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Posted: 10 May 2012 at 6:11pm | IP Logged
gr8 story. just caught up with it. 

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Posted: 11 May 2012 at 12:12am | IP Logged
loved the update...just wow...plzzz update the next part soon Day Dreaming

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Posted: 11 May 2012 at 12:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BhartiKhushi909

Amazing...superb...Clap

thanks Bharti...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 11 May 2012 at 12:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suhana.dixit

Hi Suri
Nice part...Smile


thanku so much Suhana..Hug

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Posted: 11 May 2012 at 12:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rsk16

gr8 story. just caught up with it. 


thanku so much..welcome to this short story thread..Smile
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Posted: 11 May 2012 at 1:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by akshi_t

loved the update...just wow...plzzz update the next part soon Day Dreaming

thanku so much..i will surely update soon..Smile

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Posted: 11 May 2012 at 1:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by minizz

Surya,sorry for my late comment.I really enjoyed this chapter.The intimate moment between Uday and Manyata did help us to understand more about their feelings for each other.It was beautifully described.So what is the truth that Uday wants to share with Manyata...even I am eager to know.I loved the flirtatious Uday a lot and bechaari Manyata she is deeply in love with her husband but is unable to give in to her feelings due to Akash.I loved reading her thought process.At least here she is easier to empathise with.Thank you for this wonderful chapter.looking forward to the next one so please update soonBig smile


thanku so much dear..i'am more than happy that you commented...well i just wanted to express Manyata-Uday's growing attraction plus i wanted to give a insight of what they were feeling...more than the shows Manyata, i have tried to sketch her character in such a way where the readers can understand & her & her feelings..well the truth which is going to be out, is surely going to change Uday-Manyata's lives, for good or for the worse only time would tell..WinkWinki will surely update as soon as i can..thanks once again..Smile

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Posted: 11 May 2012 at 1:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Surya.Ravi

Originally posted by -Priya01

Hi Surya amazing update love it ...love how u put in words M is fighting with her inner turmoil while UV is hurt but not showing his feelings rather he is teasing his wifey wow love it love it kash show mein aisa hota Day Dreaming but i guess am day-dreamingLOL but happy it happens in ur FF.
thankooo so much priya..i'am glad you like the way i put forth the emotions.. well actually i want my readers to connect with what i write & i'am glad my writing connects & strikes a chord in all of your hearts..even me in 'ManVeer' dream land & hoping aisa kuch ho hii jaaye..EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed 
Can't wait for the next chapter ...plzzz update soon and thxs for the pm Hug i will surely update as soon as i can...you have a good day..Hug
Hi SuryaHug how are u yaar?
To be honest each time i read ur FF i visualize the scenesBig smile kash tum DEK ki Cv hoti tho manveer scenes would fabulousDay Dreaming God bless u dear Hug

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