest of her life,




( he feels his heart beat,

His heart is beating all right, it's actually beating jaggedly)



dhak ! dhak !! dhak dhak !!!



Arnav lowers his hand and glances at her face, that is turned towards the window, a slight smile in her face, surprised eyes, looking at the streets and neighborhoods.


How can a person be so beautiful?

How can I be so lucky to know her, come across her?

And how can I be the one to be by her side at this moment?

( Arnav drowns into his own fantasies).






(5 star Indian restaurant in Sydney Harbor)



At the restaurant:

While eating, Arnav keeps on glancing at the wonderful creature sitting in front of him.

Those eyes, that smile, the loving gestures, those supple lips, the bindi on her forehead, her everything keeps him tied up.


She is smiling, looking around, chomping down food and licking her fingers.

She seems pretty fine.

The guests beside them, look at her and nods their head.

Khushi smiles back and says hello.


The dimmed spot light on her makes her skin glow like frost.


Hmm I think I will add spot lights to my bedroom.

Uff what am I thinking?

The idiot man in the black suit just cannot keep his eyes to himself.

His wife is just in front of him, she has her bare shoulders out and the silicon chest is half showing, still he has to look every time he takes a sip from his glass.

What an A**h***! Uff !

Here he goes again.

If Khushi weren't here, he would have been beaten into a dry toast by now.

Hmm there comes another one. Doesn't the waiter and the hotel manager have other things to do? Lurking around her?

The waiter already asked five times, if we needed anything else or not. Send lassis and samosas on the house.


Well, men will be men, all dogs!!!

I cannot take my eyes off her; I don't blame the other men.

But still, if the black suit looks once more, the dinner plate will land on his face. I swear.

What? Again.? Damn it. I will kill that gadhe in grey pants in the opposite table. Did he even look at himself, before looking at her and what? Khushi now is smiling back.


You smile at that thing? That plumped up gulabjamoon wearing pants?



( Ting! Ting!)

Someone is calling. The cell beeps and vibrates on the table.

Khushi looks at it and says "Arnav Ji! It seems like India's number, will you pick up?"


At her words, Arnav's trance and self bashing of the other men comes to a stop.

He smiles and picks his phone up.

Looks at the number and excuses himself from the table and attends to the call:


(Feet's apart from Khushi)

( Call from India)



"Yes Mr Iqbal ! Thanks for the information. Yes, yes I know.

NO, I do not need the ticket number of flight details.

The person you are talking of, is in front of me.  

Yes Khushi is here with me.

When did she arrive?

Oh ok.

So it has only been 2 days today.

Hmm'.thanks for the quick reply.

Also I appreciate your effort.

It was a hasty decision.

OH OK. Economy class.


I know.

No problem.

Just keep an eye on Di and the rest.

And give me minute by minute details of that GUY as I asked to.

Ok bye. Thanks."




" Khushi ! it is ok if I make another call to Di?"

Khushi gets jolted.

She thinks: ( Why is he asking for my permission? Is he feeling ok?)

She smiles and nods her head saying ok.

She thinks:

Arnav JI! You are pretty weird. I never know what you are made of and how you will react.




In the next moment, she speaks up in a higher pitch and requests:

 "ARnav Ji!

Please do not to tell Amma, Buaji about me. I did not tell anyone that I was coming;

They will be shocked and worried.

Let Di know, its ok, I know she is worried and at this state she don't need any sort of tension.

But please let not the others know. I do not wish to make them worried."



"Ok Khushi! I will tell only Di.

You ok with it, right?"


Khushi nods her head again, totally bewildered at his sudden gentleness.



"Hello ! Di !

Sorry to wake you up. I needed to tell you that I asked Aman to make a ticket for Khushi.

I actually needed her signature for the new venture.

I did not tell you, as you would have gotten worried about her coming alone.

I am sorry about asking you to call her before.


Please'I will explain when I come home. Things are very hectic here.

Please Di, try to understand.



Uff Di ! please.

Acha'Ok Di! I will apologize to you when I come back. And I will say it,

YES I missed her and couldn't bear staying away.

Happy to hear this? You are too much Di!

Yes, She managed well.

And now she is with me.

Yes Di . She is here with me.

Uff, Di please do not panic now.

She is fine and eating a Huge Dosa, half her own size. She had 3 samosas, 2 dahi vadas , 2 lassis and I donno what else.

Ok Di ! I will take care of her. Sure.

Please do not worry.

One more thing, Khushi didn't get to tell anyone back home. So please keep this to yourself.

I do not wish to make her family worried. Also please do not tell nani, mama or mamiji and also, please do not share with Jijaji! Please Di !

And please do take care. Keep the guards by your side.


Umm'..How is Jijaji? Where is he now?

'hmm..ok. I will take care of her don't worry.



He makes another call:

"Mr Iqbal!

Its me again.

Make sure he stays put and keep a close eye.

I have asked my sister not to tell him about Khushi.

But she might, I do not trust her to keep secrets from that man.

The man will take any scope he gets to harm my family.

He might get rough or do something stupid after hearing about Khushi.

Please be very alert.

I will divert him soon.

Ok bye."


Khushi is chomping down her dosa and gulping the last glass of Mango lassi.

Arnav stares at her, even after his phone conversation got over.

He stays mesmerized.

In his head he thinks: " How can a tiny, size zero, thin girl like  her, eat so much?

Where does the food go?

The dosa was minimum 2 feet long and she gulped it in less than 20 minutes.



MAN! I do love this girl,

No matter what she is, no matter how crazy she is , I do love her!"

Edited by sheun - 13 April 2012 at 7:20am

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