My story - "Eye Of The Beholder" - Page 3

Will continue this after some time. Edited by visrom - 12 years ago

Edited by gadhadada - 12 years ago

Ravi will read soon and comment. 😃

OMG... What a story... 

Ravi an absolutely  awesome story

you write so well , writer banna tha medicine main kahan phas gaye😆

Thank you so much for your kind words, everyone. Really appreciated, I'm glad you enjoyed it. 😃

@vis - Actually I had just intended for their interaction to be like a sort of mutual understanding and respect. I guess thoda zyada ho gaya. 😆

@Nandini - Yeah... 😆 But medical knowledge does help with a lot of technical details in writing. I do plan to publish something in the future if time permits.

Originally posted by: DemonStar

@vis - Actually I had just intended for their interaction to be like a sort of mutual understanding and respect. I guess thoda zyada ho gaya. 😆 No no...it's perfectly fine. I am more than happy to see him interested in someone other than T. 😉

@Nandini - Yeah... 😆 But medical knowledge does help with a lot of technical details in writing. I do plan to publish something in the future if time permits. Nice to hear this 😃 Ravi...you have to make time for this. Being a doc doesn't mean you shouldn't publish a book. You have it in you and you shouldn't let it go waste

I completed reading your story...hats off to you ravi..👏 such a long story  maintaining suspense and thrill till the end..Its almost  like reading a novel..you have linked all the subplots in story really well at the end..

When I read opening lines of first chapter I felt I am reading half blood prince..😆 It reminded me of the scene where muggle minister is alone in the office thinking about the mishaps happening all over the country..

Great job...👍🏼

Its long story. So will read when I will be completely free. May be next weekend. 😊

really really awesome story...