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wendy25 Goldie

Joined: 06 January 2012
Posts: 2375

Posted: 09 May 2012 at 6:48am | IP Logged
hi surya,
this time you was very very very late in updating ss.Cry
i have been desperately  waiting for it . even my desperation for your ff crossed the level of the desperation of  despo jLOL. but  wait was worth .SIMPLY LOVELY  all i can say,
i am glad you are not abandoning your ss because i also felt bad when ss and ff writers leave their work in middle leaving their loyal readers hanging in b/w with suspense
that kiss part and bantering over lipstick was so cute and same time it was very hot. i was blushing all the timeEmbarrassedWhy don't donate some of your romantic ideas to SA and team , they needs them. I was so excited for intimate sword fight but look it was full of venegance and not a slightest bit of know what in your ss , i felt UV is very vulnerable to manyata , so can you please make him bit  insensitive arrogant  and that lady killer types . You know that we all love UV in that way.
so slight change for me please as being emotional is very unlike UV .
rest you have a great choice of words dear . you expresses each emotional hurricane of thouights inside them so beautifully.
please from don't delay your ss for long .update soonSmile and thanks for the pm

Edited by wendy25 - 09 May 2012 at 6:48am

Ziva01 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 19 May 2011
Posts: 21117

Posted: 09 May 2012 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Hey Surya hope u r fine...thxs for the pm Hug am busy today i will come back with my comments once i read it Embarrassed 
bye hv a good day Hug
SyedAinah IF-Dazzler

Joined: 09 November 2011
Posts: 4755

Posted: 09 May 2012 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Breaking news ... Finally finally ,the great writer surya ne next part update kiya, waisai badi jaldi update kiya 2,3dayz k baad update karna tha,itni jaldi koi update karta hai kya?,,,,,,,,,,,,well awesome ,fantastic ,amazing part ,pleeejjj babe cont soon,aab firse dair mat karna:):):):)

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RadhapriyaG_01 Senior Member

Joined: 05 September 2011
Posts: 289

Posted: 09 May 2012 at 7:12am | IP Logged
Wow, nice update as usual Surya...

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jyothi_cool IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 16 May 2005
Posts: 13102

Posted: 09 May 2012 at 7:36am | IP Logged
awesome part cont soon

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chitra_rao IF-Rockerz

Joined: 06 June 2009
Posts: 7542

Posted: 09 May 2012 at 7:48am | IP Logged
U take me to Manveer land with every part of your ff, loved it and thanks fro the PM Tongue

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MysticRiver IF-Addictz

Joined: 16 October 2004
Posts: 79062

Posted: 09 May 2012 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by UVLOVER

wowww  Niceee update... :D

keep writinnn.. :D

thanku so much..will certainly keep writing..Smile

sirjee IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 30 January 2006
Posts: 12189

Posted: 09 May 2012 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Surya.Ravi

Originally posted by sirjee

luv u shooo mucchhh...coz finally ur tomorrow has finally come...luv u my baby...

update kar diya..upar blushing...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

i should change my genes...n become a guy...who makes gals blush...hahahahah/...n ur post was was luvlyspecially da kiss...n da nok jhok...really manyata 4get everything in argument wid uday...hahahahahWink

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