Dekha Ek Khwaab

~Hona Tha Pyaar~ManVeerSS~Note Page 57~ - Page 27

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Posted: 12 years ago
ur awesome⭐️
thnx so much for the pmπŸ˜‰
plz continue writing😊
that was too good!!!!!!πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant ... oooh! Loved the kiss ☺️ 
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was another beautiful update πŸ‘... thaks for the PM Surya
And pls continue soon your precap has built a suspense and I am eagerly waiting for what is gonna happen next...?

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awes0me great update surya loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Surya,I have been a silent reader of your SS and other posts.You are doing a great job.loving the SS a lot.looking forward to the next update😊 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Surya πŸ€— kya update hain yaar⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ awesome, amazing love the way u described M needed assurance from her hubby and UV succeeded in convincing his wifey that he needed her and only her☺️ ☺️ hayyeee sachiii mein maar jawaan...what i can say about UV love confession and Manveer kiss...well simply beautiful
 
Thx u yaar for this amazing update ...love it
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Thxs for the pm and update whenever u can i'll wait πŸ˜‰
TC ...Hv a nice week
Love u πŸ€—πŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago

thankooo..😊


This content was originally posted by: janeniroopa

nice update...really really loved itπŸ€—


thanku so much..i'am glad you like the 'ManVeer' story in my style...😳


This content was originally posted by: Arieltabi

That was really beautiful. I love that song.It's 1 of my favs.Pls update the next part soon.thnks 4 the PM.


thanku so much..even i like that song..& i felt it suited the scenario well so i used it..i'll update as soon as i can...😊

This content was originally posted by: Kruths97

Amazing update as always!β­οΈβ­οΈπŸ˜ƒ

Loved it surya!! and thank u for PM!!


thankooo so much for the appreciation..it really means a lot...😳



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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: Arshi.ASR

awsome dear very nice


thankooo so much..😊

This content was originally posted by: -pratyasha-

Loved it.Thanks for the PM


thanks..😊


thank you..😊

This content was originally posted by: Ritika_11

Such a cute and sweet update!😍 thankooo so much..😳

Just love the last bit...☺️ hehe..i knew the readers would love it...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

thank you so much Surya for such a beautiful manveer story!πŸ‘ i'am glad all of you like my writing style...😳
hayee...humare DEK mein bhi aisa kuch ho jaye...😍 even i hope so...πŸ˜ƒ



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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: wendy25

MIND BLOWING SURYA,πŸ‘ thanku..😳

EXCELLENT WORK, go and join DEK cvs team! hehe..i'am blushing at your compliment...😳
LOVE THE WAY YOU EXPRESSES THEIR FEELINGS IN WORDS, i'am glad you like my writing style...πŸ˜ƒ
LAST PART WAS JUST AWESOME😳,  same pinch...
when would you update next part? well i will update the next part as soon as i find time...😊
eagerly waiting for next updateπŸ˜‰ and thanx for pm



This content was originally posted by: dekhaekkhawab

awesome update as always...just awesome...very well written...ur words made me feel the emotions...and thats what i love about ur SS...plz do PM me when u update...πŸ‘πŸΌ


awww...thankoo so much for the compliment..i'am very khush..as a writer i want my readers to relate to what i write...will surely PM you when i update...😊


This content was originally posted by: jyothi_cool

awesome cont soon loved the way udayveer told manyata to live her life the way she wants to live


thanks Jyothi..even i like that bit..i'am glad you liked it too...⭐️


This content was originally posted by: mythical

thanks for the pm. loved it


thankooo so much...😊


This content was originally posted by: Anjalika13

amazing πŸ‘πŸΌ

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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: pritus

Surya hats of to u. You define manveer's emotions their difficulties their relation so beautifully. I wish Uday get back his jungli princess someday. Manveer are trully soulmate. They are incomplete without each other. You are amaging writer. I wish kabhi cvs ke dimag ki batti jale nd aise manvees scene dekhne ko mile. Well great work.thanx for pm. Egarlly waiting for next update.


thankoo so very much..i'am literally blushing with the amount of tareef you have showered on me.. well Udayveer will surely get his junglee Princess, but it would take while..then we would have a sophisticated junglee princess...hehe...i will surely update soon...😊


This content was originally posted by: pri01

Hey Surya πŸ€— hope you are fine and enjoying ur wk-end Thxs for the pm yaar ...am busy today with family so i will come back tomorrow with my comments after reading ...ok yaarπŸ˜‰ Tc Love u πŸ€—


i'am doing good yaar..waiting for Monday, clock to strike 8.30 PM..you take your time & comment..love you too..πŸ€—


This content was originally posted by: adventure_gurl

loved the update yaar!