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FF Turning Tables [Virika] Ch 6 - Pg 24 (Page 8)

aa_mnhs Senior Member
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Posted: 20 April 2012 at 4:10am | IP Logged
brilliant piece of writing! i'm loving the different story line :) wonder why i never came across this. please pm me next time you update.

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Posted: 22 May 2012 at 9:26am | IP Logged
Hey I'm a silent reader but I just live ur ff. pls continue soon!!

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Posted: 22 May 2012 at 10:33am | IP Logged
amazing work...is so wanna know wot went wrong b/w virika...continue soon n pm me plz da next tym!

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Posted: 22 May 2012 at 8:21pm | IP Logged
This was so good. It raised so many questions and doubts in my mind. It made Virika look like the not so perfect couple and that is how it should be. Tell me who is Jia. I am confused.
 
Anyway I loved that they still love each so much. They feel jealous and hurt when someone else is considered in what used to be their right or position in the other's life. Viren was so hurt when he saw Jeevika with no mangalsutra and sindoor. It made me sad also.
 
Another thing I liked was that these two still feel the need to give explanations or clear misunderstandings that the other might have or at least Jeevika does. Would love to read more of it. Pm me.

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Posted: 08 June 2012 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pinky.padda

absolutely brilliant

Thank you :)

Originally posted by peeta02

thanks so much for the PM!! I absolutelyy loved it and am already waiting for the next part... :)

You welcome for the PM and I'm glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by jenna_p

Thanks for the PM...
Amazing...Clap
Cant wait for the next part...update soon...

Thanks Jenna, as always the faithful commenter :P
Hoping the next doesn't disappoint :)
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Posted: 08 June 2012 at 4:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by romanticgurl070

nice 
really loved it
cont plz

Hey thanks, I'm glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by kanishkakaran

awesum!!! i want d nxt part to be really soon!! dis one ws awesum!!Clap

Thanks Kanishka, here's hoping you like the next bit :P

Originally posted by Bhavyareddynel

awesome update... a different angle of virika, pls bring them together as soon as possible and thanks a lot for your PM

Thanks for the comment :)
I like having different angles on the characters so I thought it would be quite cool to see a Virika where there is trouble in paradise and nothing sickly sweet. :)
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Posted: 08 June 2012 at 4:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pallavi_bs

Thanks for m dear
luvly update



Hey, no problem :)

Originally posted by kappa08

awesome loved it, please update soon!!!!Smile

Thank you! :)

Originally posted by tara_211

firstly...plzz do add me in ur PM list...!!

next...both the parts are fab...thnk god i read both of them at one go...else the anxiety after the first part woul hv killed me...though 2nd part din clear everythng off...but definitely gves a better equation...!!!

Amazingly written...cnt wait for the next part :)

Hey Tara, you're added :)

I'm building myself with this, I don't wanna go full speed ahead because then it'd probs be over before it started. Saying that, things won't get much clearer for a while. I hope the relationship is debatable as in where they stand among each other. Apart from that, thank you so much for the comment, I greatly appreciate it :)
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Posted: 08 June 2012 at 4:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rev4eva

I just read both the parts and there were awesome.. Please PM me when you update and love the story alot

Hey Revathi!

Thanks for reading this, I really do appreciate it :)

Originally posted by Amii90

Whoaaa I am hooked! Damn good yaar! I saw that u updated 2nd part but the minute I started reading it, I felt the need to refresh myself by reading part 1 again lol!! So, now I am getting the hang of the story- and I have like billion of ques in my head but ofcourse you will unveil answers to those slowly as story would progress! Waiting for next one :)

Dude! Ahaha, I felt the same about your SS :P I think it makes you just that bit more engrossed in a story is there are loads of loose ends. I dunno, I'm the type of reader that really doesn't like to think ahead because the scenarios I come up with would never fit with the storytellers version.

Ah, I guess you going back to re-read the first bit was most probably because of the delay in updating, my bad :L I'm glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by aa_mnhs

brilliant piece of writing! i'm loving the different story line :) wonder why i never came across this. please pm me next time you update.

Hey!

Thanks for reading, really appreciate that and don't worry, have you on my PM list :)

PS: the reason why you've never come across it is because I'm hopeless in updating :P

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