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FF Turning Tables [Virika] Ch 6 - Pg 24 (Page 15)

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 10:50pm | IP Logged
Lovely Update! Jeevika's thoughts are starting to scare me, though. Very beautifully written. Continue soon, and please PM me.

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plssscontinue it soon... i want to know what happened between viren and jeevika

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Hi, my name's Bee and I'm a silent reader, but I absolutley fell in love with this story. Please continue soon, please :)

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plz continue gr8 storyHeart

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 10:28am | IP Logged
To all the regular readers, I did have some updates lined up but with school starting again and overtime at work, really haven't had the time to go through, spell check and post.

And now I just can't be bothered to do any of it at all. I don't watch the show anymore, the magic was lost too long ago for me personally so forgive me, but the best I can do is put the story on hiatus for now.

Thanks for reading so far guys :)


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Thank You for informing. I totally respect your decisions but I do not understand your last paragraph. Could you please leave the already updated posts up? I hope that one day when EHMMBH does get its spark back that you decide to continue. Till then good luck with school and work! You are a beautiful writer! Embarrassed

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Chapter 5 Teaser (Hurt)

She frantically searched for her phone, tipping out the contents of her purse upon the polished marble floor. Sifting through the objects, she found what she had been looking for. Quickly dialling the only number that lay in her vacant heart, she waited desperately as the dialling tone continued.


"...Hello?" She let the breath that she was holding escape as she heard the voice she was yearning to hear. Taking another deep breath, she composed herself, reigning in the myriad of emotions flying around her.


"Viren-ji... Rheya's gone. She's- I can't find her..." She looked around her, her broken voice echoing around the empty hall.


"Jeevika, wha-what do you mean? Where the hell are you and where the hell is my daughter?" She could hear the anxiety and anger laced in his voice, leaving a cold shiver running up her spine.


"She's gone Viren-ji... she's gone..." Her vacant eyes looked around the dimmed hall, barely registering the aggravated calls from the other end of the line.


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"Jeevika! Jeevika, damn it, tell me what's happened!" He screamed into the phone for the fiftieth time, barely expecting an answer from his estranged wife. Pacing around his room, he calmed the rising desire to catapult the phone from his hands to out the window. Inhaling a deep breath, he calmed his nerves slightly. "Jeevika, please... Please just say something."


"Jeevika-ji! Jeevika-ji, you're here. Thank god, I've been looking all over for you. Jeevika-ji?" He could hear a deeper voice in the background, growing in volume. "Jeevika-ji?" He could hear the clattering of her phone against the floor before hearing it being picked up again. "Hello? Who is this?"


Viren took a sigh of relief, finally finding someone who would talk to him. "Viren, Jeevika's husband."


"Viren... it's Rohit. I'm really sorry, Rheya's missing and Jeevika's in some sort of catatonic state. It's like she's in some other world..."



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Teaser was amazing...
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